PART 5

ANGEL

What should I do?

Even if I shout with the top of my lungs, you wouldn't hear me. Now the distance between us is too far apart. 

The fact the we all live and die one day is inevitable. And when one dies, it would be like ripples of disturbed waters. It would be there but soon it would be gone. and when they're gone they'd be forgotten without a trace. 

All there was was  silence. You just sat there on the other end of the table where we'd always eat, study, talk, fight, play. Then our eyes met. Are you able to see me again? You, your eyes and mine stayed like that. You looked like you've got something to say. You bit your lower lip, jaw locked, as if you were holding back. You sighed and looked away. 

Why Myungsoo? You knew I was there! That made me really happy. 

If only you can see me. I wonder what would you do?

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myungsujijjang #1
I can't believe I only read this fic now. It's so nice! Heartbreaking but nice!
dark44rose #2
that was very painfull and absoloutly beautifull i loved it it showed such great display of one's feelings after losing a loved one though i wish noone would have to experience that pain everyone if going to someday

this fic was beautiful all the little things that seemed so significant when it was too late broke my heart
oliveteal #3
Chapter 11: I'm reading it now till the end, I know it's old ff.
The feels is just really sad. It's full of agony and despair (myungsoo part).
Though there's nothing like conversation. It's enough to make my cry.
I would love to read your another fanficts
inspiritz #4
Chapter 11: .........................................
I'm a mess right now, i'm crying and sobbing like crazy, that was really sad, i hope from all of my heart that no one in the world would ever get through such pain. And you are amazing writer, just the fact that you made my cry while reading the whole story is proving that you're an amazing writer.
cindyloco #5
This is sad
But it's really touching
Great work
gelazen #6
whoa, umm all i can say is thanks for the nice comments and feedbacks, but i still have a long way to go.. !!^^
Laydeen #7
I think this is one of the best stories on this site, or with Myungsoo, at least. I read it today, during class, from my phone, and it got me real sensitive. it`s a real beautiful story, and very touching <33
congratulations:)
gelazen #8
yeah, thanks... i really intended it to be short actually, more like I was planning to end it around six chapters, but then I again I decided to emphasize more on their past.... some of the story's details kinda reflect some of my personal interests...... like going to med school...
xxIUxx #9
i really enjoy ur story .. its short but still awesome ♥ ♥
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