Welcome to the Reviews section, in this part, I’ll be briefly explaining this. 

The status of your character will be divided into two parts, ‘Accepted’, and ‘Pending’. Those that are ‘accepted’ are the ones in which their apps didn’t present any mistakes, whilst, those who are ‘pending’ will have to alter certain parts of their applications I encountered issues with so they can eventually be ‘accepted’. 

For obvious reasons, there won’t be a review for my character. If you’re interested in seeing the other applicants’ apps, please click on the photo of their face-claim. ^^ 

To begin with, I throughly enjoyed reading your application, especially the part where you present your character's appearance and fashion style. and of course the 'mini-interview'

 

ALSO, love how your face-claim matches your Android's personality, I think that's something very important.

 

The background and personaly are very simple yet extremely well done, I personally enjoyed reading them, particularly how you divided your character's background in points, but even so, could be a cohesive text.

 

The relationships dynamics between Chanha and Seungcheol strongly remind those of Kara and Tood and Todd and Alice, clearly abusive and one-sided.

 

An astrology hoe, mood 24/7.

 

Found the way Chanha meets her love interest, Sungwoon very cute, I know he just wanted salt, but that's how relationships are formed! Your scene suggestions were all very nice, especially the one where you mention a Deviant wanting Chanha to become like them.

 

I have come to notice that I am the worst reviewer on Earth and I'm extremely sorry about that.読本

First off, I wanted to comment on how simplistic and, well, in a sense, extremely small are your sections concerning your character's appearance, I would've liked a little bit more lenghth, which is why I'm putting your character on pending, two more lines is more than enough, I'm sorry if I'm being picky TT, I just love appearances that are very well described. This will sound weird, but it helps me understand them better and when writing helps me inserting them in a certain scenery that will match their features.

 

I think that if I had to pick my favourite section from your application it would be the loveinterest's section, first and foremost, because your s/o is Lee Jieun (IU) and she's been my crush for God knows how long, and how thorough you were with your love story and personality.

 

You included my character in your Scene Suggestions TT, I'm so thankful. Even though, the link to your password is no longer working, please don't worry, you did it right ^^ I'm sorry for putting your character on Pending once again.

As soon as I saw your application for the very first time was 'damn, that's gorgeous' I really love the colors you chose, they go very well together. 

 

But onto your character! I am in love. That's it that's the Review

 

Your apperance section is so well done I re-read it several times, and enjoyed it more and more each time I read it. The thing that stood out to me the most was how you highlighted the adjectives that describe her the best, I found that to be a very well thought-out detail, as well as the luna notes you included throughout your app. Also, her fashion sense, very cute, but damn, so detailed, gahd, I'm a for detailed things. Thought not important, just a commentary, Juyeon = tiny.

 

The way you introduced your character's personality by utilising what her owner wanted was very smart and I enjoyed it a lot!  I adored the way you described everything to the tiniest detail, including her relationships.

 

Jungkook and Juyeon have such an interesting relationship. The amount of details is insane and very much appreciated, it helps me to learn their relationship's dynamics. 

 

I'll finish this review with, teach me your ways, I'm jealous at how professional your application is.

Starting with what stood out to me, I found it very interesting mentioning how his owner seemed to dislike San's standard outfit and decided to give him the freedom to develop a 'fashion sense'. Also, enjoyed it how you color-coded your character's traits, it was a very nice detail. Though, even though, quite descriptive, I was wondering, if there was any way of further developing your character's appearance? Mention what people notice first about him, perhaps what trait people usually find the most captivating and so on, like I had mentioned in another applicant's review, a descriptive appearance, allows me to understand what scenery better completes your character. Another mistake I found was you didn't specify what your s/o's species was but of course I know it's Human, therefore it's not a glaring error. This isn't a must, but would it be possible for there to be at least two more positive characteristics of Jaewon? You included three negatives and only one positive.

 

I throughouly enjoyed your character, especially its personality, you went in depth and I enjoy that a lot, as I have mentioned like a gazilion times already rip and also, "Jaewon doesn't treat him like he's a monster and instead gives him respect" that broke my ing heart, brb, crying.

 

San is one of the most handsome man I have ever seen and WooSan is superior. (But that's beside the point) 

 

Loved your scene suggestions, especially the last one! I hope I wasn't rude in any form, and I deeply apologize if I was. Thanks for letting your friend know about this, it means the world to me.

I overall thoroughly enjoyed reading your application! But I will be pointing out the things that stood out the most to me and that I enjoyed the most as well! For starters,

 

I really enjoyed the idea of her body being enhanced to further accomplish her purpose as a bot! It’s also tragically beautiful that Sia would rather let her negative experiences remain a part of her rather than resorting to deleting them, I think it would be a very interesting concept to further develop if she gets chosen to partake in the story, as is her relationship with Eunwoo.

 

Onto Sia’s love interest, I really liked how his existence is one that contrasts Sia’s so much.The way that his visits, no matter how frequent, always had the same purpose is honestly so lovely. Their dynamic is one that really does have a lot of potential!

 

Thanks so much for applying, I really enjoyed reading your application!

An application I really enjoyed from beginning to end, if I’m being honest. For starters, I adored the attention paid to such minute details, such as, the inclusion of his knowledge of Latin and Greek, in spite of it not being vast, and the days and hours his classes take place.

 

Taking into account his personality, if he were to ever become a Deviant or show signs of it, I think it would require a deeply traumatic event, since you yourself described him as “Naturally, he decides and looks at things not with emotion, but with realism”, and even with his responses to the questions pertaining to deviancy, though, that last part, “Maybe deviants just have their own understanding of their programming” was rather intriguing. I also read your final words, and worry not, a love interest is not a must, to be honest, I think Bitna as a friend could potentially be more impactful than a love interest.

 

Thank you so much for applying! Your application was really good and I really enjoyed and appreciated your final words!

I don’t know how to explain why, but I do believe Jiu really is a great choice, visually, for Android 007, she just looks so motherly (if that makes sense). Yeonhwa really does feel like the ideal caretaker, her personality was exposed really well! Her relationship with the kids is so adorable,  I adored how it’s so detailed, as well as her relationship with their father. The concept of creating another application and using them as your love interest is really interesting to be honest!

 

I really enjoyed that factor as well in your application. Haruto and Yeonhwa remind me of lovers in high school who deeply wish to explore the world of love and relationships but are simply extremely awkward at doing so because it’s their first time.

 

Yeonhwa feels like a really good addition to the possible cast of Seoul Become Human! Thanks so much for applying!

First off, I wanted to comment on how simplistic and, well, in a sense, extremely small are your sections concerning your character's appearance, I would've liked a little bit more lenghth, which is why I'm putting your character on pending, two more lines is more than enough, I'm sorry if I'm being picky TT, I just love appearances that are very well described. This will sound weird, but it helps me understand them better and when writing helps me inserting them in a certain scenery that will match their features.

 

I think that if I had to pick my favourite section from your application it would be the loveinterest's section, first and foremost, because your s/o is Lee Jieun (IU) and she's been my crush for God knows how long, and how thorough you were with your love story and personality.

 

You included my character in your Scene Suggestions TT, I'm so thankful. Even though, the link to your password is no longer working, please don't worry, you did it right ^^ I'm sorry for putting your character on Pending once again.

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