Very Important You

Description

I was looking around in amazement and suddenly I fall on the floor *Did I just hit a wall? Who would build a wall in the middle of the way? But why isn’t it feel like a wall?*  And suddenly a hand reach out for me. *I think it’s not a wall, I bump into someone. How careless I am* I take the hand without looking and that person pull me up on my feet again. “Thank you and I am so sorry,” I then beam at him. I was shock! *OMG! Is that him? Is that really him?!*  

 

*Her gaze. Her voice. Her everything. She’s a total stranger but why did my heart beat so fast till now. What is this undefined feeling*

 

Foreword

Note: 

This is my first ever fanfic and it takes me quite sometimes to make up my mind whether to publish it or not. I always found it's hard to replace the '....' in a fanfic with my own name. So I decided to use 'I' instead of 'You' or '.....', I hope it works, but if it doesn't do let me know please ^^ 

Do leave comments or any critics so that I'll be able to improve my writing, since I'm still an amateur *obviously*

Sorry for any grammar mistakes *I know I made a lot of it* cause English is not my first language

This is based on my wild imagination as a fan, I believe no plagiarized ^^ 

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Gali70
#1
i really like this story so far good luck on getting more subscribers<br />