I Can Talk About You

I Can Live Without You
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Kim Jisoo was a complete ing mess, and everybody in the cafe which she now sat at knew and by the look everybody was giving her, she knew they pitied her too. Well what’s new anyways? Every regular customer who frequented the so-called ‘Cafe Newton’ basically know her or knew of her through the big mouths of the rest. But she never really cared, why would she? When the reason she too frequented this place was not due to the ‘lit ’, heaven sent coffee menu they had, but it was due to her years worth of heartache, and the friend which she sat with is a witness to all of this.

 

“Kim ing Jisoo, never getting over her stupid heartache that she’s been going through for the past, hmmm I don’t know, SIX ING YEARS,” Kim Jennie dared to say with a lot of conviction and a ‘do-I-look-like-I’m-ing-impressed' tone of voice which resonated throughout the said cafe.

 

She never really was the one to be rude or to dismiss a close friend’s problem, but when it comes to the one and only Kim Jisoo who has been driving her crazy for YEARS about the same over and over again, she has no choice but to feel annoyed at the latter. I mean six years of heartache is TIRING right? But apparently not for her friend who stared at her with those ing cute eyes which never failed to sparkle even though she’s been through a damn lot, and it wasn’t all just about love.

 

The said latter gave her a glare from the opposite side of the table, a pout visible on her heart-shaped mouth, “Okay Kim ing Jennie, I get it, I’m so ing hopeless and would NEVER stand a ing chance at love, especially with Oh ing Sehun who I spent a year going out with and the past year being a couple with but it never felt like we’re actually together because the said jerk is still deeply in love with Bae ing Irene who suddenly decided to come back.”

 

And there, a whole story summed up into one long sentence by your girl, Kim Jisoo.

 

“And so? What are you going to do about it Jisoo? Cry and act like things aren’t going to change even though you see it completely changing before your own very eyes? Even though Oh ING Sehun suddenly left that one night because Bae Irene posted about her sudden come back for the world to ing see?” Jennie snapped, not batting a single eye throughout her rant which left Jisoo speechless in her seat.

 

What IS she going to do? Probably cry her eyes out, yes, one-hundred ing percent, bullseye, right in the ing feels. But she really didn’t have a choice. A man who she’s been in love with for the past six years and the very same man she’s been with for a year never changed, he stayed the same. The Oh Sehun who’s hot as ever, the Oh Sehun who never failed to make her laugh, the Oh Sehun who always makes her heart skip a damn ing beat, the Oh Sehun who never really loved her, the Oh Sehun who she never really wooed, the Oh Sehun who never really got over the most beautiful Bae Irene.

 

How could she not ing cry? When she spent a year going out with him and another one year worth of a relationship that never really felt like a relationship in the first place, when it all just felt like a business type relationship that was forced upon them. Well, it really was the case for Oh Sehun who she, Kim ING Jisoo ladies and gents, asked out two years ago after Miss Bae Irene completely broke his heart after leaving the said man behind. So really, he was the one who was forced in the said ‘relationship’, but Jisoo begs to differ because she never really forced him because he could have said no to the date, he could have said no to the other dates that followed and he could have not asked her out in the first place after she did, but as they say, the brokenhearted would do ANYTHING to forget about their first love. And in this case, the jerk Oh Sehun used the naive - and so he thinks - Kim Jisoo.

 

Naive her ing cute , she knew all about the kisses and dates Oh Sehun and Bae Irene shared behind her back, she knew about the relationship both never really labeled and she knew for a fact that Bae Irene did NOT feel the same way Oh Sehun felt about her, because the reason she flew her said to New York wasn’t because of the ‘challenge’ she was willing to take, but because of Park ing Bogum. How does she know all of this you asked? Because Kim Jisoo was never really naive, in fact, Kim Jiso

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ZeeKdramaCrazy
#1
Chapter 7: This was a roller-coaster of emotions and I felt them all too well.
irisssie #2
Chapter 6: lmao this is so sad i'm literally crying rn
yeolmyheart
#3
Chapter 7: oh god i love this so sooo much gdjsjskskdk
this is so beautiful TT
mizzinformation #4
Chapter 7: Regrets. That’s the thing that comes to my mind right now. I think that Jisoo will have a huge sense of regret after letting Sehun walk away from her a second time.

I enjoyed this story... good job, butterahjumma!
Lolypop123 #5
Chapter 7: Wow TT^TT
babycatz
#6
Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: I think I'm one of the very few people who feel the regret?
No, I don't regret your story. It's a beautiful angst and well written.
But I've always tried to be honest on giving my opinion/comments. Technically, I was confused reading because there's too much italic and bold words. I understand it is to emphasize or maybe it's your writing style (I think this is the first time I read your works) and it's fine for other people. But personally it makes me quite dizzy. I don't know if it's just me or what, but bold texts tend to draw the attention to it so sometimes my eyes would steal a peek at them before reading the lines above. A little variation every here and there is good, but tbvh too many is not my cup.

The finale. I love story with ending opens to imagination. But I thought that since the whole finale Jisoo talked about having a closure, she thought and even discussed about it with Jinyoung.. but she never really acted on it. There's just too many things unexplained.

Now move to the things I like about this.
The details are good it shows the internal war within the characters. Which is important for readers to get into the story and swim through emotions with the characters.
The words and sentences are very easy to understand.
I like the parables. And the intro to chapter 5/6(?) about noise and loneliness.
Also I like hiw the story focuses on Jisoo, her feelings and things happen to her. But the story still shows a bit of other charaters' mind and feelings too. And I think that's what gets us to the night Jisoo let Sehun go. Because Jisoo was so wrapped up with what she thought is real, I can see sometimes she missed things. And I get that because of the long heartbreak, Jisoo slowly loosing her self esteem and worth. That's how good you are to stay focused on that issue without bringing up the issue of 'loving someone else and deserve better love'. This story is about letting go.

That's a long review. I'm sorry if I sound too harsh and rude. The emotions are caught up on my throats. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story for Sehun x Jisoo. It's a rare pairing but I love them. Hope you'd write more about HunSoo. ^^
babycatz
#7
Chapter 4: Finally got the chance to read this.
This chapter is so sad, the way you wrote it into details about their feelings, especially Jisoo's.
haechanela #8
Chapter 7: I really love how you wrote this beautiful but heartbreaking story. It really pierced my heart. I'm really sad about how it ended but that's the reality that we have to face. There are only few authors who have this kind of realistic endings and I love how this story ended. Two thumbs up.
mzbopha
#9
Chapter 6: Wow, this is so sad. I wanted a happy ending but we don't always get it. I love Hunsoo/Hunji so much. You are an amazing writer! Thank you for completing the story. It was wonderful but heartbreaking. I cried so much. I hope you write more Hunsoo story in the future but not so sad lol Thanks again!
iamARTEMISCLAUDE #10
Chapter 6: I thought somehow Jisoo would be happy... But like in reality....happy endings are not always what we get ???