Chapter 3

You Are My Day
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“So what was your college like”? Young K asked

You two were walking around a university campus. You didn’t know if it was okay that two strangers were walking in the campus without anyone’s permission, but Young K didn’t seem to feel that way. He had worn a snapback by now and was taking you on the tour of the campus. He felt comfortable here. It was like he knew this place very well.

“It was okay. I had too many classes, but in the end only seriously studied during the exam time.” You replied

“Me too! I guess all students are the same after all.”

“Except the studious ones. I thought that you’d always be studying once you would be in the college. I didn’t know that you were the student who studied just before the exam.”

“Ah! So you took me for ”the super intelligent and always seen with books” kind of guy?” He asked

“Yes, and super serious too” You laughed

“Huh. Well you are wrong miss. I was the cool one. The guy in the band, if you are forgetting.” He said as he folded his arms to his chest and huffed in fake anger.

He is so cute. How can anyone be so hot and cute at the same time!

Young K face was mostly hidden under the snapback and by his long hair, yet it could not hide his beauty. No one would notice that it was him, unless someone paid attention. You walked around the hallways and he showed you his classroom and the library.

“Let’s sit here.” Young K said as he motioned towards some benches near a tree. It was a huge tree with such a dense foliage that it casted a muted warm glow to the benches.

“Are you tired from all the walking?” He asked

“No, not at all.”

“I would have planned all of this for some other day but today is the only day that I am free. And I want to spend it with you.”

You blushed.

Me? I am not hallucinating, right? Can this day get any better?

“It is okay, Young K. All of this is really nice. Thank you.” You managed to say amidst your shock.

Young K received a call

“Ah hyung yeobseyo?”

“I need to take this. It won’t be long.” he said to you

“Yeah, sure.”

Although you tried to not eavesdrop, you couldn’t help it. You did not have anything to distract you. You didn’t get a chance to charge your phone. From your knowledge of Korean, you could understand what he was talking about meeting someone there.

“Sorry about that.” Young K said

“No worries.”

“There is a little event here at 12. I need

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kimrini
And so this story comes to an end. I feel sad that this one ends here but hopefully there will be more in the future. I'd really like to thank each and every one of you for reading my story. It means A LOT to me! <3 Thank you :)

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kimrini
#1
Thank you Kathys for taking out your time and reading my story. I'll keep in mind avout the grammar mistakes and hopefully write better stories in the future. Hope you have a wonderful year ahead!
Kathys
#2
Dear contestant, oh I loved this original plot with travelling with friends but having to go alone 2 days prior! Even though Young K picking her up on the airport was a nice idea it seemed a bit too unrealistic because at first you didn’t give any context why he did so and how he knew her. However it definitely made me interesting! I loved how considerate Young K was, also a bit cheesy with his MyDay confession but I loved him even more for it. What a guy he is! And bumm, the 6th and 7th chapter is my favourite! I loved this flashback so we got to know how he knows everything about her. I love how sneaky he was and the story just got a lot better reading this!
As for grammar, I have already pointed out a few things in your other fic’s review but here there were a few times with * marks or missed “ which seemed odd and sometimes the paragraphs were weird too but the overall plot was easily followed despite this.
Congratulations for finishing this cute story and thank you for entering our contest! Good luck with your future writings!
Nayoung23ira #3
Chapter 8: I love this ff , author-nim!