Speaking Abbreviated

Chiao's Notebook

So many discontinued conversations,

Aborted discussions.

Unfinished thoughts that pop into our heads

When we're far apart.

 

Does the world have enough time

For us to say all we have to say?

Does the clock have enough minutes

To one day complete all our cogitation?

 

Exchanges retired,

Locutions obstructed.

Continually intermittent

Long stories hyphenated and strung together

One after the next.

Hoping not to forget important portions.

Always omitting one element or another.

 

Maybe one day the thought train

Will finally unload its complete cargo.

When we're old and grey

And have nothing to entertain us

 

But the sound of our words. 

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C_a_r_o_LL
#1
this story is awesome!!!
KauType #2
Chapter 25: Tea is no Substitute makes me think. Was Chiao thinking of Hong Hua or of Carol when she wrote this one? Maybe the lines were even blurred? Both girls left Chiao. Though her girlfriend left in "slumber" by her own death, Carol left when Chiao was kind of sleeping-ish, right? Sniffle, can I hug Chiao now?
soupah #3
Chapter 24: Yes! New Chapter! More HongHua. Always HongHua. Poor Chiao :(
soupah #4
Will you be updating this with new entires any time soon?
therries #5
Whaaat?? Naughty deleted scenes?!?? Lol you've got my attention! XD I can't wait to read that! I'll be reading the rest of your stories in the meantime. I love your writing! <3
missterious
#6
@therries thanks so much! welllll i dunno if you read rated fics but there IS a rated offshoot in the works. basically the so-called 'deleted scenes' that i decided to leave out to have the fic rating more nc17/pg than xxx :) so if that's something you might enjoy, stay tuned!! and chiao's notebook is ongoing, so you'll still be able to be in chiao's head for a while ;)
therries #7
I just finished Nerds, Dorks and Jerks <3 I love that you continued on with this offshoot of Chiao's Notebook! It was nice to see her perspective and emotions during certain events in the main story. I wish it didn't end though!!! lol I would have happily just kept reading chapter after chapter X3