Stay A Little More

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It had been 2 years since their freedom. 

Jiyong was in the hospital after his morning classes, getting rehabilitation to learn how to walk. 

The doctor was impressed with his eerily quick progress. He didn't tell them he would practice moving his legs all by himself at wee hours of the night.

He was still unable to walk for more than few minutes before collapsing. His legs losing their nerves when he was off the machine... but Jiyong couldn't complain. The feeling of even walking a few minutes without a hold was so immensely thrilling, no other emotion could compare to it.

Seungri would come by the end of the day from his cooking school and push Jiyong's wheelchair back home from the hospital. They lived in a humble apartment with a minimalistic design and a few art sketches here and there that Seungri had made by getting inspired by the others' writings.

Time passed very calmly and soon they both would have a career waiting for them. Just a few more months until they had both graduated.

But, things did not go as planned. 

Sometime later, Seungri would become severely ill. 

He would struggle to eat and would have sharp pains around his pelvic area. 

A few days later, he would walk with a limp. 

 

"Please get me an ambulance!" Jiyongs' voice is shrill and strained. He breaks down into uncontrollable sobs the minute the line goes off and the woman on the other end assures him an ambulance will be reaching him in a few. He is cradling Seungris' thin and weak body in his arms, "You will be okay! The ambulance is on it's way!"

"Y...ou...should.. no..t..." Is the others' shaky answer. 

"What the is wrong with you!? No one will know you there! I will be there to protect you! Stop talking! Please just don't strain yourself!"

"J...iyon...g... I-" tears start filling at the corner of Seungris' eyes, "I'm...sorry..."

"What!?" Jiyongs' lips quiver and he is shaking even more frantically than before, "For what!? There is nothing to apologise for!" 

Theres' a faint smile on the others' lips just as the sirens are heard outside. 

 

 

"He..." The doctor takes a deep breath, "I'm shocked he lived that long with such a brutal wound on his body...." He sighs then, as if in disbelief of his report, "How could someone go through what he did... and still live this long?" 

"Please tell me what is wrong with him, doctor." Jiyong demands firmly. 

The said person gives him a long look, as if reading his expressions to deliver the news according to it. 

"He has something called... necrosis... it occurs when cells in particular part of the body start dying..."

Jiyongs' ears catch on the word 'dying', "What? What will happen to him?" He unintentionally scratches his wheelchairs' armrest, the torn material and his reddening finger tips are visible. 

"The place where he was damaged in the past... I believe it is due to the trauma... the chemical burning his skin that the reaction was so slow, b

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Angiekiedis85
#1
Chapter 11: My poor Ri my poor Ri🥺 I would have loved an extra chapter to have a little glimpse into Jiyong's future, after Ri. thank u authoring this was lovely sad buy lovely
JIRI8890
#2
Chapter 11: I'm cry cry 😭 beautiful story
ninadebrov23 #3
Chapter 11: This iss soo beautiful authornim. The way you portrayed their characters and the ending are cheff kiss. Im crying 😭💙
starrider5
#4
Chapter 10: I'M ING SOBBING THIS WAS TRULY BEAUTIFUL 😭😭 i love your writing so much!!!!
bhoomika
#5
Chapter 11: I cried so hard😭😭 TT it was really beautiful author-nim♥ all yours words inspired mee!!thank you so much for the story😍
Dollhouse32123
#6
Don't mind me, I'm just re-reading because I can't afford therapy, okay?! 😤
Is not like that's my favorite story or anythi- ok, being the Tsundere is not my role in this ship dynamic...
Angelicat #7
Chapter 11: I cried so hard with this story, the feelings, the intense love, I totally fell hard for it. Also I remembered the song “R.O.D.”. I love your plots, they are so different and also in someway I can connect with them, thank you :)
TOPkat
#8
Chapter 11: You hit me with the lana del ray Young and beautiful. Having me crying. This story is soo beautiful and heartbreaking. I absolutely love it.
haennaseyo
#9
Chapter 11: I really cried. This is heartbreaking and beautiful. Thank you
Dollhouse32123
#10
Chapter 11: So bittersweet: at the same time is heartbreaking all the scene played so beautifully in my head in that way you described.
The atmosphere of all the chapter actually gave the ending a tone that felt more realistic, even being sad the scene and their dialogue was so romantic. Is it weird that I it made the story even more heartwarming to me?
We knew this would happen at the last chapter, and I loved how you deal with them talking about how Seungri would spend his last days and how he said he wanted jiyong to be happy after him.... That dialogue made me cry, you explored the most sad part and didn't felt tragic, instead explored their perspective on it in a manner emphasized their love for each other and how Seungri's last days would be as good as they both can make it.
It makes you really feel the meaning of the title, reinforced how much they were important to one another, added a very necessary and beautiful scene.... I absolutely loved this epilogue, thank you so much.
Congratulations for everything, I really thought you could not make this one better.
("Young and Beautiful" don't just fit on the story context, but the fact is on the "The Great Gatsby" movie, and here our Korean Gatsby is about to pass away... it might be alternative universe, but it gave the tears an extra push...TT) Keep up with the great work! <3