MAKING THE MOVE

THIS LOVE 2

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THIS LOVE 2
by Carmen w.
Chapter 11: MAKING THE MOVE
Setting: YG'S Dance Studio

2NE1 is now practicing the new dance for their next single "I Don't Care".

Bom: (Struggling and stopped dancing) Ergh!

Minji: You're having trouble?

Bom: Kinda..heheh..It's just...too many things to remember! Once I got this down, I have a feeling I won't remember the step to "Fire"!

CL: You're thinking the wrong way Bom! Keep it together, you'll learn it!

Bom: (Whined)...ahh fine

Minji: Wait, can you call Dara again please

CL: She got home soo late yesterday

Bom: Yeah! well she can't miss dance practice!

CL: ugh, (dailed number) I have a feeling she's deeply asleep...you already know how she is

Bom: Well keep calling! If she miss this, then hell! Our performance for Music Bank is gonna be ruin!

Minji: SHH! (to Bom)

Bom pout her lips and gave a depressing look, then reached out for water.

after 35 seconds...

Dara: Hello? (Tiredly)

CL: (Whisper to the others) OMG! SHE PICKED UP....hello!!? Dara?

Dara: Mornin CL! Whats goin on? Where are you guys?

CL: Well missy...YOU DO know that today there is dance practice!!

Dara: Oh snap! (got up and ran to the bathroom) When were you guys there!!? Am I late? How come you didn't wake me up?

CL: Well...Minji told us to leave you alone cus were guessing you got home pretty late last night

Dara:Oh I'm super sorry! I'll be there soon!!

CL: Alright but hurry up before YG comes and ch-

(door open and it was YG)

CL: Oh! He's here! Bye! (Hung up)

Yang Goon: Hey girls, what's up? How come you guys aren't practicing?

Bom: Oh haha juussst taking a break (giggled slyly)

Yang Goon: I see (Look around) Where is...

CL: Oh Dara? She's...buying us breakfast haha...Just around the corner!

Yang Goon: Oh I was asking about Dae Sung..He said he's gonna come and see you girls

Minji: Dae Sung?

Yang Goon: Yeah, he called and wanted to check on you girls...I don't know why but he seems anxious

Bom: Oh...Alright...What about Tae Yang...........and the others heheheh...(Smiled and giggled in a suspicious way)

Yang Goon: Eee..I don't know, but I think Ji Yong might stop by to the studio today..ya know he's a really busy man..(sigh) a solo album coming up...all by himself...(Sigh again) I remember he use to be this little little boy...Whose still such an amateur to music but...his strive is obvious...(sigh again) He was like my son...Now he got a girlfriend and a humongous fanbase and money...(sigh...) I-

(Door opened and Dara appeared breathing hard)

The girls and YG looked over

Dara: I'm sorry! I'm so sorry!

The girls looked at each other knowing that CL's "lie" is soon to be doomed

CL: OHH! BUT, it's fine it's fine! IF THEY DON'T HAVE EGGS TODAY THEN....THE BETTER THE DIET! hahaha....

Dara: (confused look)...Uh..Right right..heheh..Mornin Yang Goon! haha

Yang Goon: Mornin, so wheres the food?

Dara: uh....um..

Bom: Since Dara just...texted me about...how..um they don't have eggs today...then we obviously don't want our toast without eggs! So, we'll have brunch later!

Dara: Ohhh! Yeah, (sigh in relief) Gosh! Dunkin Donuts never have eggs this early! Sheesh what business! (winked to the girls)

Yang Goon: Um...okay girls, well don't starve yourself okay?And when Jiyong comes tell him I say hi!

Dara: Ji Yongs coming!? (face in awed)

Yang Goon: Uh, yes he and Dae Sungs stopping by...haha whats with the face Dara?

Dara: Oh haha..Nothing, cus yeah nothing

Yang Goon: Okay..well seeya girls

Dara: (Turned around and smiled)

BOM: OKAY! So...Minji!! please help Dara with the steps while I take a break

Dara: No guys! Were doing this together!

(Scene cut to Dae Sung & Seung Ri outside in YG's studio)

Dae Sung: Are you sure about this??

Seung Ri: Man! You are lookin fly today! Of course Minji would say yes!...Wait wait, more importantly...Do I look good? haha (posed and smile widely)

Dae Sung: You...look like Seung Ri, but with a bowtie

Seung Ri: Ugh...I wish Bom would atleast TRY to talk to me...She never cares

Dae Sung: Shoot, Minji NEVER cares

Seung Ri: Okay, so teeth check!

Dae Sung: You're good...okay what about mines? (show teeth)

Seung Ri: Whiter then snow heheh!

