Chapter 7

You Are My Day
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Ever since KYH came to your mind, you just couldn’t concentrate. You ate the cake in silence. Young K tried to talk to you but you didn’t speak much. After that he took you to the PC room. You were at the computer in the far end of the room and Young K was in the one next to you. He translated everything to English to make it easier for you to operate.

“It won’t be long.” You said

“It’s okay. Take your time.” Young K said

“Thank you.”

You logged into Twitter and Facebook. There were so many messages from your friends and family on FB and twitter but none from him.

Is he mad at me? He does know that today is the day I reach Seoul.

Brianwho?IknowYoungK!: Hey! You there?

Young K’s phone beeped and it startled you.

“Sorry. It must be Jae. I’ll put it on silent.” Young K said

“It’s okay. Do you come here often?” You ask him

“I come here sometimes to play games with other members. Sometimes it gets really boring to stay in the dorm, so we come out.” Young K said

“Ah! Nice.”

Still no reply from him.

Brianwho?IknowYoungK: Ya~

Brianwho?IknowYoungK: Are you mad at me? I’m sorry I didn’t text you earlier. I have reached Seoul.

KYHLOVESFOOD: Hey. So how was your flight? Did you sleep well?

Brianwho?IknowYoungK: As good as anyone can on the plane.

(This is the second time today that I’m having this conversation. Ah!)

Are you mad at me? I know that we were supposed to meet today. We had promised to go to that bakery in the evening, and I was supposed to text you the minute I landed, but I forgot. I’m so sorry.

KYHLOVESFOOD: Yeah. It’s okay.

Brianwho?IknowYoungK: Why didn’t you text me though, if I hadn’t?

KYHLOVESFOOD: I thought that you must have been tired or were sleeping so I just waited for your text. Did you rest?

Brianwho?IknowYoungK: Oh, I couldn’t. You wouldn’t believe what happened today!

KYHLOVESFOOD: WHAT??

Brianwho?IknowYoungK: I don’t know if I can tell you that. Just know that I met someone, who I never thought I’d ever get a chance to meet.

KYHLOVESFOOD: Why? Okay maybe you have your reasons. Good for you though. So you went on a date with this person or what?

Brianwho?IknowYoungK: Sort of.

KYHLOVESFOOD: Okay.

Brianwho?IknowYoungK: Today is a very surprising day.

KYHLOVESFOOD: Yeah.

Brianwho?IknowYoungK: Where are you now?

KYHLOVESFOOD: Why?

Brianwho?IknowYoungK: Why? Becaus

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kimrini
And so this story comes to an end. I feel sad that this one ends here but hopefully there will be more in the future. I'd really like to thank each and every one of you for reading my story. It means A LOT to me! <3 Thank you :)

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kimrini
#1
Thank you Kathys for taking out your time and reading my story. I'll keep in mind avout the grammar mistakes and hopefully write better stories in the future. Hope you have a wonderful year ahead!
Kathys
#2
Dear contestant, oh I loved this original plot with travelling with friends but having to go alone 2 days prior! Even though Young K picking her up on the airport was a nice idea it seemed a bit too unrealistic because at first you didn’t give any context why he did so and how he knew her. However it definitely made me interesting! I loved how considerate Young K was, also a bit cheesy with his MyDay confession but I loved him even more for it. What a guy he is! And bumm, the 6th and 7th chapter is my favourite! I loved this flashback so we got to know how he knows everything about her. I love how sneaky he was and the story just got a lot better reading this!
As for grammar, I have already pointed out a few things in your other fic’s review but here there were a few times with * marks or missed “ which seemed odd and sometimes the paragraphs were weird too but the overall plot was easily followed despite this.
Congratulations for finishing this cute story and thank you for entering our contest! Good luck with your future writings!
Nayoung23ira #3
Chapter 8: I love this ff , author-nim!