Stalker [Oneshot]

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Waeyo...

Who are you...

Why are you stalking me? 

Why don't you go stalk that Choi Siwon?

He's rich, handsome, popular, and he got ranked #1 for the iest student in school...

I'm just a normal boy that is jealous of him...

I'm just Lee Sungmin that no-one knows...

 

Are you going to go any further?

Are you going to snap me fully or anything?

Are you going to ruin my pure, cute image?

Are you going to...

me?

Foreword

Another oneshot kyumin story for y'all~

I know the one earlier wasn't any satisfying and making any sense... I'M STILL NEW TO HORROR STORIES!

 

Inspired by a kyumin edited picture that Kyuhyun is smiling at sleeping Sungmin... LOVED THAT PICTURE!

Not from the URL that we can use (or whatev is it) so i can't paste it here... sry~

 

Aware that I have THE WORST GRAMMAR since English isn't my first language... Anyways, hope you enjoy this oneshot!

 

p/s: Working on my songfiction-Last Christmas Eve!!!!! click the link down there to read it! SUBSCRIBE IF YOU LIKED THEM ALL!!!! =)

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/281151/last-christmas-eve-kyumin-kyuwook-romance

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Forest_pixi #1
Chapter 1: Detailing is important. Talk about their hair, their clothes, the noisy(or not) cafeteria of their...uh...high school? university? work place?

Maybe you should have a greater comparison between Siwon's and Sungmin's life to emphasize his invisibility.

And suddenly Eunhae are present! It would have played out better if I knew their relationship to sungmin. Are they besties too? You hinted they might have hung out together before...

And why did he go to them for the investigation?

why didn't kyu...since he is a BF...know where Min lived? Does Min live alone too?

ok...he fell for the trap...hey it happens...stalkers can get sloppy too...kkkk
....buuuuuuuutttt...he could have tried to deny it before admitting...to build up to the tension

The ending was...strange or maybe it's because I didn't expect them to be lying in bed together to soon...kkkkk

cute fic though ^_^
venzsuju #2
Chapter 1: auww sweet ahahaha XD
little-dreamer #3
Chapter 1: dont ever light up my house... kkk min always be min
Myraindrop #4
Chapter 1: Woaaaa what do you mean?
I love the ending,your story was amazing
nouvharyeo #5
Chapter 1: Damn... Love it!
Chosungmin #6
Chapter 1: Don't thinking to much minnie
ichathoriqlover #7
Chapter 1: Wow, cute and sweet just like our sungminnie that captured maknae!kyu's heart....love it
Almighty_devil #8
Chapter 1: The ending is good ^^ and cuteeee!~ haha...thanks for the one-shot ;)
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