Rant 7: Overprotective Brothers.

Rants of an AFF Girl

 

 

My brother Jonghyun is the overprotective type of brother.

 

NOW THIS STATEMENT UP THERE IS SO ANNOYING. I see this in a lot of fics, and it's just so cliche. Why the hell do brothers have to be over protective?  MOST BROTHERS ARE LIKE THOSE NASTY LITTLE BOOGERS YOU FEEL UP YOUR NOSE THAT YOU CANNOT GET OUT. I don't HATE the whole over protective , it's just so overused, and most of the time, it's not even done correctly. 

 

Here are some examples of fics with the whole brother thing that doesn't make sense to me:

 

1. You are a nerd. Every girl hates you because you are so smart and PRETTY. Your brother is part of a notorious gang called Big Bang. He is very protective over you, and beats anyone who touches you.

Okay, first of all, why the are you still being bullied when you have a badass as your brother? And if your brother loves you so much, he SHOULD know that you were being bullied, cause he's in a frickin gang. He must have connections.

 

2. My brother is like my dad, he always watches over me. He's so overprotective that it's annoying. My boyfriend Jonghyun walked me home today, and when I arrived home, I saw my brother watching TV. It was already 1 in the morning.

I see this ALL the time. If your bro was so darn protective, he wouldn't even let you stay out at night with your BF, or even HAVE a BF. 

 

I can't think of anymore examples now, but I assume you get my gist. 

 

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JKNewsandDavidSo #1
Chapter 5: lOLOL Bro most of the time people who are reading the story are like the underage fans or those who only read the popular ones xD Man I remember back then when I thought Goddess was the bomb and now I look back and I'm just like, "Nope." I mean it's an ok storyline (Esp Dear diary, Woohyun's a Jerk and The Dull One" But everything is SOOO CLICHE!!!!

I was just watching some random fanfic trailers and I came across one that caught my eye, "TWO FACED" I clicked on it and the trailer D ! The resources they used was pretty grainy and all the words only came on for like 1-2 seconds and the majority of it were covered by black clouds -_- I checked the comment section and all I see is, "OMG YOU DON'T KNOW HOW GOOD THIS STORY IS!" or "GREAT TRAILER AUTHOR-NIM(Ugh cringe)" I checked out the story link and the first thing I noticed is that it was a Wattpad story -_- No offense but the majority of Kpop writers on there is like 10-15 yr olds who can't write for and has like the worst grammar ever. I sighed and clicked on. Guess what? It . Like there was no details and if there was it would be so vague and I had no insight on what was happening and stuff. Regarding your last chapter, she DOESN'T FREAKIN USE PARAGRAPHS FOR EVERY DIALOGUE AND I'M LIKE WHY?!?!? You wanna know one more thing? It was a story, oh my god I like cringed. I stopped before I finished the first chapter. TBH the people in the comment section has no idea what they're talking about or either has never seen GOOD writing before. Like do you even read books?
Melone #2
Chapter 15: if the readers complain about the small fonts, then they should know that aff had provided the "make readable" for absolutely nothing.
OfficialBestfriend #3
Chapter 15: heheh , I read all your rants. I agree with you especially with fonts, I don't like small fonts and when I read , I really enlarge the letters , because I feel lazy when the letters are small.
jongup-mooned-me #4
Chapter 15: I think it's just extremely funny that I agree with 99% of this hahaha xD
jongup-mooned-me #5
Chapter 15: I think it's just extremely funny that I agree with 99% of this hahaha xD
jongup-mooned-me #6
Chapter 15: I think it's just extremely funny that I agree with 99% of this hahaha xD
liurinyu #7
Chapter 15: yeah yeah your example above surely annoying to read XD
liurinyu #8
Chapter 14: at first, i thought it was real that you really described your fanfic in the way that you rant at haha
liurinyu #9
Chapter 14: it's so funny that you even use one of your fanfic to give us the example about the pointless pictures lol
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