Chapter 5

You Are My Day
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The show ended.

Firstly, the members bid adieu to the fans and left the stage. A speaker came up to address the gathering.

“Ariel, let’s go.” Said Mindy

“Okay.”

We made our way out of the auditorium. Thanks to those perfect seats, we didn’t cause much problem to the listeners on our way out and it was really close to Young K. Speaking of him, I looked around everywhere but couldn’t find him. Maybe this is was the end of our date. I’m sad that we couldn’t get to say goodbye but it is okay. Plus there was so much that I wanted to ask him. Was that “The” message? Is it really our Day 1? Mindy was walking a few steps ahead of me. She was busy on the phone. I jogged to keep up with her.

“So where are we going?” I asked Mindy

“I few blocks down the road there.” She said as she typed on her phone

Mindy put her phone away and she looked at me.

“So how was their performance? Did you like it?” Mindy asked

“I loved it. I don’t have words to describe it. It was all that I had imagined and much more. Much much more!!”

“Good. They are so talented, I tell you.”

“Yeah they are.”

“And goofy too. I did not know that Brian was going to propose the audience like that. But boy, he was so damn serious. I’ve been to a lot of their concerts and they do interact with their fans by talking about some stuff but today, he was serious. I could tell.”

My cheek went red. So it was true. He really meant everything that he said. Oh God this really happened!

“We are here.” Said Mindy

I broke from my chain of thoughts. We were outside a little bakery. I looked at her Mindy, just then the doors opened.

“Thanks Mindy.” Said Young K as he smiled at her.

I gaped at him. He’s really here. He had changed back to his clothes that he was wearing when he had met earlier that day.

“I thought that you’d get lost had I asked you to come here alone.” Young K said to me

“Okay, I’ll get going now. You guys enjoy. Brian say Hi to the members for me and as always you guys rocked it.” Said Mindy

“Thanks Mindy! See you soon. And I’ll mak

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kimrini
And so this story comes to an end. I feel sad that this one ends here but hopefully there will be more in the future. I'd really like to thank each and every one of you for reading my story. It means A LOT to me! <3 Thank you :)

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kimrini
#1
Thank you Kathys for taking out your time and reading my story. I'll keep in mind avout the grammar mistakes and hopefully write better stories in the future. Hope you have a wonderful year ahead!
Kathys
#2
Dear contestant, oh I loved this original plot with travelling with friends but having to go alone 2 days prior! Even though Young K picking her up on the airport was a nice idea it seemed a bit too unrealistic because at first you didn’t give any context why he did so and how he knew her. However it definitely made me interesting! I loved how considerate Young K was, also a bit cheesy with his MyDay confession but I loved him even more for it. What a guy he is! And bumm, the 6th and 7th chapter is my favourite! I loved this flashback so we got to know how he knows everything about her. I love how sneaky he was and the story just got a lot better reading this!
As for grammar, I have already pointed out a few things in your other fic’s review but here there were a few times with * marks or missed “ which seemed odd and sometimes the paragraphs were weird too but the overall plot was easily followed despite this.
Congratulations for finishing this cute story and thank you for entering our contest! Good luck with your future writings!
Nayoung23ira #3
Chapter 8: I love this ff , author-nim!