broken hearts░broken promises.

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But...You promised...

Though most people won't believe it, Choi Seunghyun, heir to the prestigious Choi Enterprises, has always lived a difficult life. His parents divorced back when he was younger, his father is one of the strictest parents in all of history, and he's expected to take part in a business that he has absolutely no interest in. However, there was one person who brightened up his entire world. Her name? Park Bom: An aspiring singer whom Seunghyun encountered while he was visiting his mother in a small town. The young woman offered him shelter once he discovered that his mother had died in the eighteen years of his life that he had not been permitted to see her (courtesy of his father, of course), and kept him company as he healed.

And they fell in love.

However, Seunghyun's father eventually discovered his son's whereabouts, and demanded that he return back to Seoul to learn more of the company's trades. Forced to abide by his father's wishes, Seunghyun warily says his goodbyes to Bom.

But... how will their relationship fare while they are apart?


Foreword

{P r o l o g u e}

"Y-You're leaving me?" Her eyes had widened at his words, tears already beginning to form within them as the snow continued to lightly dance around the two of them. He had asked her to come with him outside once she had finished closing up her small coffee shop, but this news was something that she had definitely not expected.

The brunet beside her couldn't find it in him to stare at her directly, and had instead opted for staring at the ground below him. "I have to, Bommie."

The helplessness within her only felt like it was growing as she whispered, "B-But I thought that..." I thought that you liked it here. With me.

As though he could hear her thoughts, he felt his heart constrict painfully and moved to grab her hand. His brown eyes met her's, still glistening with tears, as he whispered back, "I do. And as soon as I settle everything back home, I'm going to come back. And we can start our whole lives over. Just the two of us. You and me. We'll make it work."

It seemed like her tears could no longer prolong their fall, and they slowly trickled out of her eyes as she struggled to form some kind of response.

His heart twisted even more as he leaned towards her to kiss away her tears. However, the contact did nothing to calm the slightly younger girl, and her tears streaked down her face even more rapidly.

So instead, he pulled her into a tight embrace, affectionately whispering into her ear, "I promise."

Her heart pounded faster at his words, but she looked up at him and managed a cute, "What kind of promise?"

Seunghyun smiled at her, noticing that her tears had momentarily halted, "Why, a pinky promise of course." At her curious frown he raised her hand to intertwine his pinky with her's, "A pinky promise: The most sacred vow that two people can ever make with each other." The skepticalness remained on her features, so he forced his expressions to brighten, "Bommie-ah. I, Seunghyun, pinky promise that by this time next year, I'll be back here. In this small town. Right next to you. And I pinky promise that as soon as I come back, I'll never leave you. Ever again."

Slowly, her features managed to form a light smile, though the tears in her eyes still glistened brightly. 

Taking this as an agreement, the man pulled her close to him, bringing her face towards his, and enveloping her in a tight embrace.

"I love you."

The night's snow continued to fall from above, perhaps as a sort of omen.

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Hello! Wishful here. :3

I know I've been juggling a lot of projects lately, but once I saw this contest, I just couldn't let the opportunity pass me by. This is an entry for the just smile ━ aff writing contest by Ai-Rinnie. Here's the prompt:

I want to say something like, "Oh, this isn't going to be very long!" but unfortunately, I can't. XD I don't have all the chapters typed out yet, but my extremely thorough outline and I have planned for this beautiful piece of work to be a total of six chapters, with an epilogue. I promise that it'll be worth it though, and I hope you enjoy this story! ^^;;

If you're interested in reading more of my work, I have another story out (in which TOPBOM is also one of the main couples ;3), called Complicated Emotions.

Thank you to everyone who took a chance and clicked on this story. ^^ I hope to not let you down!

I'd also like to credit -PenPen at The Wishful Thoughts Shoppe for the lovely graphics. :3


Reviews
Boom Shakalaka Review Shop (reviewed BEFORE the story was officially wrapped up; they give AMAZING reviews, so I highly suggest checking them out. The reviewer, vvipforseungri, actually helped me with some of the edits for my story so I give her a LOT of credit. Go request there, guys. XD)


 

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Lucky-seven777
#1
Chapter 5: Yeah, man up dude.
Lucky-seven777
#2
Chapter 3: Oh, god no, not this again. *sigh*
flyingbearcookies
#3
btw get one more person to sub :D
flyingbearcookies
#4
Chapter 9: damnit i loved this story :D hehe and seriously? FIFTH? BUTTTTT damnit you should be first what is this person thinking omg
BaconsWife
#5
Chapter 8: What?! Jeongmal?! Jinjja!
This is fifth place! This should be on the first!
It's do dramatic, and the prologue is attractive! :)
This is the best fanfic I read, TOPBOM COUPLE!
BlackjackPride #6
Chapter 9: You are... the best.. writer... in AFF... AND THE WORLD. I mean like seriously, what?? The authors corner just... it blew my mind. Who would have known there were all these hidden details that made the story the way it is? That's a true writer I tell you, and I must say, I envy your writing skills, I'm serious about this, you have my respect and admiration (and in my opinion YOU should have won the contest). If I were you I would consider writing as a living or something, you really have a talent, don't waste it!
ChibiCheonsa
#7
Chapter 9: I actually got the story even before the explanation in the author's corner ^^ I just wasn't sure as to how Seunghyun passed on the poison without dying first XP Great story! I really loved it!
firegirl6464
#8
Chapter 8: Oh my God, this was just absolutely amazing. I just loved it so much! The symbolism was just perfect! Everything was beautiful! Definitely one of the best fanfics I've ever read!
shannonigan
#9
Chapter 9: this story was so good and i really REALLY liked it :D