Dangerous Love

Description

Characters:

Luhan - cute, sweet, everyone loves him. unf. look at his face.

 

Sehun - clingy, loves luhan, would do anything to make luhan his forever.

 

Xiumin - likes luhan. a flirt. ADORABLE.

 

Ships:

HunHan

XiuHan

 

and there's a bit of Taoris in the beginning~

 

Minor Characters:

Rest of EXO-M

Kris, Tao, Chen, Lay

 

 

Yerrrr. So. Like... I need a poster >o< Help?

 

Written by: iBubbii

Editted by: OceanLight

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LuluMing #1
I Iike the front page instructions of the characters by adding gif and small description i hope others writter also did the same.
adorkyuble #2
Chapter 6: i second gokulex59. btw the writing could use some improvement with the flow. it's a bit choppy. i like that it's to the point and there's a lot happening...but there's not enough happening for us the readers to relate to the characters. i get xiumin's confident about luhan and him but then when sehun tells him something that's supposed to crush him, he's just "unsure" of whether to approve it. there's no emoting, i don't get a sense of what xiumin's potentially losing (his one true love, his trust in luhan - doesn't he feel the slightest bit betrayed despite whatever happened?). anyways, hope you won't get offended and that this can help you out instead of detracting from your writing or inspiration!
gokulex59 #3
I think I'm going to wait this to be finished, and I'll read comments afterwards. I'll read if it ends with my couple, but probably it's not gonna.
OceanLight #4
Chapter 4: heartbreaking chapter ;____;
Snuggles #5
Chapter 2: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGOING TO LOVE THIS FANFIC!
OceanLight #6
Chapter 1: OH MY GODDDDD THE BEGINNING IS SO CUTE AND GOOOODDDDDD. <3333
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