Chapter 1: I liked the comedy value of this retelling of sleeping beauty. Its funny and sweet.
The little moments like Taemin being dressed as a girl and being called one is really funny, though I wasn't sure why he was dressed up like that?
The little bit of Disney with your own story is a nice touch, but the flow of the story was perhaps a little fast. It seemed like it all happened so quickly.
I wasn't sure who Yuri was to be honest, she seemed to pop out of nowhere and then turn out to be a witch I guess?
It would have given more to the story if you explained some of the characters and why some things were done in a certain way...I still have no idea why Taemin is in dressed in this. Though it is funny.
The switching between POV's flowed well, but make sure not too put too many different POV's in, otherwise it might confuse some readers.

Overall it was a really cute and funny fluffy story. I enjoyed reading it :)
But I think it would definitely help you if you slowed the story down a little and gave characters some more depth.
Great job though :)

Chapter 1: - I know this is a retelling of the story, and I like the way you introduce us to the quick, rundown version, but I was slightly confused how the princes tried to get to the princess or never came back. There's nothing to say that she was kept in a tower or castle or anything after she pricks her finger.
- I do enjoy the light, comedic tone you've taken with the story. It's a nice change from the drama/abuse driven ones you often see. And it's consistent throughout too, which is even better.
- Was there a reason Taemin had to wear dresses in the cottage even though they know he's a male? Why does Onew keep referring to him as a girl (Taeyeon in that one slip up)? And you called Onew, Jonghyun, and Key his godfathers but then change to ummas. O.o Which one is it?
- I enjoyed the way you incorporated the song lyrics and the way the animals understand him is cute. I also had to laugh at Minho's forwardness.
- Oh! Nice twist in the story. I didn't see that one coming. Though I was surprised by how he spoke to Onew just before the reveal. >.>
- Okay! This was definitely now what I was expecting. It's fast paced, follows the same general path of the original fairytale with some very noticeable differences, has a very comedic and silly feel running all through it, and ends on a rather funny note indeed.
I'm still confused why Taemin had to dress like a girl though. Also, I wasn't sure why he was so eager to leave the palace (Krystal notwithstanding) because he'd only actually been in it for one conscious day. So why would he not want to be cooped up since it didn't have a chance to sink in yet? And Yuri's character was something else. She kind of appeared out of nowhere and just... hmm. I don't know. lol I suppose her anticlimactic end was unexpectedly funny, especially when told from the narrator's perspective. That was certainly an interesting way to read it. First person is always intriguing so good job in presenting it that way.

Chapter 1: OMG!! I loved it! Laughed really hard!

Chapter 1: HAHAHA i laughed so much reading this it was not what i was exspecting HAHAHAHAH

Chapter 1: lol in almost every 2min story there is the overprotective umma key screaming either "my baby" or "what the did you do to my baby" but great story author-nim

Chapter 1: Okay I was really sad and depressed when I started reading this and it just made me laugh so much and I'm smiling now thanks you so much ;u; I love it >u<

Chapter 1: OMFG I I I--I ____ING LOST FOR WORDS GODDAMMIT!


HAHAHAHAHAHA THIS IS TOTALLY EPIC OH GOD!! I was grinning like an idiot and I dont know which part is the best. THE FAIRIES! OH GOD XDD THEY FEELS SO GAY LOL

AND MINHO'S POV TOO LMAO WHAT THE HELL -____-

I cant say anything.. Oh God.. This is the best... OMFG.. Epic. I WAS LAUGHING LIKE A TOTAL IDIOT -_-

Bring back my cool image LOL

AWESOME, AUTHOR-NIM! YOU DID A GREAT JOB!!