Round 5: The Big Date.

♡♡Onew Vs. Jonghyun: The Ultimate Boyfriend Material♡♡
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    Round: 5 Battlefield: Boyfriend Theme Park    THE SCENARIO You wake up in the morning with a bright smile on your face. It's a beautiful day outside and most importantly, it's Saturday! 

You lay in bed for a few more moments before you realize...today is the day.Hopping out of bed you check the time, and you're late too! "Oh crap!" you whisper.

You can't be late today of all days, because today is a special day.
It's your first date!        JONGHYUN'S MOVE   As you begin to rush in an attempt to make yourself look presentable, your mind wanders back to two days ago.   ~~~   It was evening time, and you’re with Jonghyun, the two of you sitting comfortably on the swings of the same little park where he had first opened up to you about his past.   For some reason, that one little area held so much comfort, you weren’t even nervous that you were with a guy, after all you were with Jonghyun. His mere presences made you relax and take soft easy breathes, not the nervous quick ones you recalled when you two first met.   Sure it had been only a few weeks, but you two had grown closer.   Your feet drag in the sand beneath you and you sway slightly on the swings, letting Jonghyun’s calming tale of his day wash over your ears as the playfully and slightly cool wind plays against your skin and hair. You can’t help but shiver. You don’t realize he’s stopped talking until he looks over at you, cocking his head to the side in thought.   Without another word, he gets up from his place on the swing beside you and gracefully strips off his dark jacket, the same one he wore to the day care with you, and drapes it gently around your shoulders. You look up at him wide eyed, and shake your head, “a-ah… it’s okay, I’m not cold,” you try to tell him.   But he’ll have none of it. He only smiles and pulls away, clad in nothing but his thin white t-shirt. You can’t seem to take your eyes away; it’s at moments like this, when gentle Jonghyun comes out that the familiar thumping of your heart shows up. “Thanks” you mumble softly.   He smiles wider and takes his seat in the swing beside you again. You’re both quite for a few moments before he speaks, “what’re you doing this Saturday?” he asks softly.   You turn your head to look at him, does he want to visit the day care again? “Nothing really…” you say just as quiet, “wae?” He swallows, and you look at him confused. Was he nervous? What could he be so nervous about? He doesn’t look at you as he speaks again, “well… um… I was thinking…” he takes a deep breathe, “do you want to go to the amusement park… with me… together?” He peeks up hopefully.   You sit shocked for a second before a giant smile breaks out on your face, and you can’t help but giggle a little bit at his behavior. His expression is distraught, “n-never mind...” he mumbles, a soft red tinge in his cheeks.   You smile and bite your lip, the answer is clear in your mind as your heart speeds up a little in you chest, “Yes. I would like to go with you.” He looks up then, expression changing from disappointed embarrassment to joy. You smile along with him, finding it contagious.   You realize then… that Kim Jonghyun has just asked you out on a date.     ~~~     You don’t realize just what that means until the moment you’re scrambling down the stairs and scarfing down the breakfast that your mom has so enthusiastically made for you. Her excitement about your plans for the day, are greater than your own.   “Remember that you have nothing to be worried about right? Just be your own natural, beautiful self and you’ll be fine,” she says, smiling excitedly down at you.   You groan in embarrassment and try to hide your face. Your mom is way more excited about this than she should. You have to admit one thing though… her pep-talk is helping, if only a little bit.   You think back to the park that night, and pout slightly. You were totally calm about it, and you weren’t even nervous. So, what had gotten into you all of a sudden? This was only Jonghyun after all. A date… With Jonghyun…   You shake your head and shove another spoonful of eggs into your mouth, your mother laughing softly at your behavior. “You’ll be fine” she says.   You’re about to ask her exactly how she knows that you’ll be okay when the doorbell rings. You freeze and immediately drop your spoon. Getting up quickly you grab your purse with all your important belongings and step up to the door, giving your mom a small, smile, which she returns to open the door.   