Chapter 5: Changmin just died like that? O.O but i like the thingy where he sees everything even tho he's dead. Who killed Minnie ... I need to kill whoever did that ... Why the hack did they do it anyway? Minnie is innocent. Is he??
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lolol found my own story in random story *smile*

nice one Mhel Unnie... waiting for the next chapter ^__^

It has an interesting plot, but I suggest getting someone who's mother language is English to help you with it and edit it. There are a lot of grammar mistakes, but the spelling is superb. (I'm a native English speaker and can barely spell) Other then that it was really good. :)