PART 10

ANGEL

With a sudden drop of emotions, you sat on one of the boxes, holding tight on the coat, as if you were hugging it. 

I walked towards you, but the more that I come closer, the more far you get. 

Silence there was nothing but silence. 

All I can do is watch you from afar.

You stayed like that for a moment. 

Then everything went black. 

Next thing that I know was that I was walking towards the room.I walked pass the living room. You weren't there anymore. 

I opened the door and went iniside the room. 

You laid on the middle of the bed, curled-up on your side. 

Alone, in the dark. Only the moonlight light the room. 

I can hear you breathing. 

I walked towards the bed. 

I saw that you were side awake. Those cold eyes that stared blankly into nothingness. Your breathing was heavy.

Only the ticking of the clock can be heard. 

I smiled. I knew that this time, I have to really go. 

I sat on the end of the bed, then I laid beside him. For the first time. I face time. The last time I would see his face before I go. I must never forget and cherish this moment. 

I looked into his eyes. 

I know we would be both fine. 

Then, tears fell down Myungsoo's eyes, like rain in the middle of a dessert. There weren't many. 

But to shed one final tear for me, that would be enough. 

What time is it?

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myungsujijjang
#1
I can't believe I only read this fic now. It's so nice! Heartbreaking but nice!
dark44rose #2
that was very painfull and absoloutly beautifull i loved it it showed such great display of one's feelings after losing a loved one though i wish noone would have to experience that pain everyone if going to someday

this fic was beautiful all the little things that seemed so significant when it was too late broke my heart
oliveteal
#3
Chapter 11: I'm reading it now till the end, I know it's old ff.
The feels is just really sad. It's full of agony and despair (myungsoo part).
Though there's nothing like conversation. It's enough to make my cry.
I would love to read your another fanficts
inspiritz #4
Chapter 11: .........................................
I'm a mess right now, i'm crying and sobbing like crazy, that was really sad, i hope from all of my heart that no one in the world would ever get through such pain. And you are amazing writer, just the fact that you made my cry while reading the whole story is proving that you're an amazing writer.
cindyloco #5
This is sad
But it's really touching
Great work
gelazen #6
whoa, umm all i can say is thanks for the nice comments and feedbacks, but i still have a long way to go.. !!^^
Laydeen
#7
I think this is one of the best stories on this site, or with Myungsoo, at least. I read it today, during class, from my phone, and it got me real sensitive. it`s a real beautiful story, and very touching <33
congratulations:)
gelazen #8
yeah, thanks... i really intended it to be short actually, more like I was planning to end it around six chapters, but then I again I decided to emphasize more on their past.... some of the story's details kinda reflect some of my personal interests...... like going to med school...
xxIUxx #9
i really enjoy ur story .. its short but still awesome ♥ ♥