Standing in front of you is Kim Jonghyun clad in his signature black jeans, lime green t-shirt and leather jacket. He smiles widely at you, “hey” he greets. You smile as well finally feeling a lot more confident know that he’s actually standing in front of you, “hey there” you say back.   He looks you over and chuckles softly, causing you to blush. “We match~” he says grinning. Confused you look down at yourself, and your mouth falls open. You’re wearing black jean shorts paired with a pretty light green top with darker green flower print. You blush, “oh…”   He grins and holds out a hand for you, it takes you a few seconds to realize that you’re supposed to take it. Your heart pounds in your chest.   You quickly tell your mom you’re leaving and step out into the nice day, your hand hesitantly slipping into Jonghyun’s. It feels weird at first, and you can’t help but blush as you feel his warm, yet soft hands against your own. His grip is firm as he pulls you along. Grip strong… yet hands surprisingly soft.   You don’t even think that he realizes he’s holding your hand until he turns around to speak and his eyes widen, immediately letting you go and flushing slightly.   “How are you today?” he asks quietly as you walk towards the bus stop.   Smiling softly you answer, “alright and you?” He looks back at you and smiles slightly, “We sound like we just met for the first time.” You laugh along with him at the statement, relaxing almost instantly. Today’s supposed to be fun! There’s no reason to be nervous, even if it’s your first date.   A few minutes later you and Jonghyun are sitting side by side on the way to the amusement park. It’s a half hour ride and you two are mostly quiet, but it’s a comfortable silence. Jonghyun pulls out his IPod from his pocket and hands you an ear bud, you take it smiling. A couple of songs later, and the bus is pulling up at the stop.   You both get off and make your way to the gates. It’s then that something catches your eyes. Everyone there… are couples. You look confused at Jonghyun, but he doesn’t look as confused as you do.   He knew!   You both walk to the entrance and the man greets you both with a wide smile, “welcome to couples day~ the entire park is reserved for couples and couples alone, are you two a couple?” he asks looking at the both of you.   Couples…only… what?!?!   Jonghyun smiles and grabs onto your hand, pulling you close, “yes, we are a couple.”   You look at him wide eyed for a second, and quickly blush, eyes downcast. “Tickets please.” The man asks. Jonghyun reaches into his pocket and pulls out two. You look at him eyes wide. You thought that you were going to buy your own ticket, and had no idea that he already bought it for you, nor how he afforded it. You instantly feel bad.   The second you two are inside you turn to face him, still blushing, “I could have bought my own ticket you know.” He only shakes his head, “I’m taking you out on the date today, so I should pay.”   You look at him hard before sighing and giving up. Jonghyun was always the gentleman, no matter how oddly he portrayed that, he was always kind.   He smiles immediately, “now… where to first?”   You smile as well taking a good look around, “there!” you say, pointing to the largest roller coaster in the park. He turns to look at you, slightly white in the face. “The roller coaster…” You nod, “yeah… is something wrong?” it couldn’t be could it? “Are you scared?” He immediately scoffs and shakes his head, “n-no! Definitely not.”   You raise an eyebrow… it seriously did look like he was nervous about something. Oh well. Shrugging you walk towards the line up. He keeps up with your stride, not moving to take your hand again.   The line isn’t that long and it takes about five minutes until it’s your turn to move to get onto the ride. Jonghyun has been quiet the entire time and you as well, again the silence isn’t particularly awkward.   He looks at you and you can see that he’s trying hard to keep his expression neutral as you get into your seats. You put on your seatbelt and look at him as he fumbles with his own. “You don’t like roller coasters do you?”   He looks up at you and snorts a little. You hold back a smile, typical. Trying to be Mr. Tough guy.   It’s when the announcer is telling them to keep their hands and feet in the ride at all times that he says strained, “I don’t like roller coasters all that much.”   You look at him surprised. There was actually something that Jonghyun was afraid of? You bite your lip, noticing his nervous expression, the one that he was trying so hard to hide. He looks at you finally and smiles and you smile back.   