Chapter 3

Lady in the Middle of the Night

The next day no one bothered to wake me up so I woke up myself and wore another set of creepy clothes? 

I went the room and look around and go to the nearest curtain and shut it. 'Phew... Saved... No Sun...' I smiled.

Next target is the kitchen. 'Kill the window...' I said.

'Oopppss... They're still here? I thought they have work?' I asked myself and peeked again at them who is in the kitchen.

"What are you doing?" A voice from behind.

"Chu...chunji-ssi..." I said.

"Oppa will do..." He smiled.

Then grabbed me to the kitchen. 'Sun..... Sun..... Ouwwww.... 2nd time seeing a sun... I want to see the outside... Just this

once...' I was desperate to see the outside so I ran to the balcony and the sun shone to me. I opened the balcony door and let  

the sun shine to me. I removed my jacket and stick my hands out to grab some fresh air and the others were looking at me

weirdly.

Then a knock came and it they opened it I didn't know I admired the sun's bright light and smiled.

Eomma's POV

Then when I came inside and go to the kitchen I saw Maerin outside the balcony and just run into her.

"Maerin... No Maerin..." She remove her jacket quickly and put it to Maerin really quick and pull her inside and close the

balcony.

"Shut all the curtains, please hurry..." Eomma said.

"Yah... Don't do that... You scared me to death I told you not to go out in daylight... And now your out of my sight you just go

outside..." Eomma cried.

"I... I... Am sorry... The sun... Eomma I saw the sun and it's beautiful... Can't you just let me be happy... I... I tried to live

my life in my room with darkness for the rest of my life..." Maerin cried and sank to her knees. Yes, sometimes she wonders 

how beautiful the sun when it's shining and she tries to live without it.

"Eomma why... Why can't go..." She cried really hard.

"Niel-yah get her bag quick..." Eomma instructed.

He run quickly and grab her bag.

"Eommonim are you two alright?" Said Chunji.

"Yes... Help me carry her..." She said and Chunji nodded.

He seemed really nice at her... I think I can trust him instead of Niel.

Sighed.

"Eomma... Eomma... Will he forgive me..." She cried and cried and I just cooed her hugging.

"Shhh... Shmmm... It's alright..." I tried to calm Maerin down but still crying she opened Maerin's bag and search

for the Tranquilizer and the injection given by the doctor.

"Shh... Calm down... Shhh..." I cooed and cooed.

Then I inject the Tranquilizer to her.

"Maerin... Sleep well... Everything will be alright..." I cried. 

"Eomma what was that..." Niel asked and I shook my head.

"Please at least give her a chance... After that she never goes out to her room and never took her foot outside the house."

She cried. "She is suffering too Niel... I wish you understand her... If you just knew... If only I can tell you..." And then

Niel's eyes widened.

"What do you mean..." He asked out of curiosity.

"Please do not let her out with any bright things... Only at night she can live... She just understand her for now."

Niel's POV

I was shocked when Eomma suddenly run into the balcony removing her jacket to cover Maerin... 'What's happening?' I asked

myself.

Eomma started to scold her from going outside and cried then Maerin suddenly sanked in her knees complaining to her

about her past life.

'Why didn't I notice that Eomma and Appa locked her into her room for the rest of her life?' I asked myself.

Then she asked me to grab her stuff which is I did seems she was in trouble she cooed with her and calm her down

she didn't calm down and Eomma opened her bag and get an injection and a small bottle and inject the liquid on to her

then she quickly fallen asleep.

Eomma ask me to forgive her but I can't she is the reason why JinHee is in Hospital.

Also I do not get her last phrases and after that she said the things about the bright things again.

'3 years in her room?' I thought what was that supposed to mean?

We just nodded and Chunji-hyung got asked by Eomma to carry her in our room.

"Please... Take care of my daughter..." Eomma bowed.

"If something like this happens just please use this Tranquilizer to calm her down... I beg you save her..." She cried.

"What do you mean save her?" She just smiled sadly still doesn't get what she meant.

Then Chunji-hyung came back.

"Chanhee-ah can I talk to you next time I drop? I think it's in next 2 days... I need a few words..." She said before leaving.

Chunji's POV

I might not know what's happening but I know that there is something wrong. I felt really bad about Maerin?

I heard she didn't go out for 3 years outside her room.

What is happening to her? She is like super happy when she saw the Sun? What is with the Sun anyways?

It's always there anyways... But I heard her said something about not going out ... Argghh..

L.Joe's POV

'What's happening here early in the morning?' I asked myself.

'She is mental...' I thought when I saw her running out to the balcony. then Eommonim came and drag her inside and

asked us to shut all the curtains causing it to be a little dark.

It was weird? What's happening?

Why am I wven curious I just met her yesterday. Sighed.

 

Author's Note

>.> I don't know what to write it's just random update o.o hihi still I am hoping you liked it support me... 

Please also read my other fics TY.

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NFTeenFinite #1
It is a very sad story...I'd cry a lot when I read it..Thank you for this story author nim....
ABoyWhoCriedWolf
#2
Chapter 9: this is a very touching story :) Good jOb aUthOrNim ..:-)
ABoyWhoCriedWolf
#3
new reader here :-) i like the plot ..and i'll look forward with it :-)
Earringloverz #4
Chapter 10: Wow couldn't stop myself from cryingTT-TT
shai209
#5
Chapter 8: First story reading that I actually cried!!! Amazing story! Upvoted! While reading I actually felt likr I was the oc! O.O. amazing story again!!!!!
minhoshawols #6
I love this!!!!
evilminic00kies #7
Chapter 10: Story was amazing. Omfg I couldnt stop crying. Format and sentences were a bit weird, but the overall plot was beautiful. Asdfghjkl cant contain all them feels.
xyper_crash21 #8
Chapter 8: 1. Foreword - 90/100
The foreword is well written, but there were some grammatically wrong sentences and the sad feeling of the description was kind of off-tracked because of “TT.TT”. One picture wasn’t working, I suggest you change it. And in “…is a sweet, shy and selfless girl”, what do you mean by selfless? Nevertheless, I got the plot of the story in the foreword. Good job! ^.^
2. Pictures - 98/100
As I said, one picture isn’t working(Maerin’s picture) and about the poster… It kind of didn’t match the story’s sad plot, it looked more of a happy one.
3. Story Plot - 99/100
Wah, the plot made me cry. Like really, cry. Everyone will cry at the ending. Your story also has a hidden advice on everyone, and the fact that Maerin never gives up on her oppa is heartwarming.

4. Grammar - 85/100
Your grammar was kind of off track. First, you keep changing the perspective from 1st person point of view to 3rd person point of view even though you clearly said “Eomma’s POV”, etc. Then, sometimes you have wrong spelling, not much, only a little. Then some missing words, so your score was a bit low.

5. Writing Style – 90/100
Your writing style was okay, though there were sentences cut and the next part of it was in another paragraph. I suggest you try and fix it ^^

6. Total markings – 92.4/100
Yay! Congratulations! Just work on your grammar and it will be perfect! Sorry if the review took so long, I decided I’ll do it ‘cause Iyah took so long ^^” No hard feelings! Thanks for choosing ~~~BUTTER REVIEW SHOP!~~~
Solution96
#9
Chapter 9: I cried really hard and i think about niel as her bf not brother lol! :)