Chapter 1: I remember this, and I still love that damn store scene where Eric wants to buy the best test.
Ah... Eric is so over protective, it's adorable
And I had actualky forgotten that Andy was too drunk to remember he had slept with Jinnie
And I forgot the baby was like shot out of Jinnie's nose, so cute
Chapter 1: ...what a beautiful dream your friend had. I really love Jinnie's character in this one. I like his cute protectiveness and his desire to shower Andy with gifts. Even I cant help but liking the way he tries so hard to shut his mouth up about the whole baby's father business. It's like seeing a small kid trying to hide the fact that he steal the cookie jar (tho making smone pregnant is definitely a whole different case than a mere cookie jar stealing). And the moment Eric lands punches on Jinnie and generally roughhousing the poor man, I feel like sending a roundhouse kick at him cz DAMN U ERIC LISTEN TO HIM FIRST AND NO ONE HURTS MY JINNIE!!!! And Jinnie's breakdown, saying that it's hurt to be unwanted, my heart cracks into pieces at that cz I cant help but thinking back at his moments of depression. And thanks for the happy ending, so soothing n comforting like scoops of ice cream after an angst. Good to know that the whole Andy-doesnt-want-me is only Jinnie's fear.
Thanks for writing this one!
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