Rant 13:

Rants of an AFF Girl

 

 

Ohmygee! So I'm back y'alls. I was gone for a long time because:

1. I got lazy.

2. Created other fics, knowing that I probably wasn't going to update often.

3. Hmm, stereotypical reply        GOT A LIFE? :)

4. Tutoring lil 4th graders.

5. Damn tests and highschools shiat.

6. Friends who are very outgoing.

7. Hurricane Sandy.

8. Friends who are very dramatic.

9. Thanksgiving.

 

So, like        like         I'm gonna make a new fic, and this is going to be in my description and foreword.

Please tell meh if you like eet :D

 

 

Description:

 

TAO WAS A BOY THAT LIKED JIYEON, BUT UNFORTUNATELY, JIYEON DOES NOT LIKE HIM BACK.

SHE LIKES A BAD GUY JERK NAMED WOOHYUN.

WOOHYUN DOESN'T ACTUALLY LIKE JIYEON.

OHHH NOOO!

TAO IS FRIENDZONED BY JIYEON.

CAUSE YOU KNOW           NICE GUYS FINISH LAST! 

 

 

Foreword:

 

(Insert G-dragon's That xxx here)

 

I'm back with a new story as you could see. It features Exo-M's Tao (my bias currently in the entire Exo), T-ara's Jiyeon, & Infinite's Woohyun (my Infinite bias after Hoya). I hope you guys will enjoy this fic, as I has such a loooonnnggg time to think of this story. I expect you to subscribe if you commented, and is interested. :) If not then.. 

 

JeA will get ya.

 

Shin Won Ho will hit you with his umbrella.

 

And Zelo will hate you FOREVER.

 

 

..........................................................

 

 

Look how GOR-G Tao is! Ohmygosh.

 

Lemme throw in a picture of Jiyeon just for the heck of it!

 

ENJOY!

 

 

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Did you just see what I did there?

 

Those buttload of pictures and gifs that lag your laptop/ipod/ipad/phone?

 

IT'S SO ANNOYING WHEN AN AUTHOR PUTS SO MUCH USELESS PICTURES, OR ANY OTHER UNNECESSARY STUFF IN THEIR FANFIC'S DESCRIPTION & FOREWORD!

 

First of all, it's

1. Very distracting, I tend to focus more on the gifs and pictures.

2. stupid, why do you include pointless pictures?

3. Creates lag. I won't read your fic if it makes my laptop and ipodtouch freeze.

4. Time consuming. I have to scroll down and waste time to reach the bottom.

 

Those are some of the big reasons why including numerous gifs and pointless pictures are a big nono. Unless the pictures are other story related posters, and character charts, there shouldn't be any other stuff beside your foreword and description writing. 

 

 

And I might've been advertising ( I know, I'm lame) for my story Reflection, but hey         it was a good example xD.

 

 

Sorry if my writing was stupid, too informal, or offending. I didn't mean to talk that way! I just let my sarcastic side out A-LOT when I write here! Anyways, my laptop is lagging so TOODLES.

 

 

 

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Makirei
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JKNewsandDavidSo #1
Chapter 5: lOLOL Bro most of the time people who are reading the story are like the underage fans or those who only read the popular ones xD Man I remember back then when I thought Goddess was the bomb and now I look back and I'm just like, "Nope." I mean it's an ok storyline (Esp Dear diary, Woohyun's a Jerk and The Dull One" But everything is SOOO CLICHE!!!!

I was just watching some random fanfic trailers and I came across one that caught my eye, "TWO FACED" I clicked on it and the trailer D ! The resources they used was pretty grainy and all the words only came on for like 1-2 seconds and the majority of it were covered by black clouds -_- I checked the comment section and all I see is, "OMG YOU DON'T KNOW HOW GOOD THIS STORY IS!" or "GREAT TRAILER AUTHOR-NIM(Ugh cringe)" I checked out the story link and the first thing I noticed is that it was a Wattpad story -_- No offense but the majority of Kpop writers on there is like 10-15 yr olds who can't write for and has like the worst grammar ever. I sighed and clicked on. Guess what? It . Like there was no details and if there was it would be so vague and I had no insight on what was happening and stuff. Regarding your last chapter, she DOESN'T FREAKIN USE PARAGRAPHS FOR EVERY DIALOGUE AND I'M LIKE WHY?!?!? You wanna know one more thing? It was a story, oh my god I like cringed. I stopped before I finished the first chapter. TBH the people in the comment section has no idea what they're talking about or either has never seen GOOD writing before. Like do you even read books?
Melone
#2
Chapter 15: if the readers complain about the small fonts, then they should know that aff had provided the "make readable" for absolutely nothing.
OfficialBestfriend #3
Chapter 15: heheh , I read all your rants. I agree with you especially with fonts, I don't like small fonts and when I read , I really enlarge the letters , because I feel lazy when the letters are small.
jongup-mooned-me
#4
Chapter 15: I think it's just extremely funny that I agree with 99% of this hahaha xD
jongup-mooned-me
#5
Chapter 15: I think it's just extremely funny that I agree with 99% of this hahaha xD
jongup-mooned-me
#6
Chapter 15: I think it's just extremely funny that I agree with 99% of this hahaha xD
liurinyu
#7
Chapter 15: yeah yeah your example above surely annoying to read XD
liurinyu
#8
Chapter 14: at first, i thought it was real that you really described your fanfic in the way that you rant at haha
liurinyu
#9
Chapter 14: it's so funny that you even use one of your fanfic to give us the example about the pointless pictures lol