LONGING FOR ONE ANOTHER

INNOCENT GHOST?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=myYJKTYRjEw&feature=related

GAEUL'S POV

5 nights 6 days 

i sat by the window just staring out at the peaceful city

i didn't eat nor did i sleep

i continuously just stared 

my friends were worried as well as the doctors but i didn't care 

when yijung left that night...so did my heart 

this ringing in my ears...the crack in my heart...my weak body...and my neverending tears is because of him....this pain is because of only one man 

a man that changed my life 

a man who came and went as he pleased 

a man who loved another that was not me 

a man who tricked me 

a man who never loved me 

but a man i will love for eternity

i again weeped as i grieved for him 

"gaeul..." my sweet friend called out but i  never responded 

i heard her sigh 

i finally turned around and once we met eyes, she broke down crying with me 

jandi held me in her arms as we both weeped 

"he left me...he...he loved her," i said as i sobbed 

"yijung....he...he...hurt me but why can't i stop loving me...."

i cried and cried.....cried and cried 

YIJUNG'S POV

i looked at her 

i saw her pain

i saw her weep

i saw her grieve for me 

and i could see myself doing the same 

"i'm sorry gaeul...i'm so sorry...i'm...i'm sorry," i cried as i stood there watching the one i love sob for me 

i ran out as i was afraid she might spot me 

i climbed up to the roof 

and i screamed 

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" 

"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" 

i yelled as i sobbed and sobbed 

gaeul...why did you love me 

i can't love...i can't 

eunchae will hurt you...gaeul i do...i do love you...but eunchae i'm afraid she will hurt  you

i know the pain that you will have to endure but i can't love you or else you will get hurt more 

i need to tell myself i don't love you but my heart won't stop beating 

i was there the whole time you weeped, sobbed, and grieved 

i was behind you the whole time as you looked out the window 

i heard your cries

i saw your pain 

but i'm sorry i can't....i can't love you

if i want to protect you...i can't love you

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"

"GAEUL! GAEUL-AH!!!!!!!"

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I WANT TO THANK YOU READERS AND SUBSCRIBERS FOR YOUR SUPPORT 

I READ THE COMMENTS AND I LOVE HOW YOU GUYS ARE INTO THE STORY<3

SO THANK YOU

I KNOW YOU GUYS HATE YIJUNG FOR WHAT HE DID BUT HE HAS A REASON FOR IT ;P

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I WILL UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER AS SOON AS I CAN

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darling_noona
#1
Chapter 1: Wow! The story seems interesting.... Im gonna read this now!
pinkyberry
#2
boys over flowers?? i love that!!
nice story :)
ambercookiebee
#3
how does Yi Jung's ghost thing work? He can hold some things, but not all...
ambercookiebee
#4
Since I am proofreading your story...I should be asking questions.
Is Eun Chae a seriously good actor, because she was crying during his funeral, while she ordered some dude to kill him (sorry, forgot the dude's name! ^_^). Was she crying because she truly loved him (lol, forgot if you ever mentioned that...pretty sure you just said she was jealous of Ga Eul/So Eun), or was she crying because she realized she did something extremely stupid?
ambercookiebee
#5
Lol did I say redirection...I meant resurrection...
ambercookiebee
#6
Absolutely loved it! Seriously! Regarding you're questions...here's one.
You didn't really say how the F3 and Jan Di felt when they saw Yi Jung when they were questioning Eun Chae. I would be afraid if I saw my dead friend back to life.
Also, is his "redirection" brought to the media? And how do other people feel about a guy that just died is alive?
If I think of more question's I'll comment!
KimAmina
#7
the Cha family died!!*evil laugh*
I hate Yihyun.. how could he!
it's sad that the story ended.. :(
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Thanks for the wonderful story ^__^ I had fun reading it <3
Keep it up :D waiting for more :D
DalHeera
#8
Wah~it has ended...
IM SOOOO FRIGGIN HAPPY THAT EUNCHAE MET HER DEMISE!!!!!
And how can Yihyun just get away like that..after just doing that with Eunchae..WHY IS HE WALKING GAEUL DOWN THE AISLE?!?!?!
*thats my question for u author-nim!*
I just think Yihyun does not deserve that..
21bangyen
#9
waaahhh....I hated yi jung for some unknown reasons...hahaha
i hope they wouldn't encounter problems as big as those again..huh...
may they leave peacefully forever!!!<3
KimAmina
#10
Engaged! I'm shocked
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Please update soon
please don't end the story.. if you'll end it soon (Happy Ending please) ^_^