You Are My Day

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Description

What happens when your bias takes you out on a date as soon as you come to South Korea. He knows all about you but how? 

(You are Ariel.)

You and your friends Sarah and Ellie decide that it's about time that you fulfill that promise that you made in college about going to Seoul. All the things are planned for the trip but due to some reason, you had to pre-pone your ticket. So you leave for Seoul, two days earlier than your friends. You are a bit sad becuse you have to go alone but the sadness disappears by confusion and happiness when your ultimate bias Young K comes to pick you up at the airport....

Foreword

Hi Guys!!!!

This is my first time writing a fanfic. It started as a simple "imagine YoungK" with a friend on chat and later I decided to write it down. There may be some mistakes here and there because I'm new to this and I don't know much but just wanted to share this story with you all. Hope you like it. Feedbacks are welcome. (Please be nice. It's my first time :P)

A big shoutout to my dear friend Na young :* who inspired me to write this. Meeting YoungK at the airport was her idea. And that is how we started with this story via chat.

This story is a part of Daydream- A Day6 writing contest. Here is the link to the contest. https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1288896. Click on the link and take part or support the contestants. A big thanks to Kathys for inviting me to join this contest :)

kimrini
And so this story comes to an end. I feel sad that this one ends here but hopefully there will be more in the future. I'd really like to thank each and every one of you for reading my story. It means A LOT to me! <3 Thank you :)

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kimrini
#1
Thank you Kathys for taking out your time and reading my story. I'll keep in mind avout the grammar mistakes and hopefully write better stories in the future. Hope you have a wonderful year ahead!
Kathys
#2
Dear contestant, oh I loved this original plot with travelling with friends but having to go alone 2 days prior! Even though Young K picking her up on the airport was a nice idea it seemed a bit too unrealistic because at first you didn’t give any context why he did so and how he knew her. However it definitely made me interesting! I loved how considerate Young K was, also a bit cheesy with his MyDay confession but I loved him even more for it. What a guy he is! And bumm, the 6th and 7th chapter is my favourite! I loved this flashback so we got to know how he knows everything about her. I love how sneaky he was and the story just got a lot better reading this!
As for grammar, I have already pointed out a few things in your other fic’s review but here there were a few times with * marks or missed “ which seemed odd and sometimes the paragraphs were weird too but the overall plot was easily followed despite this.
Congratulations for finishing this cute story and thank you for entering our contest! Good luck with your future writings!
Nayoung23ira #3
Chapter 8: I love this ff , author-nim!