First Summer

The Fault In Our Fate
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You came into my life,

and I thought; 'hey,

you know, this could be something'

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April, 2004

 

It was a rather too-sunny-for-his-liking summer day, and Luhan was sulking alone on the bench at the hospital park despite the harsh wind and the sweat rolling down his temple was getting into his nerves ("It's still April for God's sake!"). It was his birthday and instead of celebrating it in a restaurant with his beloved family and close friends, he spent his time in the hospital since the morning because his cousin just had to fall from the second floor of his house and injured his leg pretty badly, which made even his own parents stay at the hospital to look after him. And it was really devastating for Luhan to the point that he had lost all his pity for his cousin. Why can’t you just fall tomorrow, Byun Baekhyun?!?! Not today!!

Yet then he scolded himself for being whiny; he was older than the said cousin after all, he shouldn’t be throwing tantrum. When he was about to sigh, though, someone had beaten him for it. He looked up to see a kid, obviously a lot younger than him, with skimpy figure and fragile looking bony hands. The kid was slowly plopping himself at the other end of the bench, face not really as dark as his own, but still gloomy. He stared blankly at the kid; he always hated anorexic-looking skinny people, especially kids, they look like skeleton. Ew, where are your parents?

“Pretty hyung,” Luhan was pulled back from his staring session when he found that the kid was already staring back at him as well, “why are you looking at me like that?”

… his voice sounded so squea

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cuzimshawol
#1
Chapter 11: AUTHORNIIIIIIMMMMM!!!!!!!!!
YOURE TOO MEAN!!!
GOSH!
IM DYING.
SHT. I LITERALLY CRYING
THEN WHAT??!!!!
HE'S ALIVE??!??
HE'S DEAD??!!!??
YOU KIDDING ME?????
SERIOUSLY?????!!!!!!
I HATE YOU!!!!
IM IN PUBLIC AND IM CRAZY RN
PLEASE!!! MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR EPILOGUE OR WHATEVER YOU CALLED.
i beg youu...
Haaa
Thank you gor bringing this story to us, youre too good!
FIGHTING!
Denifairy #2
Chapter 11: It's 2 in da morning and i'm crying my eyes out!!!!it's just so sweet,sad and beautiful at the same time...good job authornim...keep up da gud work~~always rooting 4 u~~
Toppaa #3
Chapter 11: Aaah such a mean ending! I'm just gonna imagine Luhan survived, for the sake of my poor HunHan-heart! :'( Such a lovely story though <3
KiM_m0jiRi91
#4
Chapter 11: Njiiiiirrrrrr
TEGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Gamao komen lage
Gamao
Gamao
Gamaooooo
/ngambek lali pergi/

















/balik lagi/
/ditendang riders laen/

Deeeeek
Sungguh kejam!
Luhan matek?
Luhan matek?
Sehun hidup?!!!!
Bunuh diri aja lo, Hun!
G guna jugak hidup kl g ada Luhan
Miris tau?
Semiris hati kita yg dipermainkan author ini
/lempar leptop/

Tp Luhan g dijelasin kl matek
Jd kakak anggap Luhan masih hidup
Mungkin koma?
N Sehun harus nunggu Luhan kembali sadar?
Trus Luhan hilang ingatan
/plakk
/jd ala sinetron indo
Wkwkwkkw

Pokoknya Luhan masih hidup TITIK!!
/ngeyel

Okelah
Baibai
/beneran pulang
KiM_m0jiRi91
#5
Chapter 10: Huweeeeee
Tega tega tegaaaaaaa
Gak ikhlas asli kl Luhan beneran nikah sama Irene
I mean, bukannya dia cintrong sama Sehun??
Whai whai whaaaaaaai dia mw nikah sama Irene
-_-
Sehun's gone!!
Should i be sad? Because, , HE IS GONE!!!!!
Should ji be happy? Because Luhan flied(?) away and ruined the wedding??
Oke, rasa2nya pikiran kakak udh blank
/terjun sungai
KiM_m0jiRi91
#6
Chapter 9: Njoooorrr
Br sempet bacaaa
Mereka akhirnua ketemu egen, tapi mana sweet momennya??
/gebrak meja/
Luhan oh Luhan, masa' kamu g bisa baca tatapan mata Seun sih beb?!!!
/toyor
-_-
ZeroKun
#7
Luhan lives or i'll feel very unpleasant about you. i'm threatening you. I dont have a literally weak heart, but mine is broken. Make Luhan live shall you? Y not bother about his wife and upcoming confession? ah? ah;;;? can u.. ? pplease i.i