chapter 4:achievement

You are my best friend

minutes turn to hours,hours turn to days,days turn to weeks and weeks become months

the both of them getting closer everyday.closer than minhyun and jonghyun or minki and his friends.they share some secret with each other,share sad and happy moments together and share their problem together.All the scenario that happens before and while the both of them start to studies together turn to a sweets memories.this is the last day for the both of them for studying together because the test is tomorrow.

"today will be my last day teaching you,jonghyun"says minki with a heavy smile on his face because there will be no more memories will be made because after this minki and jonghyun will be busy with they live.just like before,the time when the both of them still don't know each other.

"yeah...tomorrow the test will shows if i improving of not"say jonghyun while his eyes looking to the blue sky.

the both of them knew that the change for the both of them to be like that again will be gone.jonghyun will be busy with his basketball and his friends while minki will be busy with his studies and making his way to his goal.

"hey....why don't you come and see our games after the test...i bet it will be fun."jonghyun says with his excited voice

"sure...i love to come"minki agree following jonghyun to stare at the blue sky while the cold breeze blowing to minki pale skin

"and why don't you come to my basketball selection for national team.......it could help me to feel a little confident"says jonghyun and bow his head to hide his smile.

"it will be honor for me"says minki with his beautiful smile.

jonghyun feel so happy that he could hug minki but he know minki will be scare and think that he is weird so he let his feeling die.minki phone rings and that is the sign of the clock turn 4.oopm and it time for them to go back home.they pack there things and start to walk home together.hey had a very long conversation until they made to minki house.

"bye....and good looking in your studies for the test tomorrow"say jonghyun

"you too....bye"say minki.

minki feel happy.he hope all his effort on helping jonghyun studies will be pay off.he wanted to see jonghyun success and blowing all the worries from his teachers face.

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sorry for taking too much time.its my first m rated story and i hope you guys like it.if it not like your expectation i'm sorry and i will try my best next time.please enjoy the story.leave comments about this bonus and comments about the story(overall).

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kellyb2st
#1
Chapter 15: cute story
ExoKissAndHugs #2
Chapter 15: This is cuuuuuute! Thank you for fulfilling my thirst for fluff and thank you for writing this story! I love it, really! Good job!!!!
junghari5 #3
Chapter 15: i luv ur storyline so clear and sweet
ververthesecret #4
Chapter 15: That was sweet. Now that jonghyun is teaching minki, I remember back then jonghyun was a bad student and their teacher asked minki to help him in studying :') Reading this scene gets me emotional, they have gone through so much and I'm glad they're both becoming a better person now thank to each other's help. Though I'm still amazed at jonghyun's confession, I didn't expect it, I thought minki would say it first because jonghyun has never been that type of person who usually says sweet word but I guess he really cannot hold back when minki is around :') The was sweet too, it may not be the hottest but it's soft and is exactly what I want in a college/school AU fic ^^. They're young right, they don't need much ^^ And I love how jonghyun be so caring and gentle during and after that, what a boyfriend! ^^ About their marriage, actually I somewhat knew it would happen (remember you gave a hint in the conversation between their parents in the last chapter ^^) so to me it's not a surprise but it still makes me awwww. Like finally. Finally everyone gets what they deserve, family, friendship or love. If ever real life could be so beautiful :')
That's enough for today (maybe I'll give another comment when I reread this fic ^^). Thank you so much for completing this fic, although it's not the best fic but it's the very first jren fic I've been following ever since I liked this cute couple and I enjoyed reading it so much ^^ Hope to see you again in another fic soon ^^
kath0621 #5
Chapter 15: Really sweet ending..Thank you for finishing this story properly author nim! Kudos to you!
ververthesecret #6
Update please ^^ I'm still waiting for a proper ending ^^
jennaynay
#7
Chapter 14: oooh this is really unexpecting and interesting. keep up the good work :))
ververthesecret #8
Chapter 14: Wait what? Rated? OMG that's unexpected!! :o (but keke I'm excited just by thinking about it hehez) and I can't wait about the promise already :D Till the end, fighting!!
junghari5 #9
Chapter 14: excited to wait
ververthesecret #10
Chapter 13: omg what kind of promise I'm expecting? Marriage!! Hahaha I'm sorry I'm such a desperate shipper who can only think about romances whenever I think of my ship xD Choi parents seem ok with them being close but Kim parents are still stiff, somewhat? I hope they will soon clear all misunderstandings between the 2 families and approve jren's relationship ^^ fighting for the last chapter author-ssi ^^