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Dead End
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“Too bad, though... she wasn’t afraid of death, either.”

He steps aside and reveals Krystal. Sohee hears screams from somewhere, probably behind her. Muffled sounds as if someone has trapped her in a bubble, muting everything around her. And time stands still for her. She hears the sound of people storming off, stomping, she wants to join, but she can’t move. Her eyes glued on the red rope that wraps around the petite, pale neck.

Krystal doesn’t move either, and her feet don’t touch the ground. She is just hanging there, like the lanterns, painfully beautiful, from the old oak tree. Her eyes are wide open. Her hands balled into fists, except for her index finger, which is pointing towards the ground. As if she had pointed somewhere else before- well before life escaped her body. out.

Sohee's mouth goes dry, and she has to tear herself away from the view. Her head is spinning, and her legs are shaking. So the rumors are true after all, the door would have never been open if all of them were alive. But does that mean, everything else is true too? Shouldn’t there be a bridge? Shouldn't she be able to bring Krystal back if she stops her from crossing it?

As if he has read her mind, he shatters her hope with a firm, "No,” before adding softer, “you can't. She has already reached the other side..." And Sohee's vision blurs, and black spots grow.

She is used to this feeling. The sense of suffocating. Hands wrapped around her neck. Fingertips that pierce into the soft skin. Her own cries are smothered. She tries to kick, and she tries to hit. To no use, as she can't move. ”Please, please daddy, stop.” She wants to say, she wants to cry, but only wheezes and rattle escape. There is a soft whisper, and she almost believes in feeling a soft touch wiping off her tears. But it can’t be, as it’s only the drunken stranger -she happened to share some genes with- in front of her. His yells are too loud to hear anything else. Not even her thoughts, she can’t focus as blackness takes over.

“SOHEE!”

She snaps out of it as someone grabs her arm and roughly pulls her along. She doesn’t expect them to catch up with the others so fast, but their path is blocked by a beautiful sculpture, a mixture of a lioness and eagle and human with a serpent tail: it's called a sphinx, she recalls quickly. As she draws closer, she is astonished by the realistic details of the beauty. The face of the creature looks so alive. She has a big stubby nose, and perfect winged eyeliner, that frame ice blue eyes that glare at the late approaches. Wait, what?! She has never in her life expected to ever have an encounter with a sphinx, let alone one that has too sharp claws and teeth to her liking.

The lips of the creature suddenly start to move and turn upwards to a joyful yet slightly chilling smile. A motion that makes all five of them flinch backward a few steps. The stone figure blinks, and with it, the stone seems to crack, and beyond the surface is porcelain skin. The sphinx shakes her powerful body, stripping off all the remains and debris. Brocken rocks and dust eddy through the air and become deadly missiles. It’s then when they see the dead body beneath her paws.

“What joyful night it seems like I get to play some more.” The beast smiles and appears to sniff in the air as if to scan the group.

“Oh, my,” Chorong tries to swallow the lump in as it makes it difficult to breathe. “You’re impressive and beautiful…” the oldest finally blurts out awkwardly.

If there is one unspoken rule people should take to heart, then that one is that women always should be supportive and complementing of another. The world is harsh enough on beauty standards, and if stony or not, half beast or not, the woman face truly is beautiful, and Sohee is impressed that despite the paws she somehow seems to have managed to do her make up. And yes she is aware of how ridiculous this may sound, but honestly, she has been deeply impressed, as someone who manages to look like a panda when trying to do smoky eyes herself.

Obviously, Chorong hasn’t done to wrong with her words, as the beast that seems too long for an attack sits back down, smiling almost amiable. “Oh thank you, some disturbers with manners as it seems. I like you. So I won’t kill you right away, and when I do, I will make sure to make it short and painless.”