The ride starts.     ~~~     After the ride is over and you two are safely on the ground, you still can’t stop laughing. You can’t remember ever hearing a guy scream that high pitched before. Jonghyun still looks horrified that he faltered from his manly image. He sighs and buries his face in his hands, “I’m telling you, it wasn’t me!”   You laugh harder at this, wiping a tear from your eyes trying not to laugh as much. Jonghyun looks traumatized. Finally, you manage to stop laughing, looking at him to see him pouting slightly. The sight is oddly cute.   “It’s your turn to pick” you say still smiling.   Desperate to regain a little bit of his manliness, the other looks around, pretending as if he wasn’t screaming like one of the children at the daycare a few moments ago. He grins finally as he points to a ride. The Nightmare it reads.   Your stomach drops as you watch the arms of the ride turning, upside down, sideways, stopping, holding the passengers upside own fifty feet off the ground. You hate rides like this… the ones that spin you around, especially vertically.   You gaze nervously at Jonghyun who’s smiling. “I thought you didn’t like heights,” you say worriedly. He looks back at you and grins, “I don’t… but only when it’s rollercoasters. I love rides like this.”   You gulp, trying to hide your worry as he looks at you, “is something wrong…?”   You shake your head quickly, “nope!” You don’t want to look like a scaredy cat after Jonghyun it up and went on the roller coaster with you.   He doesn’t seem convinced but after you smile at him and continue towards the line, he begins to follow. “You sure?” he asks again, right before you two board the ride.   You’re almost tempted to turn around and run away but you nod, “neh!”   As the two of your get closer to the seats, you take sit down nervously and Jonghyun sits down right beside you. The seats are so close your elbows are touching. As the restraints come down, you can’t help but gasp. Jonghyun turns to look at you, his expression worried, “let’s get off… I don’t want to ride anymore,” he says quickly.   You shake your head, “nope. I want to ride.”   He sighs but quickly reaches out to grasp your hand tightly, you return the hold. Tightly. The ride starts.     ~~~     Jonghyun doesn’t let go of your hand until you’re standing safely on the ground and sighing in relief. “That wasn’t so bad…” you pant. He looks at you worriedly, moving closer to inspect your expression, “you sure you’re okay?”   You smile, trying not to blush and nod. He pulls away a few seconds later and nods as well, “well… I guess you earned yourself something special hm? Wonder woman.”   You laugh at his words, “earned what?”   He looks back at you and grins, walking towards a stall without saying anything, you follow trying to keep up. He stops in front of a stall with the walls filled with uniformly lined balloons and countless stuffed animals surrounding it. You still don’t understand what he’s doing, and you’re about to ask when he asks the man running the stall for ten darts.   He pays the money before you can stop him and takes the darts from the man. “You can throw darts?” you ask, trying not to be impressed. As a reply, he grips the dart carefully with his forefinger and thumb and with a swift flick of his wrist the dart pierces a balloon. A small pop comes with it.   Your eyes widen and your mouth hangs open, he looks back up at you grinning and you smile. “Would you like to try?” he asks you. You shake your head quickly, wanting to watch and see if had any real skills or  he was just really lucky.   “Suit yourself~” Turning around he continues until he pops nine other balloons, ten altogether. The man at the stall is open mouthed as well. You clap amazed after he turns to look at you again, obviously not even trying to hide his smug grin. “How many did I have to pop to get that?” he asks the man, pointing to a giant, fluffy green dinosaur.   “Ten” the man replies. Jonghyun grins, “Then can I please have that for her?” he asks, turning to smile down at you. You feel your heart beating wildly in your chest as Jonghyun takes the dinosaur from the man and hands it to you, “your reward~” You smile wide in content. It was huge! And oh so cuddly! “Thank you!” you exclaim to Jonghyun, who only smiles and shakes his head no problem.   You hold the stuffed dinosaur close to you and smile wide into it, it was the first time someone had ever done something like this for you.     ~~~~     It was getting dark now, and you and Jonghyun had had a blast the entire day. After he won the dinosaur for you, you two had gone on a few more rides, and had lunch. Which Jonghyun had paid for, no matter how much to wanted to split.   Now, a few hours later, you both were walking back towards the entrance of the park. He was holding the Dinosaur because your arms were tired. You didn’t even have to tell him, he just knew.   You smile widely to yourself; you had a great time today. You laughed more today than you had for a long long time. Although he wasn’t as talkative as other people, Jonghyun still provided a great company. He was kind… and considerate, and slightly cute in the ways he reacted to things. You find yourself blushing as you look up at his thoughtful expression, against the night sky.   He turns to look at you then and you look down immediately, but you know he caught you staring. You can almost hear the smile in his voice, “have enough energy for one more?”   You look at him, glad the darkness is hiding your blush somehow. You nod, not saying anything. In all honestly you’re exhausted, but when you look at the direction his gaze is planted you can’t help but smile.   “Ferris wheel…” It’s your favourite ride, especially at night time.   Jonghyun smiles and nods walking over towards the ride, there is no line at this point and in a few moments the two of you are inside the cabin with Mr. Dinosaur.  Jonghyun sits across from you and the stuffed Dinosaur beside him.   “You know you look like Dino right?” you ask laughing. Jonghyun looks at the Dinosaur surprised, then back to you. “Hmm… I guess we do, “He admits smiling.   It’s quiet again as the cabin slowly travels up more and more, not stopping until its right at the peak of its journey. You look out the little window, admiring the breathtaking view.   “I had a really great time today…” You look up at Jonghyun as he speaks, his eyes are downcast. You are about to reply when a gust of wind blows into the cabin, prickling at your skin. You shiver.   Jonghyun looks up then and smiles softly, peeling off his jacket and leaning close to drape the jacket around your shoulders. You smile at him gratefully and blush softly. The jacket smells of him, and it’s comforting. “I had a great time too,” you say after a while.   He smiles, looking at you as if he wants to say something. He seems to be struggling. “I… you… like…” he sighs and leans forward, staring deep into your eyes. “I definitely want a second date.”   You blink furiously and blush hard, nodding slowly. Your heart is doing little somersaults in your chest. “You will… go out with me again that is. Right?”  You nod again and he leans forward, taking your hand in yours and placing a small kiss across your knuckles. You blush even harder as he pulls back, smiling wide.     ~~~     The ride is over too soon, and before you know it the two of you are back on the bus with Mr. Dino across both your laps.   Jonghyun relaxes against you and soon you relax against him, letting the exhaustion of the day win over your crazily beating heart. He looks down at you and smiles wide, pulling out his IPod and ear buds, offering you an end.   You take it and smile up at him, he smiles back wide. “Remember” he says softly, “I want a second date.” You’re so tired as the music starts, that you almost don’t hear what he says after.   “and many many more after that.”               ONEW'S MOVE You quickly took a bath and fixed yourself, how could you oversleep? Aish, really. You have a date with a guy like that and this happens?   What was wrong with you?
As you put on your fluttery skirt, you can't help but smile as you remembered how Onew asked you out.
Or rather, how he tried to ask you out.
"Yumi," He began in a soft voice, while looking down at his feet.
"Hmm?" You asked as the two of you walked towards your neighborhood.
"Do you want to go on a date with me?"
"What?" You asked in a surprise.
"Nah, that's lame." He continued to mumble, still looking down at his shoes.
"Yumi," He once again said.
"Would you do me the honor of--Nah. It's too formal." He continued to mutter under his breath, totally oblivious to the fact that you can hear him.
"I'd love to go on a date with you, Onew!" You replied brightly and he looked up at you in surprise.
"What?!" He blurted.
"I said, what time are you going to pick me up for our date?" You asked, a twinkle in your eyes because you were enjoying teasing your cute neighbor.
"Did you just hear my thoughts or something?" He asked in amazement.
"Well, if your thoughts are words that you say aloud, then yes, I can hear them." You said in amusement and he blushed.
