THE MASTERMIND REVEALED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

INNOCENT GHOST?

YIJUNG'S POV

"I...." gaeul started 

"never mind...never mind," i quickly interferred as i did not want to know 

"yijung...i..."

"gaeul...stop...it's okay, don't answer," i immediately replied 

i saw her head hang low 

i cleared my throat 

"so...umm....the reason i came here is because i need your help...one last time,"

"oh...okay. what is it?" she asked,"

i told her of all the information that i discovered but she didn't seem too surprised 

"did you already know?" i asked as i looked at her expression the entire time 

"uh? uh yeah," she answered 

"okay...well we need to look for this person. this person is the one that kidnapped you," i said as i showed her the picture i found 

"we need to find him," i repeated 

"wait..."gaeul said as she took the picture from my hand

"doesn't he look familiar?" she asked as she had a confused expression

i looked at his face carefully 

"where did we see him?" i asked as his face did indeed look familiar 

"wait...he was the guy in the warehouse,"

"warehouse?"

"remember? the warehouse i was beat..."

i grabbed the picture again

"it is him..." i said 

"okay so the person kidnapped me and was also the person in the warehouse?" gaeul asked 

i nodded 

"wait, i remember that night he was on the phone he said you ordered me to kill him and now you want me to hurt her,"

"so your kidnapper and my killer IS the same person," i clarified 

"okay let's go back to the warehouse to find any DNA, fingerprint, blood..."

"arite let's go," 

and we drove for half an hour and the ride there was queit 

no one spoke 

we both didn't know what to say 

once we arrived, we got out and ran inside 

"look around for anything but don't touch it becuase your print might damage the evidence," gaeul ordered 

gaeul and i searched and searched but we couldn't find anything 

until i spotted a black red small circle 

"gaeul!" i called and she ran beside me as we both kneeled 

"is that blood?" i asked as i pointed out the spot 

"let's find out.." she said and she got a tube out from her pocket and opened it and there was a cue tip and she wiped it across the spot and she sprayed a liquid on the cue tip and suddenly it turned bright red 

"it's blood, we should take some for DNA analysis and we'll find out who it is," she informed and she scraped some of the dry blood and put it in a container and we drove to a hospital and dropped it off there 

and suddenly gaeul was driving 

"where are we going?" i asked 

"F4 lounge. they probably found something too," she said and she made a sharp turn and stopped right in front of the door and she ran out 

"ahhh....crazy driver," i mumbled as her driving skills needed to tone down a bit 

i walked in and found f4 and gaeul surrounding the tv and laptop

"Kim Sang Eun. Age: 32. criminal records: none," woobin reported 

"how did you find him to be the suspect for anything?" gaeul asked 

"we didn't at first but what caught our attention is this he has been the bodygaurd for us and eunchae. He is also the secretary for Cha Goon Hee,"

"but that's not that suspicious,"

"he disappeared during the time you were kidnapped and suddenly reappeared,"

"and we looked through his bank account and he withdrew $500,000,"

"and that $500,000 was given to the orphanage ajhumma," gaeul said 

"exactly,"

"hold on," gaeul said as she recieved a call

"Kang Hee Choon? okay, alright...thank you buh-bye,"

"what is it?" junpyo asked 

"Kang Hee Choon, he is the man that beat me in that warehouse and put me in the hospital, he was also my kidnapper and lastly he is so yi jung's killer," 

"WHAT?!" the 3 boys yelled 

"we...i mean i went back to the warehouse and found blood that belonged to him,"

meanwhile jihoo already put his profile up on the screen 

"Kang Hee Choon. Age: 28. criminal records:2001-eternity and sentenced for murder,"

"wait....look at his employment...bodygaurd for cha eun chae and worked as an engineer,"

"they both have one thing in common....eun chae," woobin pointed out 

i sighed and left the room

GAEUL'S POV

i saw yijung leave but i just brushed that aside 

"this is what i think. Kang Hee Chon because he is younger he did all the dirty work meaning he is the one that used his body and Kang Sang Eun was the brain from the pair and he took care of everything so they wouldn't be caught," i said 

"we need to go to...Discipline Jail," woobin said and we went outside and i looked around but yijung wasn't there 

i just sighed 

we got in our cars and drove to the jail center and we were immediately allowed to eneter because of the almight Gu Jun Pyo sunbae 

and we waited for the murderer in a cold gray room with a white table in the center and i sat on the chair that was closest to the window 

i was a tad nervous because i would be meeting the guy that ruined my life but once the bastard entered the room that feeling left me completely. Once i saw his face i grabbed my head in pain and graoned 

