They came in the morning

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Byun Baekhyun, March 28th 6:22

Have you ever felt hunted? Like someone is watching your every step, hiding, waiting? Do you ever hear footsteps approaching but when you look around, you're alone? If you have then you'll understand how I feel. Only, I know someone's there. I know someone's watching me. It started a few weeks ago. The following. I was on my way home from a friend's house. That's when I felt it. Someone was watching me. I didn't know where they were watching me from but they were. That's about the same time all these strange things started. The first time was at home. I remember it vividly.

The TV was on. A game show was playing. Some idol whose name I can't remember had just finished scoring his team the winning goal when suddenly, it was as if the power had been cut off. Except, it wasn't. The only thing that went out was the lights. The TV was still on, the laptop on the coffee table was still charging. At first I thought that the bulb had just gone out but when I went to the storage closet, the bulb in the hallway was also out. It seemed suspicious so I checked the other rooms and sure enough, the lights were out there as well. The only possible explanation was that there was an electrical issue. That is, until they suddenly came back on.

That was the first time. There have, of course, been other times but that's the one I remember best. It wasn't long after that when I noticed Them. I keep telling myself that I'm just being paranoid. That this is all in my head but the fact is, it's not. It's not in my head. It's quite real and it's terrifying me. It feels like they're coming for me. Of course, that would be ridiculous. Wouldn't it?
Someone's at my door. I don't want to open it. It could be Them. The knocks are getting louder. They might break down the door. Although, that might be the plan.
They're here! They're inside! They're coming for me! They're

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Hey everyone, I'm considering making a sequel to this soon... would like to hear everyone's thoughts on that before I decide so please speak up if you want it :)

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vampwrrr
#1
Chapter 25: Dude! This is easily the best and most sinister Lucky One story that I have ever read. I wholeheartedly support a sequel!
strvwberri
#2
Chapter 25: Yooooo I was away from aff for a while but I finally got back to reading my subscriptions and omg!! This story is amazing!!! it’s so unique and the writing style is so different, the ending was amazing well not for baek’s sake lmao, I was totally not expecting that! I loved it sm <3
Yaone_L #3
Chapter 25: Wow. Great mamaau story. Loves the writing style. It's very refreshing to read like a diary.
Softballgrl13811 #4
Chapter 25: Oh my heart dropped as soon as I saw "day one". Such a great story omg! Thank you for making it come to life!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I am sad that they are stuck in the endless loop. But hopefully they will break out eventually.
Softballgrl13811 #5
Chapter 24: Oh my god!!!!! Noooooooooo!!!! The poor babies!!! Wow.. multiple times and yet their families still have no idea! I want to cry for their suffering and it is only going to start again! Oh man I am dying to know what will happen next and if something will change for them. ♡♡♡♡♡♡
Softballgrl13811 #6
Chapter 23: Oh no!!!!! It is starting all over.. hopefully it is one of the boys just keeping an eye on baek. Oh my heart breaks for them right now!!! Can't wait to find out how things are going to go down =) just wanted to say thanks for writing such an awesome story. I love it when someone can bring such an idea to life and spin it so creatively. Don't change!!!! You are AWESOME!!! ♡♡♡♡♡ (Everyone needs a little love and encouragement every so often)
Philosophies
#7
Chapter 1: WELL THAT WAS CREEPY
Philosophies
#8
The description of this is really cool!
Softballgrl13811 #9
Chapter 21: But.. but... Chen and lay?! Did they make it? Will they all see each other again? So many questions!!!!!!!! I hope there are some answers next time... maybe just one? Please? =)