"Aw, Yumi. I wanted to ask you nicely but--"
"No need." You grinned.
"I'd definitely go with you."
"Really?" He smiled at you widely.
"Really."
"Great!" He bit his lip, trying to contain his huge smiles.
"I'll pick you up at eight."
"Is this formal though? Do I need to wear a dress or something?"
"Nope. Just make sure you wake up early." He chuckled.
"Why?" You were a little confused.
"Sorry, my bad, I meant I will pick you up at 8AM, Saturday." He smiled apologetically.
  "Oh! It's a day date!"
"Yeah." He tilted his head to the side.
"Unless, you really want dinner...then that's no problem..."
"No, no! I think a day date is definitely fun!"

"Good." He smiled shyly.
"I'll see you on Saturday then."
"Sure." You nodded and looked up, you didn't even notice that you already reached your house.
"Well, I guess I'll see you, Onew." You turned to wave at him and he nodded, waving at you back.
"I'll see you, Yumi! Don't forget our date!" He called out walking backwards towards his house, even almost tripping on their fence.
You laughed. "Take care, Onew!"
You smiled as you remembered everything, Onew definitely has his charms all right.
You glanced at the clock,
it was 7:50AM!
Uh-oh, ten minutes left!
Yumi, you better dress up faster!
--
"Good morning, Yumi!" Onew greeted as you opened the door at exactly 8AM.
"Hey, Onew!" You said, almost breathless, glad that you made it on time.
"You look really nice." Onew smiled and suddenly reached out from behind him to give you a bouquet of flowers.
"This time, they're not from your garden. I promise!" He grinned and you laughed.
"Thanks anyway."
As you both walked out of your house, a shiny and expensive-looking car came into view.
"After you." Onew held the door of the car open and you gulped.
"W-We're going in...that?"
"Yes." Onew said, unaffected.
Well, that's not surprising, seeing as how he belongs to one of the richest family in town, it's just that you're not used to it at all.
"U-Uhm...so are you going to drive it?" You asked, still feeling weird.
"No." Onew blinked.
"We have a chaffeur."
"Oh..." You really felt shy about this.
"Are you okay? Would you prefer another car?" Onew gestured to the other car parked in their garage, a limousine to be exact.
"You guys have a limousine?!" Your eyes went wide.
"Dad uses it sometimes...so would you prefer that? Because it's no prob--"
"No! No! Let's go on this one!" You said, quickly getting inside the luxury car.
Onew followed after you, a guilty look on his f
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lingericious
#1
Will this ever be continued? :)
cuteflower
#2
Onew is so cute and adorable. Loved this story.
iamnotcreative #3
Chapter 8: Whoa this girl needs to chill.. If I was Onew I would dump me/her after reacting like that. He's such a sweetie jeeez
lingericious
#4
Chapter 8: Oh man... I would've totally reacted like her though. It is completed?!?
MidnightOnyx
#5
Chapter 8: I'm so glad you updated! It's the first since I subscribed and started following you and when I checked my updates and saw it was this, I got really excited! I love your style and I enjoyed this chapter. She did overreact greatly, but Onew handled it nicely. Excited for more!
avylol08
#6
Chapter 4: Round 3 Onew lost 33/89 WHAAAAT? XD guess I was the only one that cried xD
avylol08
#7
Chapter 3: AWWWWW T~T GOW COULD I CHOOSE OVER THAT!?! I wanna give them both hugs and tell them it'll be okay T~T buuuut I cried while reading onews sooooo I CHOOSE YOU PIKAC- *cough* Wait. What? ONEW!
avylol08
#8
Chapter 2: Awwwwwwww that was cute! Jjong was sooooo adorable.... But Onew takes the cake!! Or muffin *cough cough* :3
avylol08
#9
Chapter 1: *sputtering like an idiot* just... Just.... ONEWWWWWWWWWWWWW <3<3<3<3<3 OMG >.< <3<3<3<3<3 *cringing from feels* >< Onews too perfect x'D