Chapter 4

Camp Alpine
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CHAPTER 4

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The door suddenly pulled open, as I raised my hand to knock. A short boy with light brown, slightly spiked hair stood in the door frame. It was the boy that had apologized to me earlier.

“Oh hello! You must be my cabin-mate this year. Come in! There’s no need to knock. My name is Kim Minseok. It’s my third year here at camp.” He shuffled over to the end of a bed and started ruffling through a bag.

“I-I’m Kim Jisoo. It’s my first year. Sandeul, at the welcome table, said that it’s just going to be the two of us sharing the cabin,” I said, trying not to be awkward.

“Yeah, Chanyeol was supposed to be here, but he’s traveling abroad with his family instead. He had to cancel,” he told me.

It didn’t really make much difference to me. It was just one less person I’d need to deal with.

 

“You can choose either of those beds. And if you want to keep your cellphone, I suggest that you hide it well. Not that we get much service out here, but sometimes they come in handy. Staff will check for electronics. You can count on that.”

Minseok pulled open the drawer of his nightstand and took out a book. He flipped it open to reveal that it had been hollowed out. His phone fit snuggly between the pages. 

“My mom confiscated my phone before I got on the bus. She didn’t want me calling her,” I said slightly embarrassed. I sounded like a little kid, admitting to that.

Minseok gave me a strange look. “Ah, are you a “mom’s boy” or just really nervous about being here?”

I know I should have felt slightly insulted, but I found myself letting out an awkward laugh. If only he understood the situation that I was in.

“Actually I was kind of forced here against my will. She didn’t want me calling her nonstop, asking for her to come get me.”

“So wait, you don’t know anything about the camp then?” Minseok asked with surprise.

“Nope. Mom talked to the mom a friend who has been here and signed me up. She said I needed to reinvent myself, meet new friends, yada, yada,” I said with an eye roll. “You wouldn’t happen to know if I can get Netflix around here anywhere do ya?”

He laughed. Why did everyone keep laughing when I was being totally serious? “Jisoo, you’re at camp. There’s one TV in the commons. It’s got a total of twenty channels. They’re all local stations.”

“Just point me in the direction of the lake. I’m ready to drown,” I muttered under my breath.

 

I knew my roommate heard me based on the light laugh that left his mouth. At least he seemed nice. He didn’t seem as clingy as Gongchan, which I was very thankful for. If I was

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Sorry for not updating recently (i was planning too). School is killing me. I don't even have time to edit the chapters I have written
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Astriana #1
Chapter 25: This is a little bit stupid but I god damn love it to death already (:
oddlittleromeo
#2
Chapter 23: /screams/ i was busy yesterday so I couldn't read them all back-to-back like I wanted but LET'S GOO
He said "please" shut up! Lu's going soft on Jisoo it's starting; I can feel it in mah bones. Side note I really like how much pride Luhan has for his camp though real talk [actually how all of them do, but let's talk about Luhan since I mostly don't//shot] and how quick he is to get competitive - that I can relate to. Though I do admit we don't know much on Luhan to really judge his character compared to Jisoo; I'll forward to future chapters for that c:
OH DUDE WAIT JISOO IS THE SMACK-TALKER THIS IS GREAT! Real talk I always found it the hardest to be the "head" of the team during the games though so... but eyy, the results are not that bad. It wasn't an all-kill /claps/
Fast forward to the end and like yees more scenes with Luhan and Jisoo!! If memory serves me right we don't have a lot with the two; they're always scattered and short but with how much Jisoo has started to really /see/ Luhan after what the girls said, I expect more c: Which also brings up something I've wanted to say; is that I like how quick and smack-in-the-face Jisoo's conflicted attraction to Luhan is. I don't know if it's intended, or it's probably just how I read romcom to begin with lol, but the simple fact that all Jisoo really needed was just one comment from her friends about Luhan and suddenly she's noticing these little things. Things that she may or may not have noticed before but now reading more into them. Yes. And Luhan lmao he's conflicted too so much yes.

