APPA HYUNG (Contest Entry to AFF Summer Fic Writing Contest)

Description

"Appa Hyung," Dongho calls him. A call, with love of a younger brother, wanting his understanding, and wanting his care.

What if an idol has excessive obsessed fans and excessive anti-fans?

PROMPT:

2.) Baby, I'm sorry, don't let these tears blur the happiness of your memories my love.

     Taeyang "Baby, I'm Sorry"

Foreword

A contest entry for the AFF Summer Fic Writing Contest. Organized by @rockabyebaby, @staticdream and @mysharona626. Thank you for  coming up with the idea and organizing this contest.

Thank you to Alex, for helping me, "Thank you so much, my friend."

Thank you to @Keeper, for always encouraging me, "Thank you so much, my friend."

To my family and all my friends, thank you, too.

 

This will be the first entry, and first step,  in joining a writing contest, in my whole life.  A whole different ball field.

A story, formed about two brothers, with the words, "Appa Hyung" as the main reason for this story. And, Dongho and Jaejoong, must be the characters, in the story. There are so many to choose from, to be the characters in the story, and, went through with so many names, but, those two names, are the only ones that stay, and won't let go. 

Not that, those two are my biases, in each of their KPop Group. But, when, the story is coming to life, like a movie or a teledrama, they are the ones, acting the scenes. A teledrama, coming to life in words through this story, don't see them as they are in real life, but as character actors, acting a scene. Imagine them, youngster, teenager, or older. Small scenes, in the lives, of a young actor Dongho and his older brother Jaejoong.

Second reason for this story, when someone suffers from phobias, brought on by excessive obsessed fans and excessive anti-fans. It is not just the sufferer that is involved, but also the family, friends and people around that person, that get involved. Then multiply that, when that someone is in the entertainment world, and is a well known person, who also has acquantances and co-workers, and also has a lot of fans,  with the media, and the whole world that look in everything in that someone's life. 

 

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kpopartory
#1
Hello! @phylUM89! Thank you for the comment! *huggles*
Thank you for lighting my notification box made me so happy, and gave me a big smile.
The ending, yeah, actually it was the beginning in my head lol then it proceeded again from there, JaeJoong in the hospital bed too and she (Dongho) is the nurse.
phylUM89
#2
Chapter 12: This is great.
I didn't really understand the ending but now I do after I read your comment reply. Dongho is the nurse body and have a child. Cute..
Please make another fic like this ^^
kpopartory
#3
Hello! @Yukie23! Thank you for the comment! *big bear huggles*<br />
Coming from a great writer, like you, lifts my spirit up. *smile*<br />
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Thank you for reading, commenting and subscribing to the story, I really appreciate it! *big big huggles*<br />
Yukie23
#4
Awww *sniff sniff* That was absolutely adorable!! xD<br />
The fact that Dongho came back >.< <br />
It was too good for words, and if you do decide to make a sequel, I'm all for reading it!!<br />
:D
kpopartory
#5
Hello! @keeper! Thank you for the comment!<br />
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I am contemplating on it lol Because, the story is on going in my head lol<br />
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Maybe, if writing it, I will be able to share with you and the other readers, the scenes playing in my head.
dream_keeper88
#6
A happy ending? <br />
It is your call ^-^
kpopartory
#7
Hello! @AliciaRose! Thank you for the comment! I appreciate it!<br />
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Yeh, it is a bit of a sad story, I wanted to have sweet moments between brothers, and the ending was always part of the story, with Dongho coming back for his Appa Hyung.<br />
AliciaRose #8
Omo! So sweet between brothers but so sad... glad for a happy ending though!
kpopartory
#9
Dongho died, and came back to life, in the nurse's body, with his memories intact. <br />
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I had that in my head, all along. More stories in my head, but, I had to limit it to 7 chapters lol I should write a sequel lol
kpopartory
#10
I got disconnected lol <br />
ye, Jaejoong was always by his side, someone who loves him unconditionally<br />
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IKR!?!? I wanted to shout too in that chapter, I want to cry my heart out, 'NO!!!'<br />
I have the same reaction as you.<br />
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ye, it was a sad story, and I wanted to have cute moments too<br />
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That was how, it was in my head, and I tried to write it, the way I saw it in my head.<br />
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THANK YOU! For reading, subscribing and commenting to my story. I really appreciate it!! *big big bear hug*