"you okay?" woobin sunbae asked 

"yeah, i guess,"i answered and that Kang Hee Choon chuckled 

i got up and punched him in the face over and over again until woobin and jihoo sunbae pryed  me off of him

the officers put him back to his seats 

"more aggressive than i remember," he mocked and i scoffed 

"i'm surprised you still remember who i am,"

"of course. How can i forget the girl that put me in jail," he said and i grinned 

"that's where you're wrong...you murdered 2 people," i said as i whispered the last part 

"Who? So Yi Jung? you parents?"

i laughed and he soon realized the mistake he made 

"i guess you really are only brawns and not brains mabye that's why Kim Sang Eun didn't end up in jail,"

Kang Hee Choon growled at me 

"you know you can stay longer in jail for 3 more murders; my parents and So yijung. But that's kind of hard considering how you already sentenced for life," i said softly yet aggressively 

he remained silent and i chuckled 

"karma's a huh? ending up in jail because someone ordered you to kill people but now you can recieve a death sentence for 3 more kills and you only recieved $1 million? you should've asked for more...$10 billion? i mean because of $1 million you're stuck in this hell hole for the rest of your life...oh wait 3 more murders...i forgot," i said as i chuckled 

"so your life would end earlier than you wanted," i gauranteed 

again he remained silent 

"so tell me who ordered you kill my parents and yijung and attempted to kill me...come on. you could actually live if you told me, even better i could probably be able to cut off a few years to your sentence,"

to that deal he rose his head but didn't speak

he hesitated and shook his head 

the sunbaes were already to the boiling point but this guy ticked them off 

woobin sunbae grabbed him by the collar and pushed him against the wall

"you might not care what happens to you but what about your family huh? what about your 5 year-old daughter? your wife?" woobin sunbae asked as he glared right through his eyes like laser beams 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rh7CeND9k8M&feature=channel

"you did ask for more money but they denied that and instead threatened you...either kill these people or kill your family," jihoo sunbae said as he tried his best to keep calm

Kang Hee Choon shivered in fear 

he avoided our eyes 

"ANSWER! WHO ORDERED YOU?!" woobin sunbae yelled as he kept banging Hee Choon's back against the wall 

he started crying 

"if i tell you...they'll kill my family," he said as he started to sob

"and we will do EVERYTHING in our power for that not to happen so tell us who did it?" jihoo sunbae asked nicely one last time 

Hee Choon just looked around the room,looking at everyone's expression

he held his head low 

"Eunchae....Cha Eun chae......" 

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darling_noona
#1
Chapter 1: Wow! The story seems interesting.... Im gonna read this now!
pinkyberry
#2
boys over flowers?? i love that!!
nice story :)
ambercookiebee
#3
how does Yi Jung's ghost thing work? He can hold some things, but not all...
ambercookiebee
#4
Since I am proofreading your story...I should be asking questions.
Is Eun Chae a seriously good actor, because she was crying during his funeral, while she ordered some dude to kill him (sorry, forgot the dude's name! ^_^). Was she crying because she truly loved him (lol, forgot if you ever mentioned that...pretty sure you just said she was jealous of Ga Eul/So Eun), or was she crying because she realized she did something extremely stupid?
ambercookiebee
#5
Lol did I say redirection...I meant resurrection...
ambercookiebee
#6
Absolutely loved it! Seriously! Regarding you're questions...here's one.
You didn't really say how the F3 and Jan Di felt when they saw Yi Jung when they were questioning Eun Chae. I would be afraid if I saw my dead friend back to life.
Also, is his "redirection" brought to the media? And how do other people feel about a guy that just died is alive?
If I think of more question's I'll comment!
KimAmina
#7
the Cha family died!!*evil laugh*
I hate Yihyun.. how could he!
it's sad that the story ended.. :(
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Thanks for the wonderful story ^__^ I had fun reading it <3
Keep it up :D waiting for more :D
DalHeera
#8
Wah~it has ended...
IM SOOOO FRIGGIN HAPPY THAT EUNCHAE MET HER DEMISE!!!!!
And how can Yihyun just get away like that..after just doing that with Eunchae..WHY IS HE WALKING GAEUL DOWN THE AISLE?!?!?!
*thats my question for u author-nim!*
I just think Yihyun does not deserve that..
21bangyen
#9
waaahhh....I hated yi jung for some unknown reasons...hahaha
i hope they wouldn't encounter problems as big as those again..huh...
may they leave peacefully forever!!!<3
KimAmina
#10
Engaged! I'm shocked
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Please update soon
please don't end the story.. if you'll end it soon (Happy Ending please) ^_^