Seven

Dead End
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The three girls stare at each other in sheer horror. The friendly Minotaur seems less shaken, she couldn’t blame him, he doesn’t know the heroic man who just vanished. The monster carries them with ease away from the dangerous stone ball who got stuck and stops at the pit. They all know the horrible truth that lay beneath it - Irene - but none of them bring it up. It’s all to fresh to disturbing, and it’s easier to ignore the truth.

“If you just wouldn't have run away from me, this would have never happened!” The half bull speaks, and this time as he doesn’t have to run anymore, he doesn’t sound as loud. He has a rather pleasant voice to listen to, Sohee notes, despite the undeniable distraught that coats his words. “We rarely have guests here!" He complains. The remorse is already forgotten; she is almost jealous of the simple and easy mind of the beast.

“What’s your Name?” Sohee asks as he seems friendly and quite enjoys chatting with the girls. 

“Mino,” he answers promptly and proudly as if she is supposed to know his name. But the conversation ends with that. None of the three girls are in the mood for a conversation. 

Now that they are safe, they all start to process the happenings. It’s hard to swallow, let alone understand.  Slowly each of them come to terms that maybe the stranger is right and only one of them would make it out alive. She feels the gazes they exchange with each other. As for now, they were friends, but would that stay this way if someone could help herself?

Chorong, who has been crying for the loss of Hoya, wipes her tears dry. But no one says another word. Not even when their host gently puts them down. Sohee manages to bow, and Chorong follows after, but Sulli doesn’t. It’s not that she doesn’t have manners, but her attention has fallen on something completely different.

They were back at the beginning of the labyrinth. The same lagoon they have seen at the start of the adventure, but from above Sulli has saw something she hadn't noticed before. She now can see perfectly the beautiful verawood bridge that connects one shore with the other. But more important, there is a spring in the middle of the lake, and she knows instantly what this meant. All her life she has read legends about it, the spring of youth!

Even though it is supposedly the same lake they have seen before, it looks very different to Sohee now. White lotus flower bloom, yellow petals and flower arrangements floating around. But most enchanting are the wooden boats, with letters she has never seen written on the screen of the paper, lit by a candle behind the sheets. Almost magically as if affected by the tides they seem to follow the pull of the moon following up the stream further and further away until they vanish and other boats pass by. It’s this mysterious time when the moon is about to set, and the sun would soon rise. The air is full of secrets and tension and the sky changes from the darkest black of the night to softest pastel colors.  

The bridge leads to a beautiful tiny island with a lotus tree in the middle of the water, and as soon Sulli has ground underneath her

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 8: This was a beautiful story! It reminded me a bit of the Maze Runner concept, but different still. I felt so bad for Hoya, especially, and was sad to see people die, but at the same time, it made sense and was satisfying. I really liked the way you ended it, too. It was a nice close to a good story♡.
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 4: Oh my...This just turned scary! I hope it will turn out okay.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Hi, there! I was wondering if you could possibly take your story off of "non text selectable" momentarily, so I can put your beautiful poster on your entry! Please let me know. Thank you!
-Tigress-
#4
I love your story my dear ♡
-Tigress-
#5
Chapter 8: I won't say this is sad, not again lol. In the horrid way that Sulli deserved her in, there is also the what if and if only, but alas. It is what it is.
I really love what you had added to the end, the bit that I hadn't already read. The line about leaving her most precious thing behind really clues in that all of this is her fantasy and that is... I said I wouldn't say it but I must... that is sad but also it helped her to deal with everything. So then I think that the flashes to the other reality are more like flashes of ACTUAL reality, and her mind is being shocked out of its fantasy momentarily before she allows herself to fell in more. The addition of the pomegranite was inspired! I loved that little tidbit of a play on Hades and Persephone, but also the symbolism of the blood/juice on her fingers. Brilliant.
The end. Those words are sad to read but also I am very very proud of you!!! You completed TWO chaptered stories in just two months! You should be very proud of yourself!!!
-Tigress-
#6
Chapter 7: oh oh and I love that last line. "Sometimes she needs to be miserable". That is so true and my, it's a beautifully poignant line
-Tigress-
#7
Chapter 7: Ah man. T.T Again with the what if's and if only's!!! >.< But that is so realistic about life in general: what if we did this, if only we didn't do that... but hindsight is 20/20, as they say. Really nice way to show that even though the possibilities will probably haunt me forever hahaha. =D
You know, what we were talking about with the one rule? I think you did that well here. Like there is only one lead, and that is Sohee, and since it's focused so strongly on her it is as if the rest of them are just mentions to get her to her goal. And that's not a bad thing, either: it makes her relly stand out in the midst and show her character as being tired of the world and people in general. Chorong is your exception here and I do feel that you did it that way on purpose because well, her friend is one of the only things still tying her to the world of the living.
Again, the way her mind takes her elsewhere is amazing. I love the way you did that and the way that is pieces together the alternate story as well as showing a deeper glimpse into her character.
-Tigress-
#8
Chapter 6: Oh goodness this was so sad. Like poor her and all because they grew afraid and ran. But also I like the hinted alternate reality in that it was from the buillding, that's such a neat way to put this. I like Jiyong's involvement in this, too, because it's like he is there for her even though he shouldn't be. Or should he? Like he has always been there for her because she ahs always courted death? That's an interesting thought 0.o
But oh man if ONLY! there are so many if only's in this and it makes me sad!!!! But again, I guess that's the way that suicide and life play out, that's really sad.
-Tigress-
#9
Chapter 5: UGH Krystal *sad* I haven't read your response to my comment last night yet so I don't know if it had anythign to do with her sister as well as the whole boyfriend stealing thing, but regardless it is still sad. I really love the way the flashbacks start here... showing how the trauma around her pulls out the turmoil and remembered trauma within her. That's a really cool way to show that we never get over things, but we instead bury them and pretend to get past them. well done!
The imagery was gorgeous, I could picture Ciel so well and I LOVED the way you pulled in her name with meaning! Very clever to do it that way!!! I like the riddles a lot, especially the final one... and again, my heart kind of broke a little when Sohee knew the answer so easily. T.T The poor girl!