Dae Sung: Okay.....OH! Does my breath smell like any sorta mint?

Seung Ri: (sniff)..You're good bro! (sigh..) lets do this

The boys walked in the dance studio

Dae Sung: Hey girls!

CL: Hey Dae Sung!

Dara: Ji Yong?..

Seung Ri: Hey girlys!

Minji: Ah Seung Ri, why are you here?

Seung Ri: Ah, just wanted to visit...hehe ya know...Hey Bommie (gave a smirk)

Bom: Ha-hey Seung Ri!

Seung Ri: Hows it goin? (Walked over to Bom)

Bom: I'm fine, were just...ya know dancing

Seung RI: Oh, sweet

CL: Okay, well me and Daras gonna go down for a sandwich...cus ya know were starving!!

(CL winked at Dae Sung and Seung Ri, knwoing obvious that they're trying to make a move)

CL: (To Dara) Haha, imagine how bad they fail

Dara: Oh ya never know, haha and awww you saw what Seung Ri is wearing!?..

Dara&CL: A bowtieeee...aww

Scene cut back to the studio

Bom/Minji and Seungri/DaeSung sat down on the floor bored, and trying to figure out a convo

Bom: So....I heard Ji Yongs coming

Seung ri: Oh yeah, well probably in like a hour...He's with Hyori bike riding

Bom: Aw, I miss Hyori..

Seung Ri: Yep (Sigh)....Um...(Looked at Dae Sung and told him to make his move to another spot) *whispered* move!

Dae Sung: Hey Minji, you wanna see this new dance move I learned?!

Minji: Hm, Alright (Got up and left)

Bom: (gulped nervously, knowing she's alone with Seung Ri)...So...um..

Seung Ri: So (smiled and got closer)...um, I just want to ask you a question

BOM: Oh...heheh, what is it?

Seung Ri: Um, It's kinda hard to say but...

Bom: (Gulped again)...if you really..do not want to say it then it's..fine hahah...or..

Seung Ri: Do you want to hangout ...sometimes (smiled and looked her in the eyes)

Bom: Hangout? Yeah, of course

Seung Ri: Wow Great...what about tonight?

Bom: With the others too..right?

Seung Ri: No, Bom...With me..the two of us

Bom: Seung Ri...

Seung Ri: If you want! Ya know, I don't want to make this awkard or anything I mean I'm a nice dude and I think you're an awesome girl..I just want to...know you better

Bom:....Sounds good, alright tonight then

Seung Ri: movie?

Bom: (nod) mhmm (smiled)

Seung Ri: Okay! Plus dinner! All on me! (smiled happily)

Bom: Okay, cool Seung Ri! can't wait..

Seung Ri: Me too! Well, thats really why I'm here today, just to talk to you haha....(POV: Oh damn, I think she thinks I have a major crush on her now!)

Bom: Aww thats soo sweet Seung Ri! I'm glad you spoken up (grin)..And whats goin on with those two?

Seung Ri: Oh, you already know how Dae Sung is...He is in love with her

Bom: I can see, well...I pretty much knew it! haha...But the thing is...I don't think she likes him that much

Seung Ri: Oh, don't say that! Dae Sungs the man

Bom: (Sigh) I have a feeling though...

Scene cut to Dae Sung and Minji

Dae Sung: Ya like the dance hehe

Minji: It was cute (nod)

Dae Sung: Well.........

Minji: I have a question

Dae Sung: (Gulped) Whats..up?

Minji: Why do I have a feeling that...that I talk to you more then the other boys (giggled)

Dae Sung: Haha, GOOD QUESTION....haha well you should think about that girl

Minji:...No clue (closed eyes and look at Dae Sung)

Dae Sung: Heres a hint, you're a very different person...That I always wish to have..knew

Minji: (Blushed)...Gosh..

Dae Sung: And, I've never met a girl that is so mysterious and quiet...but her talented can just make a person say.."wow, that girl is beyond your expectation" Ya know, it's just that

Minji: ..So...do you want to..say anything else?

Dae Sung: Well, if you don't mind...Do you want to hangout....sometime?

Minji: Sure (smiled confidently)

Dae Sung: Really?!

Minji: So you're asking me out huh?

Dae Sung: inevitably....yes i am

Minji: Okay...I say..yes

Dae Sung: Tonight then?

Minji: Oh! There is gonna be a concert tonight! I...wanna go!

Dae Sung: Then were going! Haha, whos playing?

Minji: Oh It's a underground dance thing...Not exactly a concert but more like a street show in a underground area...Think...Fight Club but for dancers haha

Dae Sung: Wow that sounds amazing, I could never imagine yourself in a environment like that

Minji: I've been there a couple of time before 2NE1, so it's a amazing time! You would probably love it

Dae Sung: Me? really? haha Well, Alright I can't wait

Minji: (Smiled) Me too..

