Title of the story: ♕ The King and His Queen ♔
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/leadermisyel/
Author of the story: Misyel
Reviewer: Sheryln

Title: 5/5
Comments:
Interesting title. It Makes me want to read further about the story ^^

Appearance: 4/5
Comments:
Both background and poster is well done by the requesting site. It does not related to the title. Maybe you should request to put a crown or something on the poster?

Forewords: 10/10
Comments: The forewords is well written. It gave the readers what is going to happen next and provides the characters well (:

Plot: 12/15
Comments: The plot went too fast. Only 4 chapters and the most exciting part came, where Shinkyu and Jiyong is going to get married.

Originality: 14/20
Comments: I mark down on this criteria as this type of fanfic is seen everywhere, very common.

Grammar/Spelling/punctuation/vocabulary: 13/15
Comments: I dint see much grammar problems

Details: 3/5
Comments: Can put more details

Writing style: 7/10
Comments: I like your writing style!

Overall enjoyment: 7/10
Comments: Is fun to read and exciting when Jiyong tease/bully Shinkyu

Bonus: 5/5
Total: 82/100

Well done. Continue to work hard ^^

@ www.fairy-tale-fantasies.blogspot.com
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Thank you for the honest constructive review!
Well, Shinkyu and Jiyong are going to get married, but I'm saving the MOST exciting part till the end!
I WILL work hard to improve~!!
Hopefully the following chapters will be better :3

-Misyel