chapter 13:deep sleep

You are my best friend

the room was quiet and the only sound can be heard is the nurses's and the doctors's shoes from outside the room...
In the room...only jonghyun and minki....jonghyun still waiting for minki to wake up....with every patience he had...praying while holding minki hand...it been two weeks since minki came out from the emergency room and everyday after school jonghyun will waited for him to wake up from the deep sleep....
jonghyun stare to minki's pale face with the hope that minki will open his eyes at that moment...but become hopeless when there is no movement....jonghyun pull his body close to minki's bed and hold minki hand close to his face...

"please wake up...i had been waiting for you for two weeks...everyone here is fine...and teachers keep asking about you...so please wake up..I really want to see wake up and from now on....there is no one will hurt you any more...the team leader and his team had been caught by the police...your mom and dad is really worried...and I know you don't like to make your parent worried...so please wake up...I promise you if you wake up I will always be beside you ....and thank you for protecting me that day...but please wake up..i know that is my fault for trusting the team leader but please wake up...or...i will failed my exam....so please wake up...please...."jonghyun say in slow voice

jonghyun keep begging for minki to wake up....he close his eyes and keep begging....and minki's hand suddenly make a small movement...but..jonghyun doesn't notice it....while jonghyun still closing his eyes....minki's start to open his eyes...he start to moving his head to looked around...he saw jonghyun....and a weak smile appeared at his pale face....slowly he move his other hand and softly brushing jonghyun hair...the touch make jonghyun open his eyes....and notice that minki already awake...and the touch make jonghyun surprise..he bend body see minki better...
"Are you awake or this is one of my dream..."jonghyun asked
the question make minki smile widened...and nodding his head...jonghyun was over the moon....he call the doctor to check minki's condition...
"minki is in a good condition now and if the can stay at this condition for a few day...he can be discharge...i will call his parent and tell them about this"say the doctor to jonghyun...
"thank you doctor"say jonghyun....
the doctor walked leaving minki and jonghyun in the room...seeing minki try to sit...jonghyun quickly help him...
"thanks"say minki
"it's okay....I'm really happy to see you wake up...."say jonghyun and sit beside minki...
"I'm sorry....to make you worried..."say minki..turn his sight away from jonghyun...he don't want to see jonghyun worried face...

"it okay...it just two weeks "say jonghyun
"two weeks..!!....I really had no idea....i been unconscious for two weeks....sorry"say minki
"the one who is supposed to say sorry is me...I'm sorry because not be able to safe you....and for not believing you..."say jonghyun
minki rise his head to see jonghyun directly to the eyes...and the make jonghyun smile....
"what....first time heard me say sorry...?...stop staring at me....it make me blush..."say jonghyun...
jonghyun slowly lean his body a little forward and kiss minki's forehead.....
"what is that for....."asked minki.....his face start to turn red
"a thanks for make me happy today...."say jonghyun
"you crazy...."say minki....jonghyun just smile....
"one more question....why did you take the hit.??"asked jonghyun
"i don't know ....i just don't want you to get hurt.....because you are my bestfriend...."say minki
the both of them stare at each other for a long moments....slowly jognhyun move towards minki and hug minki....
"thank you for saving me.....helping me....be patience with me.....and being my bestfriend"say jonghyun tighten his hug...minki just let jonghyun hug him....
suddenly four people came to the room and it was minki's and jonghyun's parents...
"minki...."call mrs choi..
"mom....dad..."minki turn and looked at them...
without any word Mr&Mrs choi make they way to minki bed..and hug minki.....
"you know all of us were really worried about you...."say mr choi....
"i'm sorry....."minki apologize....after a few minutes minki release the hug and notice that there another unfamiliar face inside the room
"annyeonghaseyo"minki greeted
"oh...i'm almost forget...this is jonghyun's parents...."say Mr choi
minki stare his father...he scare that something bad happen while he was unconscious....looking at minki worried make Mr choi smile
"don't worry there nothing.....all of us are friends again...the day you were in the emergency room....jonghyun's father get a call from his lawyer and tell him that....our family is not guilty....everything is good now..."say mrs choi
"really...i can't believe it..."say minki....
"the last time i see you is when you're still a child.....you're beautiful that time...and now it looked like that you grow more beautiful"say mr kim
"no wonder...our jonghyun can't take his eyes off you.....he was the most worried then all of us..."mrs kim say....with a big smile
"mom......stop saying that"jonghyun try to stop his mom...

they had a really long conversation and it make the room filled with laughter.....everything had changed...they family aren't enermy anymore...jonghyun and minki free to be friends with each other....even there were many thing happen to them until one of them get hurt but they still friends.....it prove that enermies really can be friend....

 

*the end....

 

 

*everything will continue at bonus story...it will tell about the promise they parents did and maybe some rated M contain....so keep reading and this story will reach the end after the bonus.....

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sorry for taking too much time.its my first m rated story and i hope you guys like it.if it not like your expectation i'm sorry and i will try my best next time.please enjoy the story.leave comments about this bonus and comments about the story(overall).

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kellyb2st
#1
Chapter 15: cute story
ExoKissAndHugs #2
Chapter 15: This is cuuuuuute! Thank you for fulfilling my thirst for fluff and thank you for writing this story! I love it, really! Good job!!!!
junghari5 #3
Chapter 15: i luv ur storyline so clear and sweet
ververthesecret #4
Chapter 15: That was sweet. Now that jonghyun is teaching minki, I remember back then jonghyun was a bad student and their teacher asked minki to help him in studying :') Reading this scene gets me emotional, they have gone through so much and I'm glad they're both becoming a better person now thank to each other's help. Though I'm still amazed at jonghyun's confession, I didn't expect it, I thought minki would say it first because jonghyun has never been that type of person who usually says sweet word but I guess he really cannot hold back when minki is around :') The was sweet too, it may not be the hottest but it's soft and is exactly what I want in a college/school AU fic ^^. They're young right, they don't need much ^^ And I love how jonghyun be so caring and gentle during and after that, what a boyfriend! ^^ About their marriage, actually I somewhat knew it would happen (remember you gave a hint in the conversation between their parents in the last chapter ^^) so to me it's not a surprise but it still makes me awwww. Like finally. Finally everyone gets what they deserve, family, friendship or love. If ever real life could be so beautiful :')
That's enough for today (maybe I'll give another comment when I reread this fic ^^). Thank you so much for completing this fic, although it's not the best fic but it's the very first jren fic I've been following ever since I liked this cute couple and I enjoyed reading it so much ^^ Hope to see you again in another fic soon ^^
kath0621 #5
Chapter 15: Really sweet ending..Thank you for finishing this story properly author nim! Kudos to you!
ververthesecret #6
Update please ^^ I'm still waiting for a proper ending ^^
jennaynay
#7
Chapter 14: oooh this is really unexpecting and interesting. keep up the good work :))
ververthesecret #8
Chapter 14: Wait what? Rated? OMG that's unexpected!! :o (but keke I'm excited just by thinking about it hehez) and I can't wait about the promise already :D Till the end, fighting!!
junghari5 #9
Chapter 14: excited to wait
ververthesecret #10
Chapter 13: omg what kind of promise I'm expecting? Marriage!! Hahaha I'm sorry I'm such a desperate shipper who can only think about romances whenever I think of my ship xD Choi parents seem ok with them being close but Kim parents are still stiff, somewhat? I hope they will soon clear all misunderstandings between the 2 families and approve jren's relationship ^^ fighting for the last chapter author-ssi ^^