Chapter 11

In Too Deep
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Hi baby! 

 

Not a minute after it was sent, a reply was received. 

 

So what did your girlfriend say about the songs you've written for her?

 

He dialed her number but she didn't pick up. 

 

Tsk. 

 

Pick up the phone, babe. Please. 

 


No pants on with a white shirt. Really? 

 

 

 

Let me explain. 

 

 

You're forever 25 to me. Won't ever change, babe, 5 x 5, babe. Huh. 

 

 

He keeps on dialing her number. She kept declining the call.

 

My girlfriend. My girlfriend. She ain't no side chick mistress girlfriend.  That's nice. 

 

She's now being sarcastic. He knows it. He was supposed to share the meaning of the song lyrics which is why he texted her first. He knew that she doesn't have a schedule now. However, that took a turn when she texted him with the songs' lyrics. All he wanted to do now is talk to her and explain.

 

Everyone in the world sees us and they're jealous.  Yeah, I am and it hurts like hell. 

 

Reading that hurt him instantly like being hit by a basketball right into the chest so hard he can't breathe. He dialed again but failed. She blocked him.

 

He drove to their apartment but no sight of her. He texted and called everyone who he thinks can help him find her.

 

Don't

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cecexx #1
Chapter 11: Well... when the author mentioned the famous "Pancit canton chili mansi flavor" Im pretty sure Camellia is Dara. And Pancil Canton is from the Philippines... so yeah. Camilia = Dara. 😊
limitedtokki888 #2
Always waiting!update please!!
Lvra86 #3
Update please!
liezlpentecostes
#4
At the bigenning of this story, I feel heartbroken for the wife. I don't know if I can continue reading on this because of the incoming outcome but I can say that it is a good story because it can affect the readers emotionally. Kekeke
Naddyfa #5
Chapter 10: pls tell which one is dara
Lvra86 #6
Chapter 10: I can't understand who is who. Is Camellia - Kiko and Dianne -Dara? Or vice versa?
Lvra86 #7
Chapter 10: I can't understand who is who. Is Camellia - Kiko and Dianne -Dara? Or vice versa?
Apols_2009
#8
Chapter 9: This is really good read mapapaisip ka talaga eh while reading it for me to know who's who
Iamkpopprincess #9
Its kinda confusing but will wait for your update..