Chapter 8

You Are My Day
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The walk from the PC Room to the bakery was not a long one, but you took your time. He’d also need time to come to the bakery. It was 30 minutes away from his home. Funny, how you remember everything to the last detail. You needed some time to sort everything out. All of this has been so overwhelming. Coming to Seoul, in itself is a big thing. It was that one dream that you had and now to actually live that dream is…it’s just so spectacular. Young K, your Ultimate Bias, as you like to call him, took you out on a date. Or many dates as it seems. Never in your wildest dreams had you ever thought that this would happen and “magically” it did. The closest you had imagined him was being in the same hall as he for their concert that week. And you had gotten the privilege to actually sit beside him and have a meal, to walk around with him like you two are long lost friends who finally met, to hug him.

You pinched yourself. It hurt.

Yeah all of this really happened. This day has been nothing less than a fairy tale and you are now about to meet your knight in the shining armour. The guy who has always been the closest to you even though he was, miles apart. The one who always appreciated you for who you are. The one you knew you were in love with although never in these three years had you two met. He might already have a girlfriend but that didn’t matter now. What matters is that you are finally going to meet him. Even if all that you’ll ever be is a friend to him, it’d be enough or so you were trying to tell yourself. This meeting was important. He was important.

You were just two blocks away from the bakery. You stopped.

Deep breaths Ariel. Deep breaths. He must be here by now. If not then I’ll just wait inside. It’ll give me time to relax. You got this.

You made your way to the door. You were welcomed by the pretty waitress again. You smiled at her.

The bakery was packed with people. There was elderly couple near the front, some couples here and there, and a few people sitting alone.

You found an empty table near the back. You made your way to it.

“Excuse me.” Called out the waitress

“Ah yes.”

“Your table is that way. Let me show you the way.”  She said with a smile.

“But how do you…” You started

She just smiled.

At the back of the bakery, there were stairs that went up to the first floor.

Ah! There are two floors. Now I remember that he had told me this. Is he already here? How does he know what I look like?

 

The second floor was empty. Excep

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kimrini
And so this story comes to an end. I feel sad that this one ends here but hopefully there will be more in the future. I'd really like to thank each and every one of you for reading my story. It means A LOT to me! <3 Thank you :)

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kimrini
#1
Thank you Kathys for taking out your time and reading my story. I'll keep in mind avout the grammar mistakes and hopefully write better stories in the future. Hope you have a wonderful year ahead!
Kathys
#2
Dear contestant, oh I loved this original plot with travelling with friends but having to go alone 2 days prior! Even though Young K picking her up on the airport was a nice idea it seemed a bit too unrealistic because at first you didn’t give any context why he did so and how he knew her. However it definitely made me interesting! I loved how considerate Young K was, also a bit cheesy with his MyDay confession but I loved him even more for it. What a guy he is! And bumm, the 6th and 7th chapter is my favourite! I loved this flashback so we got to know how he knows everything about her. I love how sneaky he was and the story just got a lot better reading this!
As for grammar, I have already pointed out a few things in your other fic’s review but here there were a few times with * marks or missed “ which seemed odd and sometimes the paragraphs were weird too but the overall plot was easily followed despite this.
Congratulations for finishing this cute story and thank you for entering our contest! Good luck with your future writings!
Nayoung23ira #3
Chapter 8: I love this ff , author-nim!