Dara&CL: HEY GUYS! (giggled)

bom: girls!

CL: Woah, you guys are seperated...Dae Sung..Minji....

Dara: haha Seung Ri..Bom..!

Minji: Alright let's get back to the dance

Dara: Haha...Had...Ji Yong stop by?

Bom: Nah, but...this is like the 5th time you mentioned his name....Why?

Dara: Oh, I was just asking a question! Nothing big!..

CL: Oh...I think he's here

Dara: (Look toward the door)

Out came...G-DRAGON

Dae Sung: JI YONG!

Seung Ri: You came!!

G-Dragon: Hey morning people! What's up

Along came Hyori

Hyori: Hey guys!

Bom: Hyori!!!

CL: Hyori unnie!

Dara's excitement toned down because of Hyori prescence..

Hyori: Wow...Everyone's here!

Bom: Yeah, except Tae Yang..

Hyori: You're right..WELL! I heard the song..DARA! It's absoultely amazing!

Dara: Oh really! hahah..thank you thank you..

Ji Yong: I'm in love with it, I've actually went put it in my ipod because it was in my head the whole night!

Dara: Wow...That's awesome! I'm glad you liked..it

Ji Yong: yeah, well why are you boys here?

Seung Ri: Oh just chillin with the girls (winked at Dae Sung, knowing he 'got' the girl)

Dae Sung: Yup, well...(whispered to Minji) I'll call you later on tonight (smiled and went off with Seung Ri)

Seung Ri: (sigh)...Ah..well its time to go! SEE YAAA LATERS!

G-Dragon: Aw why so soon? It's cus of me right!? Don't be scared

Seung Ri: Um....never that..Dae Sung, let's go...Bye Bom!..Bye girls!

CL: Peace!

Hyori:(Whispered to Bom) Tell me NOW!

Bom: What! haha...

Hyori: I know he did something, whats goin on!

Bom: He....asked me out for a movie..thats all (smiled and looked down)

Hyori: But I thought you..

Bom: Yeah, I just feel sorry for the guy...I just want to make it up to him just for hanging out with him for ONLY ONCE...and thats it!

Hyori: Wow, thats pretty harsh though

Bom: ..Sometimes, a girl gotta do..what a girls gotta do

Hyori: Haha..smart move..

Scene cut to Dae Sung and Seung Ri

Seung Ri: SCORE!

DAE SUNG: GOAL!!

Seung Ri: Oh! you going out tonight?!

Dae Sung: PLUS the numero!

Seung Ri: OOOOH you cool you cool

Dae Sung: Where you going tonight?

Seung Ri: Movies man (wink wink)

Dae Sung:...Oh, well im apparently going to a "underground" dance fest..

Seung Ri: Boo...so not romantic

Dae Sung: Well, if thats where Minji wanna go then that's whats gonna happen ya know

Seung Ri: AH! i can't believe we FINALLY did it!

Dae Sung: I know!...And she answered me soo....comfortably...Omg, I could've never imagined it e that perfect!

Seung Ri: Dang, you're hyped...I still don't know about Bom...she seem nervous the whole time

Dae Sung: Yeah Minji, was sorta weird about it and...I don't know, pretty manly about it...Like she can tell I'm gonna ask her out..

Seung Ri: Well all in all! WE GOT THE GIRLS!

Dae Sung: OH YEAH!

(Dae Sung and Seung Ri gave their buddy handshake and left the building in smiles...waiting for tonight..)

Fnished: AUG 1, 2010 9:36PM

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teddiebears #1
just popping in to older fics to say hi .u.
jung_natasha #2
Chapter 19: oh my god.. i felt like wanna strangle GD and Dara!!!Poor Hyori..they treated her like an idiot.
EmpressCee
#3
Chapter 19: Ugh GD! UPDATE SOON!!
hyojungx
#4
Ufh gd ....
sushmita
#5
Chapter 19: Seriously gd is really stupid how can he just kiss dara when hes going out with hyori I hope he knows what he's lost when hyori becomes a model and she is treating him how he's treated her.
leia100
#6
thats messed up D:< poor hyori i hope she finds out and dumps him >:( grrr
Smiley7229
#7
please update! i luv this story and im going to subscribe for more!
Mindless64
#8
Daesung/Minzy<3
BabymooKpopLuvver
#9
Heyya carmen<br />
it's me molly <br />
please update soon <br />
I absolutly love this story sooooo much<br />
lots of love and comments<br />
from molly xx<3
_zhennn #10
Your fic is real good! Updated soon >D Urgh but GD and Dara are so mean!