Chapter 2

Camp Alpine
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CHAPTER 2

 

“Do you mind if I sit with you?”

I looked up to see a tall skinny kid with a bright face.

“All of the other seats are pretty much taken,” he said.

I took a second to scan the bus. Since when did all these people show up? I nodded to the boy. What other choice did he have though, really? It was either me or the boy who was bouncing out of his seat.

“My name is Gongchan. It’s my second year coming to Camp Alpine. I don’t remember seeing you here last year.”

“I wasn’t here last year,” came my monotone reply. “My mother is trying to silence me for good.”

Gongchan gave a weak laugh, not knowing whether I was being serious or not. “What did you say your name was?”

“It’s Jisoo. Kim Jisoo.”

“You don’t seem too into the camp thing, but it’s not that bad. It grows on you. If you had asked me last year at this time if I’d be coming back, I would have told you never in a million years. Here I am though, back on the bus.”

“Camp Alpine doesn’t happen to have Netflix does it?” I asked in seriousness.

Gongchan laughed. “You’re a funny guy. I think you’ll fit in well here. Just hope that you get good cabin-mates. I lived with some pretty entertaining guys last year. We’re rooming together again this time.”

The bus roared to life and we started to pull forward. I could feel my life ending. If I had known better, I would have started my last will and testament as we rolled out of the parking lot. But because I didn’t know what to expect from the camp, I sat quietly and pouted.

“I was being serious about Netflix,” I said under my breath.

 

After an hour and a half of torture, we rolled into the camp and everyone scurried off the bus. I stepped off in a daze. This was really happening. My mother really dumped me at summer camp. I took in my surroundings, looking for Minhee in the process. It was then that I noticed something was extremely wrong.

There were boys everywhere.

I searched for the guy with the list. I remembered my mom saying that he was the camp director. I practically ran to him when I spotted him.

“Jisoo, right? There is a first year welcome committee at that table right over there. They’ll help you get situated.”

“Actually, I have a question. Where is the girls’ camp? You can just poi

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Sorry for not updating recently (i was planning too). School is killing me. I don't even have time to edit the chapters I have written
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Astriana #1
Chapter 25: This is a little bit stupid but I god damn love it to death already (:
oddlittleromeo
#2
Chapter 23: /screams/ i was busy yesterday so I couldn't read them all back-to-back like I wanted but LET'S GOO
He said "please" shut up! Lu's going soft on Jisoo it's starting; I can feel it in mah bones. Side note I really like how much pride Luhan has for his camp though real talk [actually how all of them do, but let's talk about Luhan since I mostly don't//shot] and how quick he is to get competitive - that I can relate to. Though I do admit we don't know much on Luhan to really judge his character compared to Jisoo; I'll forward to future chapters for that c:
OH DUDE WAIT JISOO IS THE SMACK-TALKER THIS IS GREAT! Real talk I always found it the hardest to be the "head" of the team during the games though so... but eyy, the results are not that bad. It wasn't an all-kill /claps/
Fast forward to the end and like yees more scenes with Luhan and Jisoo!! If memory serves me right we don't have a lot with the two; they're always scattered and short but with how much Jisoo has started to really /see/ Luhan after what the girls said, I expect more c: Which also brings up something I've wanted to say; is that I like how quick and smack-in-the-face Jisoo's conflicted attraction to Luhan is. I don't know if it's intended, or it's probably just how I read romcom to begin with lol, but the simple fact that all Jisoo really needed was just one comment from her friends about Luhan and suddenly she's noticing these little things. Things that she may or may not have noticed before but now reading more into them. Yes. And Luhan lmao he's conflicted too so much yes.

