Rant 4: Dialogue
Rants of an AFF Girl
When people don't begin a new paragraph when writing a character's dialogue.
Ex: I was feeling very tired and my eyes lazily scanned the room. " I am so sleepy." I proclaimed. "Why?" asked Sally. " I'm not sure." I replied. Sally looked at me funny, but she just shrugged. "Okay."
It just makes the writing look very messy and unorganized too. I really dislike when authors do that. When I see it, I almost start to cry T.T
You have to start a new paragraph people, PLEASE.
Why can't you just do:
" I am so sleepy.: I proclaimed, my eyes were lazily scanning the room.
" Why?" Sally asked.
OR
" I'm not sure." I replied. Sally looked at me funny. but she shrugged.
"Okay.
Then again, this is just my opinion, so YEAH .
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