until destiny returns.

Description

They run together, hand-in-hand, as though they are infinite: smiles spread brightly across their features, eyes twinkling with joy, love pouring from his heart to hers.

It's been like this time and time again, and Chanyeol is willing to do anything if it means making sure that nothing changes the perfection that he knows as Choi Jinri.


 

Foreword

Title: until destiny returns.
Pairing: chanlli
Genre: romance
Rating: PG
Length: one-shot; 8,158 words

also posted on livejournal.

An entry for "The Sky Is the Limit" Round 4: Subround 3
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entry for subround one)
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entry for subround two)


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xiaopanduh #1
Chapter 1: Damn. My heart is seriously in danger of jumping out of my chest and burrowing itself in a patch of dirt to cry in.

Your writing is so beautiful and the plot of this story is heartbreaking but yet so satisfying. Thank you for a wonderful story.

Now off I go to buy another box of tissues ;;-;;
-purplebunny #2
Chapter 1: I just read this story last night and OMG. I dunno what to feel now. At first, it seemed like it was going to have a happy ending, with the two of them always ending up with each other in each lifetime but then the actual ending comes then BAAM, an unexpected twist and I AM DROWNING IN SADNESS. For Chanyeol. For Jinri, even. For the what could have beens.
Though in retrospect, I guess the little hints were all there. How Chanyeol seemed to need Jinri more than she needed him.

And and and it's just so heartrendingly sad how she's his entire life whereas he's nothing more than a "chapter" in hers.
I'm currently living in the post-haze of this story's awesomeness and I want to thank you for writing such a beautiful piece. You did a really great job and even if it's long overdue, CONGRATULATIONS for winning the contest.
Kudos to you. =)
mountaine
#3
and it hurts. and this is like the first chanlli fanfiction i've ever read. and it's absolutely beautiful. and you write so flawlessly. and the concept is really just...wow. and you won for this? and...double wow. AND WOW. REINCARNATION JUST MAKES EVERYTHING IN THIS STORY GO ROUND AND GOSH, ISN'T IT JUST REALLY TOO BITTERSWEET THAT THEY WOULDN'T EVEN END UP TOGETHER? AND...AND...i should just stop using AND now. this is really really really inspiring. you deserved this! /two thumbs up
aeterniti
#4
OHMYGOD I JUST NOTICED THAT YOU WON LIKE AHHHHHHHH I KNEW YOU COULD DO IT JESS AH I'M SO HAPPY FOR YOU /TEARS/

I still haven't had time to read any of your recent stories. I couldn't even read the layhan yet ;A;

BUT AH I'M SO PROUD OF YOU YOU'RE SO AMAZING CONGRATULATIONS! :D
dindots
#5
Chapter 1: WOW just WOW.. your writing style so great, I like it (:
okay just admitt it that I'm a chanlli shipper as well and feel glad that you choose to write a story about them.. thank you ^^
chan22 #6
Chapter 1: OHMYGOSH THIS FIC IS SO BEAUTIFUL! omg criesss my otp. standing applause for u author-nim *0*
katana27 #7
Chapter 1: Chanyeol should have refused the papers and tell her that we could make this work, Chanyeol should have said no, Chanyeol should have done what is right for both of them and not just for her! I don't know why but i just really get affected easily, and i thought they were meant to be, but i'm not the author here just a mere reader :) and i like it! though it wasn't the ending that i thought it would have it was REALLY GOOD!, DAEBAK!, but i honestly think that jinri still loves chanyeol though she was the one asking for it. It was a romantic yet a sad story, You are a really good author and thank you for writing this story :) hope you'll write more chanlli fics because they are one of my otp's but you could do whatever story you want :)) thank you authornim, will be waiting for more from you MORE POWER TO YOU :))
azuraes #8
omg please update soon hehe
gyueing
#9
CONGRATULATIONS U_U YOU REALLY DESERVE THIS!!! AND IT'S CHANLLI AND FEELS ARE ALL OVER THE PLACE I CANT-