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Aither

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Baekhyun and Yixing really shock, but Jongdae was the most shock among them. Because Baekhyun and Yixing known that Jongdae really hate human, and they can’t hide it.

Suddenly Jongdae bent down her head again “please Xavior, don’t sending me to earth, I can’t do that. You can give whatever detention to me, but go down to earth and facing human, I am no ready yet Xavior” Jongdae begging earnestly.

“no, I already choose that detention to you Jongdae, and you must do it, that’s my order” Yunho also know about this so he won’t gave up to vanish that Jongdae’s hateful feeling toward human.

“please Xavior, I beg you—“ “—you can sent me to Wish department forever as you want but this—“

“that my last decision Jongdae, call it and do it” Yunho persistent.

“but—“

“if you still deny it, I’ll make Baekhyun and Yixing to be Definist too, so you can take another punishment except going down to Earth” threatening Yunho.

Jongdae lift his head in shock, tears still flowing in his beautiful face.

“Jongdae-ah…” whisper Baekhyun softly.

When Jongdae looked at Yixing, she just bow his head deeply, whereas Baekhyun start crying.

Jongdae can’t do anything except accepting that order.

 

All Aither’s occupant also known that Jongdae really hate human, because at previous period. The story begin, while Jongdae had a brother, even not blood related (because angel doesn’t have that kind relationship). Her name is Suho. Jongdae already regarding Suho as her related-family. Because both of them born in South Athens Grounds, which is all we know in South Athens Ground, even a grass is difficult to grow, moreover flower which can born some Angel. But their flower birth growing and blooming there, so they born at same ground and same seed flower. That’s why Jongdae regards her as her family-related.

Suho is also an Apherion under Yunho lecturing. The difference between her and Suho is really far. Suho is one of Yunho’s favorite Apherion actually, her character is mature enough close to wise. Even her appearance was still beautiful but her aura really wise if you look through her eyes. And the most is, she was one of  the candidate Yunho believe can become a Xavior in next period. That’s why Jongdae really admiring her. Really different as compared with Jongdae.

Jongdae is an clumsy Angel without wings and always make Yunho in trouble. There’s no day to producing some trouble. And there’s no one sincere with patient to help Jongdae beside Suho.

But once upon a time, Suho get some task being a Guardian Angel in Earth (but not as punishment like Jongdae right now). Suho’s human was a teenager girl, who only have her life in 1 week. She had a car accident just now, and Suho task is have to tell those bad news. It was one of the test become a proper Xavior wanna be.

Day by day passing until the 4th day, and Suho still can’t complete his task. Watching all that girl hard struggling to life is made Suho waken his feeling to told that news. Until 5th day, Suho decide give her wings to add a couple days of her life. Yeah, Angel’s wings is one of live source, it depend how much point an angel have, it will show in how big their wings. And a pair of Suho’s wings can only add 3 day life.

When Suho already give her wings, Suho in Angel form slowly showing as human front of the girl. Start that time Suho can let out his mind about that news. Still can’t contain his heart about the death of the girl—

“if you don’t mind, I would like to give my soul to you—“ that girl really shock heard that statement.

“are you sure?” Suho give a nod “you really don’t mind it?” she made sure.

Suho just nod willingly.

“actually, I really doesn’t need your soul Suho-ssi, but can you give it to my little brother? he much more need that life than me, if you mind it—“

That girl show how serious her little brother condition, he also got car accident with her. And this past week he was in come condition. Suho understand her feeling.

 

*present*

After that event, Jongdae become depressed angel in Aither. He felt really mad therefore she still hate human. And now, Jongdae remember that time. The past event already in years period but she feels it just happen yesterday, just make Jongdae sad.

For your information, a death Angel will become a seed of flower, flower of their birth. Right now Suho’s seed already taking care of someone Jongdae trust. Kyungsoo, another close Angel with Jongdae and Suho, kyungsoo planted those seed in a great garden. Where it won’t lacking of fertilizer, soil and love, definitely.

Jongdae really like Kyungsoo. Kyungsoo and Suho relation kind of really close—close enough. Jongdae always thought that Kyungsoo would be a good wife for Suho—a great sister in law. Anything can make Suho happy was the only thing Jongdae thought of.

Eventually, Jongdae still hate human. He thinks, human already take her Suho away from this life. Made him can’t become a Xavior like Yunho wanted to be. Start back then Jongdae not anymore become a gloomy angel and start messing around (still clumsy actually) made a friends with other and always try being a happy virus. The shy and timid Jongdae already gone after a couple years Suho death.

Even she still a lower point angel, still doesn’t have wings but in the past she used to have a little wings in her back, unfortunately Yunho take it back because her bad attitude. Poor Jongdae. And now, she must be an angel half human because this order from Xavior Yunho, actually a half man (because of the punishment being a Guardian Angel). But only human Jongdae guarding can see Jongdae in a form.

Who’s the lucky (poor) human will be guarding by Jongdae? It will a 23 years old guy named Wu Yifan, a Chinese-Canadian blood but already live at Korea 5 years. Prince look like, with handsome creature, lean tall body, white porcelain skin and fierce eyes like an eagle which can freeze any wo(man), and also the only son of Wu enterprise, one of billionaire in Korea . But the poor thing is? Someone who get guardian angel it means that he or she having some trouble.

After heard Yifan problem he (because Jongdae already be a half man so I will call he to Jongdae right now) think those trouble just annoying matter with grow up man like Yifan guy. Jongdae find out just sulking and thinking that Yifan problem is a trivial. Broken heart and hard to move on (=,= curious who’s Yifan’s ex? Kekeke),  such a teenager matter. How so boring

Okay, I must end this quickly

 

 

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final chapter is UP guys >.< so sad I already end this story...hope you enjoy this

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nymphDew88 #1
Chapter 15: This is beautiful story
chrysantslurvletters
#2
Chapter 15: It is a very good story despite grammar mistakes here and there. .love it!^^
kpoployalty00
#3
Chapter 15: uuuuuwaaa!!!! you the best author-nim!!!!
ireally like it.
viani24 #4
Chapter 15: it was done,,,,wow the ending was unexpected...thank for writing the story
viani24 #5
Chapter 14: omg why my ipod played f(x) ft kyungsoo goodbye summer while I was reading this chapter????(ok, blame my shuffle style) and it was gave more sad feeling (eventhough lyric and storyline this chapter not the same way but the feel was almost the same)..dear author you are the best d^__^b...eventhough I was wondering about what happen next but I will wait your update patiently..okaii sorry for my long blabber (again)
kpoployalty00
#6
Chapter 14: uuuwaaaahhhh!!! how sad~!! i wonder what could happen next.. ohh author-nim you such a great author.. this is the best shot.. ^_^ hope they will be together in the end... good job author-nim.. and thanks for the great chapter..
kpoployalty00
#7
Chapter 13: hai!! i'm new so please to meet you author-nim...
i've been reading this fanfic from the start.. i really happy when you updated author-nim... iwish Kris and Chen will be together forever... oh my KRISCHEN feel!!!
viani24 #8
Chapter 13: ⊙-⊙..yayy you updated,.seem's your story will be end soon,.wish the next Jongdae's task&punishment is life happily ever after with Yifan (slap me)..that's just my wish you can ignore it...waiting your next update..fighting author-nim..
viani24 #9
Chapter 12: hi,..wow tbh I hope chen can fulfill his task and happily ever after with kris,kkkkk,,,kris pls don't make any problem that you will regret it *LMFAO*..soooo interesting to this story...
arroww
#10
Chapter 10: after i read this chapter, i re-read again the previous chaps.
omg, don't tell me the little boy that suho helped was, kris.