HEAVEN?!

INNOCENT GHOST?

YIJUNG POV

i woke up as a bright light started dawning on my face i slowly open my eyes, slowly adjusting to the bright light

and find myself in a white open space...i look around but find no one else here with me

"hello?? is anyone there?"

"YIJUNG!" a loud voice boomed upon me and i fell to the floor startled but got up adjusting my clothes as the F4 casonava shouldn't be startled by anything "who the hell are you? and where are you?" i asked to the voice

i feel someone tapping my shoulder and i turn around and find a man dressed in all white with wings that are a few feet taller than me

"are  you an angel?" i  asked idiotically "yes, i am," the angel aswered...questions started roaming my head...am i dead or am i dreaming

"you are indeed dead.." he said reading my mind "..i am yoon shi yoon.." "and i am.." i said cutting in but this shi yoon guy cut me off too "..and your yijung F4 casonava, you have a girlfriend named cha eun jae and your life is pottery," "well i guess you did some research, i am a pretty well known guy," i boasted. the angel just smiled at me which irritated me because he was pretty good looking "wait did you just say i was dead?"

"indeed i did," he snapped his fingers and an image appeared in front of me, i was speechless of what i saw

the image i saw of F4 and my girlfriend having a funeral for me ..they were all crying and it broke my heart as they were family to me

but there were two girls i havent seen before..one was next to gun jun pyo trying to calm him down and another girl next to her and eun jae..they look soo out of place. the angel snapped his finger and the image disappeared and i turned my attention to him

"the reason you are here is because before anyone goes to heaven..they meet an angel here and are asked this question...do you believe you died an unjust death, and if they say yes we send them back to the mortal world as ghost form and has an opportunity in proving your wrongful death...So Yi Jung do you believe you died an unjust death?" i start thinking...how did i die....wait

FLASHBACK

*BAMMM* i open my eyes just slightly as i am leaning against the steering wheel

"wait! help me please," there were no replies i lookked at the time and it read 3:10, i tried reaching for my phone ,but i was too weak i couldn't

i see a man through the window and he seemed surprised and he ran away in his car and everything started getting dark

FLASHBACK END

"yes," i say calmly but deep inside i was raging.

if it wasn't for him i would have been alive

"okay well sir, you have an opportunity of picking someone that could help you in the mortal world.."

"REALLY? i pick cha eunjae..," shi yoon cut in and said something that disappointed me,"..but you can not pick someone you know,"

"what?! what kind of rule is that ?"

"there's more...rule 1. it has to be someone you don't know..2. it has to be from the opposite gender...3. she can only help you for 12 hours a day 4. you can not touch or feel someone or something...those are going to be the only rules i tell you verbally..the rest..." he threw me a book and i picked it up and flipped through and smirked at the stupid rules it had "what the heck," i yelled "what?" the angel peered over my shoulder "rule 54. she has to have fair skin and long black hair," "what?" i don't write these rules," the angle said using puppy eyes

"so who do you pick?"

"open up a computer screen and show me the girls that would comply to all these rules," shi yoon did what i ordered him to but to my disbelief only 3 girls showed up on the screen

i started at all of them but the one in the middle caught my eye the most...she looks like a country bumpkin and i smirked

wait..she's that girl from my funeral the one i don't know..if i choose her she'll probably be able to get close to f4 and i can use my buddies for help

oh yeah

YOON SHI YOON POV

"wait..she's that girl from my funeral the one i don't know..if i choose her she'll probably be able to get close to f4 and i can use my buddies for help,"

i started smiling...this guy..it will take a while for this guy to understand why we say to choose the opposite ....it will take him a  while to realize she is his soulmate...chu ga eul

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darling_noona
#1
Chapter 1: Wow! The story seems interesting.... Im gonna read this now!
pinkyberry
#2
boys over flowers?? i love that!!
nice story :)
ambercookiebee
#3
how does Yi Jung's ghost thing work? He can hold some things, but not all...
ambercookiebee
#4
Since I am proofreading your story...I should be asking questions.
Is Eun Chae a seriously good actor, because she was crying during his funeral, while she ordered some dude to kill him (sorry, forgot the dude's name! ^_^). Was she crying because she truly loved him (lol, forgot if you ever mentioned that...pretty sure you just said she was jealous of Ga Eul/So Eun), or was she crying because she realized she did something extremely stupid?
ambercookiebee
#5
Lol did I say redirection...I meant resurrection...
ambercookiebee
#6
Absolutely loved it! Seriously! Regarding you're questions...here's one.
You didn't really say how the F3 and Jan Di felt when they saw Yi Jung when they were questioning Eun Chae. I would be afraid if I saw my dead friend back to life.
Also, is his "redirection" brought to the media? And how do other people feel about a guy that just died is alive?
If I think of more question's I'll comment!
KimAmina
#7
the Cha family died!!*evil laugh*
I hate Yihyun.. how could he!
it's sad that the story ended.. :(
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Thanks for the wonderful story ^__^ I had fun reading it <3
Keep it up :D waiting for more :D
DalHeera
#8
Wah~it has ended...
IM SOOOO FRIGGIN HAPPY THAT EUNCHAE MET HER DEMISE!!!!!
And how can Yihyun just get away like that..after just doing that with Eunchae..WHY IS HE WALKING GAEUL DOWN THE AISLE?!?!?!
*thats my question for u author-nim!*
I just think Yihyun does not deserve that..
21bangyen
#9
waaahhh....I hated yi jung for some unknown reasons...hahaha
i hope they wouldn't encounter problems as big as those again..huh...
may they leave peacefully forever!!!<3
KimAmina
#10
Engaged! I'm shocked
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Please update soon
please don't end the story.. if you'll end it soon (Happy Ending please) ^_^