The Art of Avoiding

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THANK YOU. Ah yes, finally, an ending to a story that never really had an ending in the first place. Wow. What a journey. First of all, I want to say thank you to the last two brain cells that I have, y’all really worked hard. You guys better say thank you to them too, because without those two last brain cells, I wouldn’t have even tried to make an ending. Anyways, last time I updated, I told you guys about my writers block and how I mever really write endings to my stories, leaving it the way it is and just leaving the rest to everybody’s imaginagion. But now, here we are, my first ever written ending. My feelings are a mixture of proud, relief, but most of all disappointment and regrets. Like some of you who read this story, even without telling me, are disappointed at the ending. And honestly, I am too. I’m very disappointed and I have a lot of regrets. Because I know that I could have done more, I know that I can do more. But a lot of things that I want go write down are a lot of things that can’t be explained in words, it’s just all up to ones imagination. And I have imagined a lot for this story, and almost more than half of that imagination didn’t make it into the story itself. And I must admit, the ending is half-assed written, they’re words that were all just forecefully taken out from my brain, words that really could be better. It’s fast paced and should actually explain a lot more about the characters, but my unmotivated can’t force my last tw

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ZeeKdramaCrazy #1 Apr 7, 2021 04:10:58

Chapter 7: This was a roller-coaster of emotions and I felt them all too well.

irisssie #2 Oct 31, 2019 02:46:01

Chapter 6: lmao this is so sad i'm literally crying rn

yeolmyheart #3 Oct 21, 2019 20:33:33

Chapter 7: oh god i love this so sooo much gdjsjskskdk
this is so beautiful TT

mizzinformation #4 Apr 21, 2019 18:42:37

Chapter 7: Regrets. That’s the thing that comes to my mind right now. I think that Jisoo will have a huge sense of regret after letting Sehun walk away from her a second time.

I enjoyed this story... good job, butterahjumma!

Lolypop123 #5 Sep 16, 2018 15:38:24

Chapter 7: Wow TT^TT

babycatz #6 Sep 14, 2018 05:34:59

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: I think I'm one of the very few people who feel the regret?
No, I don't regret your story. It's a beautiful angst and well written.
But I've always tried to be honest on giving my opinion/comments. Technically, I was confused reading because there's too much italic and bold words. I understand it is to emphasize or maybe it's your writing style (I think this is the first time I read your works) and it's fine for other people. But personally it makes me quite dizzy. I don't know if it's just me or what, but bold texts tend to draw the attention to it so sometimes my eyes would steal a peek at them before reading the lines above. A little variation every here and there is good, but tbvh too many is not my cup.

The finale. I love story with ending opens to imagination. But I thought that since the whole finale Jisoo talked about having a closure, she thought and even discussed about it with Jinyoung.. but she never really acted on it. There's just too many things unexplained.

Now move to the things I like about this.
The details are good it shows the internal war within the characters. Which is important for readers to get into the story and swim through emotions with the characters.
The words and sentences are very easy to understand.
I like the parables. And the intro to chapter 5/6(?) about noise and loneliness.
Also I like hiw the story focuses on Jisoo, her feelings and things happen to her. But the story still shows a bit of other charaters' mind and feelings too. And I think that's what gets us to the night Jisoo let Sehun go. Because Jisoo was so wrapped up with what she thought is real, I can see sometimes she missed things. And I get that because of the long heartbreak, Jisoo slowly loosing her self esteem and worth. That's how good you are to stay focused on that issue without bringing up the issue of 'loving someone else and deserve better love'. This story is about letting go.

That's a long review. I'm sorry if I sound too harsh and rude. The emotions are caught up on my throats. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story for Sehun x Jisoo. It's a rare pairing but I love them. Hope you'd write more about HunSoo. ^^

babycatz #7 Sep 14, 2018 04:04:06

Chapter 4: Finally got the chance to read this.
This chapter is so sad, the way you wrote it into details about their feelings, especially Jisoo's.

haechanela #8 Sep 3, 2018 14:22:58

Chapter 7: I really love how you wrote this beautiful but heartbreaking story. It really pierced my heart. I'm really sad about how it ended but that's the reality that we have to face. There are only few authors who have this kind of realistic endings and I love how this story ended. Two thumbs up.

mzbopha #9 Aug 19, 2018 07:31:23

Chapter 6: Wow, this is so sad. I wanted a happy ending but we don't always get it. I love Hunsoo/Hunji so much. You are an amazing writer! Thank you for completing the story. It was wonderful but heartbreaking. I cried so much. I hope you write more Hunsoo story in the future but not so sad lol Thanks again!

iamARTEMISCLAUDE #10 Aug 11, 2018 14:59:18

Chapter 6: I thought somehow Jisoo would be happy... But like in reality....happy endings are not always what we get ???