KCON 2012

Dangerous Love

It was KCON 2012. All he could hear was the screaming of the fans. He was sitting on a balcony above everyone else and had arrived at KCon just as 4Minute finished their song "Heart to Heart". He listened to the hosts - G.Na and some other guy thank everyone for coming. 

 

Finally, it was time for the ending. He watched as B.A.P. came onto the stage, and then VIXX, then Nu'est. As EXO-M appeared, the fans screamed so loud, he swore he was going to go deaf. 

 

He smiled as Kris wished the fans a safe journey home. Kris was always so caring towards everyone even though he was the leader and had to work harder than anyone else in EXO. He shifted his gaze over to Luhan. Smiling, he stood up to lean on the edge of the balcony. Luhan was his everything.

 

All of a sudden, his smile disappeared. A snake of dark emotions slid over his face. The twinkle of a smile in his eyes was replace by an intense glare. Sehun turned around and walked towards the exit.

 

Don't hug Xiumin like that, Luhan. You belong only to me.

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LuluMing #1
I Iike the front page instructions of the characters by adding gif and small description i hope others writter also did the same.
adorkyuble #2
Chapter 6: i second gokulex59. btw the writing could use some improvement with the flow. it's a bit choppy. i like that it's to the point and there's a lot happening...but there's not enough happening for us the readers to relate to the characters. i get xiumin's confident about luhan and him but then when sehun tells him something that's supposed to crush him, he's just "unsure" of whether to approve it. there's no emoting, i don't get a sense of what xiumin's potentially losing (his one true love, his trust in luhan - doesn't he feel the slightest bit betrayed despite whatever happened?). anyways, hope you won't get offended and that this can help you out instead of detracting from your writing or inspiration!
gokulex59 #3
I think I'm going to wait this to be finished, and I'll read comments afterwards. I'll read if it ends with my couple, but probably it's not gonna.
OceanLight #4
Chapter 4: heartbreaking chapter ;____;
Snuggles #5
Chapter 2: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGOING TO LOVE THIS FANFIC!
OceanLight #6
Chapter 1: OH MY GODDDDD THE BEGINNING IS SO CUTE AND GOOOODDDDDD. <3333
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