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Dead End
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Everyone is frozen until there is a terrifying tearing noise and the figure stumbles awkwardly backward with a dolphin shriek escaping its lips. Starling everyone except for Sohee, who has seen the daunting ghost's face, especially the stubby nose.

Now she rushes brightly beaming to the currently stuck interrupter. Helping her to unravel her ripped nightwear that unfortunately got hooked on the small window escape. “I’m sorry, have we woken you up?”

Chorong is still in a daze, her eyes puffy and small. Thankful for the help, as her sleepy self still tries to wrap her mind around what may have caused the sudden tug. “What are you guys doing?” She mumbles, her voice husky from sleep deprivation. Despite her annoyance, she is also of course curious. Unsurprisingly everyone would feel a little miffed when woken up so abruptly.

“Apparently Krystal ran away, she got a call, and that’s all we know. According to Sulli she acted weirdly before, so they are concerned about her health,” she quickly shares the few facts she knows on her own. Before grinningly finally freeing her friend's pajamas from its misery.

“Why?” Suddenly alert and sounding more awake as Chorong’s mum-mode must have kicked in. It's fascinating to see how a single piece of information not only changed her attitude but also posture. As her body instantly strains up and her face tenses.

“She said, she would prefer to be dead,” explains Sulli now as she is the only one who has witnessed it all. Chorongs brows furrow worryingly.

“Kai and I wanted to apologize, so we asked Irene to give us a moment of privacy. But she was acting so strangely and mumbled something about her sister, and suddenly she runs off and apparently into Hoya, who was on the way to -" she halts a moment but then confidently continues, "ah, the bathroom."

"We don't have the time to discuss this all now," Irene urges. The worry almost drips from her voice and is written all over her face.

"She is right, we can talk as we go," Sohee urges. Since she also worries about the noises they have made and who will find them. Hurriedly they take the long corridor, as Chorong recalls to have heard footsteps over there before the group coaxed her out of her perfectly warm and comfy bed. There is only one way to go from there.

"I shouldn't have brought Kai along on this trip," for a moment Sulli almost sounds beaten. After all, Krystal has been a year long friend to her as well.

“Yeah might have been better you didn’t,” Chorong agrees, whispering. For a second she searches for word of comfort, but she never speaks them out loud. As Sulli has quickly shaken off what ever guilt she may have felt, and now takes back the lead on the tiny group. To Chorong's dismay, this meant to sneak out of the front gate.

Luckily Chorong doesn't notice it, as in this very moment Hoya distracts her. "Hasn't Hani woken up too?" She could hear the seriousness in his voice despite him trying to keep it to a bare whisper. It almost hurts her to crush his hopes as she has to shake her head, especially because she knows it is a lie. Secretly Chorong is glad that she can't see the disappointment on his face. As even she, who has been distracted and flinching away from every moving shadow, has noticed the glances over his shoulders. Hoping against hope the woman of his desire would appear.

Chorong is a really bad liar, well unfazed, but she still stiffens when she does. Luckily Hoya couldn't tell, but Sohee does. Particularly because she also knows the truth, and is close enough to have overheard their conversation. She needs to bite her lips to prevent herself from chuckling. Not because she doesn't feel bad for Hoya, of course, she does. No one knows better how painful an unfulfilled longing can be then her. It's because even without seeing it right now she can picture the look on Chorong's face too well. The stealthy expression and the twitching of her nose. Sohee is also the only one who knows the sheer horror the view in front of them must be to her. As everything that lays beyond the gate is wrapped in arcane black that swallows any silhouettes, except what lies just a steep ahead of them.

Chorong isn’t fond of anything frightening, and there are a lot of potential dangerous and scary things that can lurk in the dark. Knowing her friend's fears, Sohee takes her hand into hers. 

“She must be nuts; I wouldn’t even go there if it were day.” Chorong whispers. It makes Sohee chuckle a little, and she squeezes her hand a little tighter. “Are you sure she went this way?” She feels her friend slowing down in her pace as she asks words that Sohee has to consider thoughtfully. Simply because she too has difficulties picturing Krystal running off into the w

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 8: This was a beautiful story! It reminded me a bit of the Maze Runner concept, but different still. I felt so bad for Hoya, especially, and was sad to see people die, but at the same time, it made sense and was satisfying. I really liked the way you ended it, too. It was a nice close to a good story♡.
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 4: Oh my...This just turned scary! I hope it will turn out okay.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Hi, there! I was wondering if you could possibly take your story off of "non text selectable" momentarily, so I can put your beautiful poster on your entry! Please let me know. Thank you!
-Tigress-
#4
I love your story my dear ♡
-Tigress-
#5
Chapter 8: I won't say this is sad, not again lol. In the horrid way that Sulli deserved her in, there is also the what if and if only, but alas. It is what it is.
I really love what you had added to the end, the bit that I hadn't already read. The line about leaving her most precious thing behind really clues in that all of this is her fantasy and that is... I said I wouldn't say it but I must... that is sad but also it helped her to deal with everything. So then I think that the flashes to the other reality are more like flashes of ACTUAL reality, and her mind is being shocked out of its fantasy momentarily before she allows herself to fell in more. The addition of the pomegranite was inspired! I loved that little tidbit of a play on Hades and Persephone, but also the symbolism of the blood/juice on her fingers. Brilliant.
The end. Those words are sad to read but also I am very very proud of you!!! You completed TWO chaptered stories in just two months! You should be very proud of yourself!!!
-Tigress-
#6
Chapter 7: oh oh and I love that last line. "Sometimes she needs to be miserable". That is so true and my, it's a beautifully poignant line
-Tigress-
#7
Chapter 7: Ah man. T.T Again with the what if's and if only's!!! >.< But that is so realistic about life in general: what if we did this, if only we didn't do that... but hindsight is 20/20, as they say. Really nice way to show that even though the possibilities will probably haunt me forever hahaha. =D
You know, what we were talking about with the one rule? I think you did that well here. Like there is only one lead, and that is Sohee, and since it's focused so strongly on her it is as if the rest of them are just mentions to get her to her goal. And that's not a bad thing, either: it makes her relly stand out in the midst and show her character as being tired of the world and people in general. Chorong is your exception here and I do feel that you did it that way on purpose because well, her friend is one of the only things still tying her to the world of the living.
Again, the way her mind takes her elsewhere is amazing. I love the way you did that and the way that is pieces together the alternate story as well as showing a deeper glimpse into her character.
-Tigress-
#8
Chapter 6: Oh goodness this was so sad. Like poor her and all because they grew afraid and ran. But also I like the hinted alternate reality in that it was from the buillding, that's such a neat way to put this. I like Jiyong's involvement in this, too, because it's like he is there for her even though he shouldn't be. Or should he? Like he has always been there for her because she ahs always courted death? That's an interesting thought 0.o
But oh man if ONLY! there are so many if only's in this and it makes me sad!!!! But again, I guess that's the way that suicide and life play out, that's really sad.
-Tigress-
#9
Chapter 5: UGH Krystal *sad* I haven't read your response to my comment last night yet so I don't know if it had anythign to do with her sister as well as the whole boyfriend stealing thing, but regardless it is still sad. I really love the way the flashbacks start here... showing how the trauma around her pulls out the turmoil and remembered trauma within her. That's a really cool way to show that we never get over things, but we instead bury them and pretend to get past them. well done!
The imagery was gorgeous, I could picture Ciel so well and I LOVED the way you pulled in her name with meaning! Very clever to do it that way!!! I like the riddles a lot, especially the final one... and again, my heart kind of broke a little when Sohee knew the answer so easily. T.T The poor girl!