Allegro: Young Blood and Electric Blue Skies

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[Allegro: Young Blood and Electric Blue Skies]

Some women are lost in the fire.
Some women are built from it.
- Michelle K.

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Wonwoo does not promise for a better tomorrow, because he doesn't make promises that he can't fulfill. He doesn't easily fall for someone since he can't understand love. For him, the form of love he is able to grasp is when he traces his fingers along hipbones and soft skins of girls who find comfort under his touch; they said his touch makes them feel alive.

He never believes in them, because they are all girls that are reckless with their words, and love spills out of their mouths like a broken song that is too repetitive to be listened by his tired ears.

Then, he stumbles over her. He stops to look at her.

Seulgi, in her wholeness and rawness, movements as fluid as water and smooth as silk can, burns brilliantly.

More than the sun, more than anyone can be, as portruding bones on her back stick out like a pair of wings and blades, ready to break out from her body.

 

 

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(All characters are destined to themselves, and I merely use their names and appearances to match my story, as all the traits of my characters here are made by me and belong to me. I will not tolerate any form of plagiarism, and I won't think twice to report your story if you do so.)

(credits for the information of this licencing system from Yeoniebb42 as I saw it in her story. Check it out, her stories are amazing.) 

 

 


 

 

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Author's note:

HIIII So here is another story of mine! Subscribers are loved and comments are deeply welcomed as it will mean the world to me! Upvotes are deeply appreciated also if you love this story >.<

Other stories of mine:

pouring sunlight into fisted palms (Joy/Mingyu)

chlorine kisses and dead lips (Wonwoo/Seulgi) 

toska: retributions of linoleum souls (Wonwoo/Seulgi)

The Constellation of Unclassified Stars (Krystal/Seulgi/Wendy/Wonwoo/Mingyu/Seokmin) (friendship!)

Of Broken Mixtapes and Hazy Sketchings (Wonwoo/Seulgi)

of wasted breaths and slipping fingers (a collection of friendship oneshots)

remake the world with me, my dear  (Wonwoo/Seulgi oneshot collection)

 
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prod_GLEE
#1
Chapter 9: i came looking through my subscription list after years of being absent from this site and then i saw the title i just gotta say, omg, my english failed me,,, i understand the words in the subtitle, but again, only on the surface level, like, the title is just really unique and you barely come across one as such in AFF.
i saw that you have requested reviews on a lot of shops before, and i checked out some and most only gave you high scores/ positives, so i was so sure i'm in for some good stuff.
i read the first portion of the first chapter and dare i say, the writing style is really, really calm and fluid as much as i've read. while it is just poetic and beautiful the way it is, i feel like the narration is closer to that of a diary, or a kind of journal, at worst, i would compare it to a very well-thought out academic essay, so in other words, i quickly find myself better off skipping over to the last chapter, because my impatient self just wanna know what happens at last.
then i went to the last chapter, and boy, i read that there are a handful of characters and they all got a little something for their conclusions and i told myself, oof, so that's what happens when you read the very last chapter of a story, you don't feel anything.
then i told myself, welp, there's an explanation chapter, why not go see it.
and i kinda have a gist of the story we have here! just from your explanation alone, this is like an emotion journey that wonwoo went through, and he found someone he loved wholeheartedly and changed for the better, or, his good sides slowly came to the surfaced from them being hidden somewhere inside of him before. and like, isn't that just beautiful to know? the message you try to deliver is super positive. from the writing style, i really assumed it was gonna be a melancholic tragic love story, but i guess not, and that's just awesome, because i believe in happy ending supremacy!
i may have not read the story in its entirety and appreciated it the way it so deserves to be, but i can't help leaving a comment here out of appreciation for your writing style, given that i'm a er for action and dialogues, and straight-to-the-point kind of narrative. it clearly shows that you have taken a lot of time and efforts to craft such a story, and that in itself is admirable.
little_bear
#2
Chapter 9: It's amazing. I'm speechless..anyway i just can say that it really moved my heart
lustal28 #3
Authornim, more mingyu-krystal please :) romance
byunlight #4
First of all, this story is so beautiful. You write this prettily, I cried, smile, laugh while reading this story. There are so many things that I can learn from, to accept; to let go; to forgive. This story not only focus on the romance side but also on friendship, family, deam, youth. Lastly, I really like Wonwoo's character here, he looks like a human being not only a character in a story. I'm sorry this is so long, but reading this story somehow enlighten me in some way. Thank you for making this story, really.
Nananashi #5
Chapter 1: why do you write so pretty i am sobbing
niangniang
#6
Chapter 8: awww even your thank you note is all pretty and touching ; u ; i think youre lovely~
now to answer your question! well i tried to think through this whole story by imagining it as a film but its really hard to choose a favourite scene because there were so many moments that i really liked! the part with irene, seulgi showing her dancing to wonwoo, the setting of his sweet love confession, reuniting with soojung... buuut there is one scene in particular that i can never forget and i always think about it whenever i think of your fic or see the title so it must be my favourite because it obviously stood out a lot to me and thats the moment back in chapter 1 when soojung touched wonwoo's face and said "we could have been beautiful." >3<
wonwoo is so shippable tbh :DD
niangniang
#7
Chapter 7: oh my goodness, i cant believe this story is over ;-; it was honestly such a pleasure to read and this epilogue was really nice! i liked reading about what everyone did after graduation and omgosh, soojung was such a pleasant surprise ouo tbh i didnt really have any expectations for mingyu but i still felt that the strings were all tied nicely and everyone had a happy ending~ im actually most happy about soojung's newfound happiness ^^ and you totally earned yourself an upvote from me!
thank you so much for writing this wonderfully moving story, my darling, youve blown us all away and touched so many hearts ♡ im still looking forward to purchasing this as an original novel~
niangniang
#8
Chapter 6: i always feel the need to time and time again praise you for your writing because i feel like you ought to be constantly reminded of how lovely your writing is, how realistic your characters are and most of all, how soothing your plots are ♡
the scenes with his mother and the way wonwoo was trying to stay strong were so moving and i teared up twice in this chapter ;-; i also want to add that taemin apologising was a really great touch and i felt really proud of the way wonwoo handled it c: and yes, seulgi, wonwoo ft glasses is a handsome wonwoo (;
niangniang
#9
Chapter 5: oh wow, what an emotional rollercoaster! the way you pour out their emotions, the way wonwoo sees life in such detail, the way seulgi comforts so beautifully... even the settings were described so vividly! it was nice returning to read this amazing story and i think it was even better than i remembered :3 i felt as though i was tucked comfortably on a warm sofa, turning the pages of this amazing novel-like fanfic rather than simply reading it from my phone. seriously, i need to see this published! you delve into feelings and life and seasons and literally everything in such wondrous detail and i would be proud to have your work on my bookshelf ^^

btw are you planning to enter nanowrimo this year? im sure youd succeed :D
SeulgiBaer
#10
Chapter 9: honestly the most interesting story i've read in a long time. from the way you portrayed all the characters down to the emotional trajectory of it. it's been a hell of a rollercoaster ride of emotions while reading this, but i loved every single moment of it. it just seems so real to me, y'know? you've made me question the many aspects of love, things i didn't even bother thinking about. i may not know what inspires you, but i know you're one hell of an amazing author and i'm excited to read more of your works. thank you.