REVIEW 007

Crystal Tears | chocobanana

REVIEWED BY BlackRosestears

Title: 5/5
Your title is really interesting and catches the interest of people, it is not a common and overused title but unique. When I read it for the first time, I was really curious about the actual story and the meaning behind the title, how did you mean it? Is not some kind of metaphor? So just by the title it already hyped me up to start reading your story. Also it seems to fit the plot, the story overall so I can totally see why you chose it as the title. 

Description: 10/10
The description is well written, it sounds really interesting and grabs the interest of you when you are reading it. There is also a really beautiful message in it that made me fall in love with the plot before even reading the actual story because I just like these kind of stories. The plot sounds really interesting too o you just want to read the story right away. The structure, the overall appearance is good too, it is easy to read and to understand when you read it.

Your beginning is pretty nice, we get some information with good explanations so it is easy to understand everything. We get to know Joonmyun and his life. It is interesting and well written, we see how Joonmyun is a nice guy and tries to befriend Jongin who just seems to be really shy and doesn't want to talk to anyone or work with them. 
Then while during the days, we see Joonmyun and his life, Jongin who just tries to be as quiet as possible we have this difference during the nights when Joonmyun dreams of a guy he knew in the past who had uncommon eyes for an Asian person. It keeps on making the story interesting, makes you addicted for more, to find ou