And now I am done! o7 Thoroughly enjoyed these chapters and looking forward to the next!
oddlittleromeo
#3
Chapter 22: I cry little Hyuk so proud ;A; BUT BAEkhyun would though!! He really is a sneaky peanut. I had typed sticky hmm, maybe he's sticky not sneaky?? lmao
THE GIRLS ARE HERE YEESS FRIENDSS! I'm ready! loll of course we gotta get the crew in on this like I'm excited for Baekhyun and I don't know why - jk I do but shh. Also Minseok really looks out for Luhan, ya know? If it weren't for him most of the time Luhan would probably be awkwardly alone? With his attitude and all. Ahh friends. I CHOKED WHEN MINHEE MENTIONed Minseok as a God like YAS! I also agree xD oh dude i feel it is this were the rom begins??
I don't know if you've noticed but I'm commenting on everything that points out to me but like I'm too lost in reading lol First Baekhyun with his marvelous question, and then the dip into Jisoo's school life but that quick recovery from Luhan?? I'm feeling this. The rom is forming and I'm ready and wow Luhan did surprise me because he was actually paying attention.
BAEKHYUN, HONEY! SOMEONE GIVE THE BOY A MATCHING BRACELET! STAT! I love Baekhyun and his dialogues ;A; Have I told you that? I feel like I have but I also feel like I gotta say it again.
The wrap up to this chapter is so nice. We see the difference but similarities between Jisoo's sets of friends and I think that's really nice to know/see.

I usually don't comment back-to-back but I just gotta with this story. With that I'm now off to the next chapter! Weeee!
oddlittleromeo
#4
Chapter 21: When Jisoo described Luhan and Minseok discussing as an old married couple; that's when I really saw the scene and took a two minute break because of laughter lol Her imagination is so simple yet so relatable.
Luhan that sneaky, salty little peanut. I agree with Jisoo he's planning something but wHAT? At the very least Taekwoon is there to help a girl out ;-; I feel for Minseok though; he didn't get to get his team that he wanted.
Every scene with Taekwoon and Jisoo is adorable like he's so protective of her that he legit doesn't even noticed until she points it out lol
Baekhyun and his over-excitement like ahskgl but yo it seems like he felt nothing... i don't know with that peanut, he's also sneaky :p but they won wooo \o/

off to the next chapter!!
dialogue
#5
Chapter 21: Taekwoon is a great protective brother every girls want for:(
oddlittleromeo
#6
Chapter 20: Not gunna lie but the minute Jisoo joined the club I knew she was going to have to "cross-dress" but at the same time I'm excited for it xD Chaos ensured. Also the fact that Hongbin was the girl last year is like icing to a cake lol And then we got Baekhyun over here all "yes put. Jisoo. in. a. dress. and. wig. LET'S GO" like man. Just one line from Baekhyun and I am content lmao And as weird as it is I feel like Baekhyun would be the type to accidentally reveal Jisoo to someone else and him or accidentally reveal her to him, if that makes sense :thinking:

ALRIGHT MINSEOK WOOT! I knew you were a good guy; seeing the potential of our Jisoo ;-; Those three would make a fabulous team and I will fite Luhan if he drags Jisoo to his team >:| despite this being a romcom lol i'm sorry I actually forget it is because it's so lighthearted thus far - which is gRREAT [I could use some lightheartedness right now ahah...]! That rom is gunna creep up on us, I feel it. I will await it. /anticipates/

/shies(?) away/ I'm sorry if my comment is long. I tend to just type what I feel, no backspacing here c:
oddlittleromeo
#7
Chapter 19: Silent reader coming through xD No really though, I started reading one night when searching for comedies but then life happened. Just recently picked it back up and LOVING IT! This is the comedy I've been craving to read, thank you ;-;
I love Jisoo's character and how such a weirdo she is but like good weirdo. I relate to her thought process a lot lol And the camp! Every single one of them are goobers! Especially Baek! OMG that scene in the cafe where it became chaos because of the clubs and Baekhyun runs on the lunch benches! I'm not lying when I say I've been thinking about that at least once a day. And every time I'm left with a smile.
I love all the characters and everything they all bring. Your comedy is gold for me!
onto recent ch...

Not gunna lie - I thought Minseok would be the first since the beginning but then once Leo was introduced I was like: "him" Lo and behold, it is lol Unless Minseok somehow already knows. He seems like a sneaky lil observant peanut. But dude it's out now! I feel like this is just the beginning of the story, or more like the end of the beginning and now we're getting to the core. I am ready for the domino effect! But at the same time scared of the reactions from the others D: Not many of the guys are close enough to Jisoo for them to be okay with...
Baekhyun calling Leo daddy is probably the next best thing lmao I love Baek; he's just a goober.

I can't wait to see how Leo and Jisoo are gunna go about this now. It's gunna be great xD
inspirits2710
#8
Chapter 16: This story is so funny and interesting. Keep it up!
Kim_Taemi
#9
Chapter 12: nooooooo!!!

whyyy, and it was just getting good!!