A New Beginning [Hiatus]

Description

Two mysterious children appearing out of nowhere. Strange dreams. New case? The good and bad thing is the something is wrong with the lives they are living but what? What does the dreams and the two children has to do with their lives? Sequal or pre-qual to Pi Li MIT: Revenge

Foreword

Li Xiao Xing (Mrs. Zhan)- 26 years old. Been married for 3 months.

Has master and bachelor degree for nursing and doctor for children.

 

Zhan Shi De- 27 years old. Been married also for 3 month.

Taking over his father, Dr. James as a detective.

 

Tao Mei Ren (Miss Cherry)- Officially the principal of Sheng Ying University.

 

Huang Hui Hong (747)- 26 years old.

MIT member and his job is his father foot massage business.

 

Qian Fu Hao- 27 years old. MIT member and his job not known but is

still well-known of his ways about his ‘precious one’

Other characters are still a mystery and is to come shortly.

 


 

Preview of the first chapter and may be second chapter…

‘Mommy! Don’t leave! Mommy!’ shouted a little girl about 6 years old with brown hair

‘I’m sorry, please understand me, I need sometime alone and my work is across the country. Please understand me.’ said a lady with long brown hair

“What’s your name?” Li Xiao Xing ask

“My sister.” a boy said

“Miss Cherry, 007, 747, and 187 second floor the girl is there.” Li Xiao Xing said through her ear piece.

“Li Xiao Xing, it’s a big responsibility.” Zhan Shi De said

“I know. I can handle it.” Li Xiao Xing said

“Don’t leave. Please, my mom she died while traveling.” the girl said

“Don’t worry. You’ll be protected.” Li Xiao Xing said

“LI XIAO XING!” Zhan She Di shouted

“NOOO!” the little girl shouted and cried unto the floor clutching unto a body.


 

Hope you all will support me on this story as like last time and please wait for the first chapter! ^O^ 

Please subscribe and comment and please no silent reader. I love to hear everyone's opinion so I could

change my writing ways.

 

Thank you!

 

 

 

 

 

 

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kpoplover123098
#1
Chapter 8: Omg got into ur story from fanficyion.net love it can't wait for ur next update XDD
dramaddict
#2
YESSSS! so so so glad you decided to continue this story!
This chapter was not boring at all, well a bit confusing but i think I will understand as the mystery unravels.
Good Luck with the rest of this fanfic and I look forward to your future updates!
kambelin #3
good storie keep it up!!!!!!!!11
dramaddict
#4
sad to hear you are not gonna continue this :(
i was looking forward to more suspense and GuiLun XD
and the answers to the whole mystery behind the kids...
it seemed like the kids were 007 and TMX's but from the future...
hope you find new inspiration though
don't worry it happens a lot, the writer's block thing... I am kinda in the middle of one myself.... (well its the fact that I am so busy with school and all... but just wait, when summer comes... there is no stopping me!)
Sorry for babbling XD and GOOD LUCK with your future fanfics~
Sakurahimeno
#5
@CupcakesPrincess Thanks! Good-luck with your own
story! ^o^
FlamingFrog
#6
O.o? what's gonna happen to Tian Mo Xing and Yu Len?
Update soon! :D
P.S: I'm glad you're back XD <3
dramaddict
#7
Whats gonna happen to them? please update soon~
baobaoz
#8
please update soon! love this!
dramaddict
#9
Its really good~<br />
update soon i want to know more about the children<br />
i wish there were more romance between 007 and TMX though
azure_bliss
#10
The children are like what? younger than me?<br />
And they are doing THIS? WOW! What parents!!!<br />
I'm sorry if I hurt you but.....<br />
there is no 'Zhan Xiao Xing', they're chinese, not american or japanese, but Mrs Zhan can be use, in chinese Mrs Zhan will be pronounce as 'Zhan Tai Tai'<br />
<br />
Okay? :) <br />
Awesome story!!!!