Wallflower Boys.

Description

Baekhyun is a 16 year old boy, who lives in a southern state of America in the 1930's trying to make a change in the prejudice world he lives in. Cruelly disrespected for the family he was born into, Baekhyun finds just living one of the hardest struggles of the day. While trying to keep on top of an education and living in a broken home, he finds refuge in a cottage on his corn fields, with a boy who goes by the name of Zhang Yixing. But, when Baekhyuns heart pulls him closer to Yixing then he expected, he only knows that the effect will be a negative one.

Foreword

This is my first fanfiction so i hope it'll be a bareable read :c

The chapters are a little shorter then average fanfictions, but there'll be more chapters for that reason, so I hope you guys won't mind!

Also, i'm basing some parts in the fanfiction off the book To Kill A Mockingbird By Harper Lee.

thank you ^w^~

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Chibitalia
#1
I love historicals and so I love this! It's nicely written and I particularly like the dialogue, it gives the whole story an authentic feel. Sometimes I read stories set in past times but the dialogue is just so out of place, so I'm glad yours wasn't like that :) Lay's mother and Lay himself sound like nice welcoming people - let's hope they stay that way! ^^
ishybear #2
Chapter 6: Omg. Poor baekhyunnie. I wonder what type of disability his mother has and how he lost his sister. I know his mom has a disorder but I'm still mad at her for what hitting Baekhyun. Baekhyun is the only one working he works hard to make money and you spend it on alchohol, Baekhyuns shoes are ripped and tattered and he can't even afford a new pair, cut him some slack woman. You should be proud that he's trying to get an education instead of telling hom to rot and that he's scum

It pisses me off that even more how his life at school isn't good either and how people are bullying him. His teacher and classmates are douches. It sickens me how they judge him because he's poor. And how he has dslyxia so it takes longer for him to learn and the teacher calls him stupid. What kind of teacher are you?! Degrading your students argggg.

I can't wait for some more lay and baekhyun interaction. Sorry for the long rant. This story is realy good, I can't wait for the next update. Your doing a great job! Hwaiting!
nekkajitge
#3
Chapter 6: ;A;

Oh ma gad, why?
nekkajitge
#4
Chapter 4: They meet ~
It's cute when Baekhyun is thanking the corn field at the end
nekkajitge
#5
Chapter 3: Poor Baekhyun, I hope he finds his beautiful stranger
nekkajitge
#6
Chapter 1: This is interesting ^^ I hope you'll update soon, I'd love to see how this story progresses