And now I am done! o7 Thoroughly enjoyed these chapters and looking forward to the next!
oddlittleromeo
#3
Chapter 22: I cry little Hyuk so proud ;A; BUT BAEkhyun would though!! He really is a sneaky peanut. I had typed sticky hmm, maybe he's sticky not sneaky?? lmao
THE GIRLS ARE HERE YEESS FRIENDSS! I'm ready! loll of course we gotta get the crew in on this like I'm excited for Baekhyun and I don't know why - jk I do but shh. Also Minseok really looks out for Luhan, ya know? If it weren't for him most of the time Luhan would probably be awkwardly alone? With his attitude and all. Ahh friends. I CHOKED WHEN MINHEE MENTIONed Minseok as a God like YAS! I also agree xD oh dude i feel it is this were the rom begins??
I don't know if you've noticed but I'm commenting on everything that points out to me but like I'm too lost in reading lol First Baekhyun with his marvelous question, and then the dip into Jisoo's school life but that quick recovery from Luhan?? I'm feeling this. The rom is forming and I'm ready and wow Luhan did surprise me because he was actually paying attention.
BAEKHYUN, HONEY! SOMEONE GIVE THE BOY A MATCHING BRACELET! STAT! I love Baekhyun and his dialogues ;A; Have I told you that? I feel like I have but I also feel like I gotta say it again.
The wrap up to this chapter is so nice. We see the difference but similarities between Jisoo's sets of friends and I think that's really nice to know/see.

I usually don't comment back-to-back but I just gotta with this story. With that I'm now off to the next chapter! Weeee!
oddlittleromeo
#4
Chapter 21: When Jisoo described Luhan and Minseok discussing as an old married couple; that's when I really saw the scene and took a two minute break because of laughter lol Her imagination is so simple yet so relatable.
Luhan that sneaky, salty little peanut. I agree with Jisoo he's planning something but wHAT? At the very least Taekwoon is there to help a girl out ;-; I feel for Minseok though; he didn't get to get his team that he wanted.
Every scene with Taekwoon and Jisoo is adorable like he's so protective of her that he legit doesn't even noticed until she points it out lol
Baekhyun and his over-excitement like ahskgl but yo it seems like he felt nothing... i don't know with that peanut, he's also sneaky :p but they won wooo \o/

off to the next chapter!!
dialogue
#5
Chapter 21: Taekwoon is a great protective brother every girls want for:(
oddlittleromeo
#6
Chapter 20: Not gunna lie but the minute Jisoo joined the club I knew she was going to have to "cross-dress" but at the same time I'm excited for it xD Chaos ensured. Also the fact that Hongbin was the girl last year is like icing to a cake lol And then we got Baekhyun over here all "yes put. Jisoo. in. a. dress. and. wig. LET'S GO" like man. Just one line from Baekhyun and I am content lmao And as weird as it is I feel like Baekhyun would be the type to accidentally reveal Jisoo to someone else and him or accidentally reveal her to him, if that makes sense :thinking:

ALRIGHT MINSEOK WOOT! I knew you were a good guy; seeing the potential of our Jisoo ;-; Those three would make a fabulous team and I will fite Luhan if he drags Jisoo to his team >:| despite this being a romcom lol i'm sorry I actually forget it is because it's so lighthearted thus far - which is gRREAT [I could use some lightheartedness right now ahah...]! That rom is gunna creep up on us, I feel it. I will await it. /anticipates/

/shies(?) away/ I'm sorry if my comment is long. I tend to just type what I feel, no backspacing here c:
oddlittleromeo
#7
Chapter 19: Silent reader coming through xD No really though, I started reading one night when searching for comedies but then life happened. Just recently picked it back up and LOVING IT! This is the comedy I've been craving to read, thank you ;-;
I love Jisoo's character and how such a weirdo she is but like good weirdo. I relate to her thought process a lot lol And the camp! Every single one of them are goobers! Especially Baek! OMG that scene in the cafe where it became chaos because of the clubs and Baekhyun runs on the lunch benches! I'm not lying when I say I've been thinking about that at least once a day. And every time I'm left with a smile.
I love all the characters and everything they all bring. Your comedy is gold for me!
onto recent ch...

Not gunna lie - I thought Minseok would be the first since the beginning but then once Leo was introduced I was like: "him" Lo and behold, it is lol Unless Minseok somehow already knows. He seems like a sneaky lil observant peanut. But dude it's out now! I feel like this is just the beginning of the story, or more like the end of the beginning and now we're getting to the core. I am ready for the domino effect! But at the same time scared of the reactions from the others D: Not many of the guys are close enough to Jisoo for them to be okay with...
Baekhyun calling Leo daddy is probably the next best thing lmao I love Baek; he's just a goober.

I can't wait to see how Leo and Jisoo are gunna go about this now. It's gunna be great xD
inspirits2710
#8
Chapter 16: This story is so funny and interesting. Keep it up!
Kim_Taemi
#9
Chapter 12: nooooooo!!!

whyyy, and it was just getting good!!