The point of views.

I like point of views, and so do 99.99 percent of AFF.

But there is one thing that REALLY bothers me in some P.O.V fics. It's not very big or noticeable, and I don't think people really care.

BUT I DO.

Here, I''ll give you an example because I'm too dumb to even explain without showing an example 1st.

Jiyong P.O.V

Darn, What the hell have I been doing for 5 years? She doesn't love me. She never did.

Dara looks at me with those cold eyes of hers. She does not know how much it hurts deep inside.

Dara P.O.V

I really hate Jiyong. I never liked him the from the start.

Never did, and never will. 

He's looking at me with such a desperate look, it's almost disgusting.

Jiyong P.O.V

She's still standing there.

BLALBLAKALNKS

Okay, so what I'm trying to say is; the how often the P.O.V changes like the above ^^. When I see this, it makes me go loolala cause it kind of destroys my imagination to what the other person is actually thinking. Who knows? Maybe Dara actually like Jiyong, but she is just not showing it too often, or maybe she's just a darn gold digger. It's like giving everything away when you keep writing everyone's point of view. Unless it's a fanfic that deals with the lives of 3 characters, or has 4 main characters, then I understand it well, but too much P.O.V's at the same time is a big nono.

Good writers hint you to what the other person is thinking or what the other person is like. 

A funny writer just types what everything someone is thinking. And when that happens, then you already know what's going to happen next, or you already know EVERYTHING about this one character in a single chapter.

And the even more irritaiting thing is, some authors don't do it with the main and secondary character, they also do it with every one surrounding the characters. For example:

Jiyong's P.O.V:

The ticket booth girl watched me with googly eyes.

Bom's P.O.V:

This guy was so handsome.

If you have not seen this, then you have not been in the game for a long time, BUT THAT IS ANNOYING. T^T

If you fools guys have not noticed, I changed my font a bit. I started put my writing to the left, instead of the side, but I thought this rant would be the most appropriate written in the front. Sorry for not updating. Not to sound mean but I got a school and a life. BUT I LOVE YOU ALL. THANKS FOR LISTENING TO SOMEONE ALMOST AS IGNORANT AS MYSELF.