PART 6

ANGEL

IF only you can see me. 

I know deep down there inside you, in your heart I've always been there. 

I believe that you'd always keep me, my memory there. 

If there's only one place that I'd stay forever in is in your heart. 

That was in our last Christmas together, we were in duty then right? What a way to spend Christmas. Still, it didn't matter if we had to skip that holiday, as long as you and I are together. At the canteen, we took our break. Eating sandwiches, you and I didn't talk much that time, didn't we? But then silence was killing me so I asked you where do you want to go after the shift. And to my big, great surprise. You, Kim Myungsoo, forever the ultra-cold and serious person you are, answered in a very unexpected way. And for once, and never had I again heard you say a cheezy "pick-up-line".

"Where do you want to go after this?"

- "To your heart....."

I knew it. You had it in you, A different side. A different color. A different view. 

 

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myungsujijjang
#1
I can't believe I only read this fic now. It's so nice! Heartbreaking but nice!
dark44rose #2
that was very painfull and absoloutly beautifull i loved it it showed such great display of one's feelings after losing a loved one though i wish noone would have to experience that pain everyone if going to someday

this fic was beautiful all the little things that seemed so significant when it was too late broke my heart
oliveteal
#3
Chapter 11: I'm reading it now till the end, I know it's old ff.
The feels is just really sad. It's full of agony and despair (myungsoo part).
Though there's nothing like conversation. It's enough to make my cry.
I would love to read your another fanficts
inspiritz #4
Chapter 11: .........................................
I'm a mess right now, i'm crying and sobbing like crazy, that was really sad, i hope from all of my heart that no one in the world would ever get through such pain. And you are amazing writer, just the fact that you made my cry while reading the whole story is proving that you're an amazing writer.
cindyloco #5
This is sad
But it's really touching
Great work
gelazen #6
whoa, umm all i can say is thanks for the nice comments and feedbacks, but i still have a long way to go.. !!^^
Laydeen
#7
I think this is one of the best stories on this site, or with Myungsoo, at least. I read it today, during class, from my phone, and it got me real sensitive. it`s a real beautiful story, and very touching <33
congratulations:)
gelazen #8
yeah, thanks... i really intended it to be short actually, more like I was planning to end it around six chapters, but then I again I decided to emphasize more on their past.... some of the story's details kinda reflect some of my personal interests...... like going to med school...
xxIUxx #9
i really enjoy ur story .. its short but still awesome ♥ ♥