“Very kind of you …” Chorong probably should have felt grateful for that offer, but she more likely felt like peeing herself right now. Especially when the smell of blood hit her nostrils, and she could almost taste the metallic flavor on her tongue. Accidentally her eyes traveled down to her giant paw and the blood drunken claws. Sohee follows Chorongs gaze, and her stomach turns when she realizes the twisted upper body and the missing body parts. She couldn’t help it, it was too much for her to take in, and throwing up is no longer an option but something that just happens out of reflex.

At least she could turn around and doesn’t hits one of her com

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 8: This was a beautiful story! It reminded me a bit of the Maze Runner concept, but different still. I felt so bad for Hoya, especially, and was sad to see people die, but at the same time, it made sense and was satisfying. I really liked the way you ended it, too. It was a nice close to a good story♡.
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 4: Oh my...This just turned scary! I hope it will turn out okay.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Hi, there! I was wondering if you could possibly take your story off of "non text selectable" momentarily, so I can put your beautiful poster on your entry! Please let me know. Thank you!
-Tigress-
#4
I love your story my dear ♡
-Tigress-
#5
Chapter 8: I won't say this is sad, not again lol. In the horrid way that Sulli deserved her in, there is also the what if and if only, but alas. It is what it is.
I really love what you had added to the end, the bit that I hadn't already read. The line about leaving her most precious thing behind really clues in that all of this is her fantasy and that is... I said I wouldn't say it but I must... that is sad but also it helped her to deal with everything. So then I think that the flashes to the other reality are more like flashes of ACTUAL reality, and her mind is being shocked out of its fantasy momentarily before she allows herself to fell in more. The addition of the pomegranite was inspired! I loved that little tidbit of a play on Hades and Persephone, but also the symbolism of the blood/juice on her fingers. Brilliant.
The end. Those words are sad to read but also I am very very proud of you!!! You completed TWO chaptered stories in just two months! You should be very proud of yourself!!!
-Tigress-
#6
Chapter 7: oh oh and I love that last line. "Sometimes she needs to be miserable". That is so true and my, it's a beautifully poignant line
-Tigress-
#7
Chapter 7: Ah man. T.T Again with the what if's and if only's!!! >.< But that is so realistic about life in general: what if we did this, if only we didn't do that... but hindsight is 20/20, as they say. Really nice way to show that even though the possibilities will probably haunt me forever hahaha. =D
You know, what we were talking about with the one rule? I think you did that well here. Like there is only one lead, and that is Sohee, and since it's focused so strongly on her it is as if the rest of them are just mentions to get her to her goal. And that's not a bad thing, either: it makes her relly stand out in the midst and show her character as being tired of the world and people in general. Chorong is your exception here and I do feel that you did it that way on purpose because well, her friend is one of the only things still tying her to the world of the living.
Again, the way her mind takes her elsewhere is amazing. I love the way you did that and the way that is pieces together the alternate story as well as showing a deeper glimpse into her character.
-Tigress-
#8
Chapter 6: Oh goodness this was so sad. Like poor her and all because they grew afraid and ran. But also I like the hinted alternate reality in that it was from the buillding, that's such a neat way to put this. I like Jiyong's involvement in this, too, because it's like he is there for her even though he shouldn't be. Or should he? Like he has always been there for her because she ahs always courted death? That's an interesting thought 0.o
But oh man if ONLY! there are so many if only's in this and it makes me sad!!!! But again, I guess that's the way that suicide and life play out, that's really sad.
-Tigress-
#9
Chapter 5: UGH Krystal *sad* I haven't read your response to my comment last night yet so I don't know if it had anythign to do with her sister as well as the whole boyfriend stealing thing, but regardless it is still sad. I really love the way the flashbacks start here... showing how the trauma around her pulls out the turmoil and remembered trauma within her. That's a really cool way to show that we never get over things, but we instead bury them and pretend to get past them. well done!
The imagery was gorgeous, I could picture Ciel so well and I LOVED the way you pulled in her name with meaning! Very clever to do it that way!!! I like the riddles a lot, especially the final one... and again, my heart kind of broke a little when Sohee knew the answer so easily. T.T The poor girl!