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Hua Mulan [NEW AUTHOR]
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A single grain of rice can tip the scale. One man may be the difference between victory and defeat.

Mulan's eyes flew open as she heard the thud of a body next to her.

Shocked, she looked over to see the Xiongnu leader lying face down in the dirt, a red patch seeping through the clothes on his back.

Next to him, a figure wiped a sword clean on his clothes.

The figure turned around the face her. She gasped as those dark eyes glanced over at her.

The figure approached her and she subconsciously inched back. 

"Are you injured?" the man asked.

"N-no," she replied, her eyes landing on the wound on his thigh.

The man followed her gaze and frowned as he noted his injury.

He reached for her hand and pulled her up.

"Good. We need to help the injured soldiers."

Mulan nodded, her dry lips. She winced as she saw the blood splattered all over her clothing, on her body and on her face.

The man climbed up onto the roof of a small building.

"I have killed the Xiongnu leader! Surrender now or be killed," he yelled.

A deadly silence. And then -

The soldiers cheered, their war cries ferocious, and chased the Xiongnu tribes away.

The man jumped down from the building and landed near Mulan.

"You did well," he said, before walking off.

 

Mulan wondered off a distance that night, into a forest clearing.

Sighing, she leaned back against a tree trunk.

I killed so many men today. And I didn't even hesitate.

She heard the crunch of sticks breaking beneath a pair of shoes, and she relaxed when she saw that it was only Luhan.

"Hey," he spoke, quietly.

She acknowledge his presence with a nod, for she was too tired to speak.

"I was wondering where you were."

It was silent, other than the soft whisper of wind.

"Are you alright?" he asked, concerned.

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Glimmer01 #1
Also, what do you wanna see happen next?! ^^
Glimmer01 #2
Hey guys, I'm this fic's new coauthor! The original author has done a great job and I can only hope to match up to it! So I'm asking for you guys to comment your opinions on how you want the story to continue here, so I get fresh ideas!
Do you guys want a complete revamp, or to add on to the original chapters, or to leave the original untouched and continue
niangniang
#3
i love how we're both writing about ancient china ouo i was pretty impressed by the foreword alone and im really looking forward to reading this! i see potential~
btw im sure mulan will still look pretty even if shes frowning and happens to have a tan xD
heclgehog
#4
Chapter 1: Yo, I'm writing a Mulan fic with Kris as the lead so I searched Mulan on AFF to see if there were any fics of the story, and literally the only one to pop is yours. So I just wanted to leave you a comment to let you know that even though I won't be posting my story for at least a month, I'm not trying to steal your idea. I even wanted to name it Hua Mulan that way it wasn't just one word, but you already did that too. I feel so awkward now lol. If you feel uncomfortable with my story being so similar to yours, I can change the lead from Kris to Tao and I planned to deviate from both the original ballad and the disney version quite a bit anyway, so I don't think mine would be too much like yours. I just don't want you to feel like you were plagiarized or anything~
Alice101 #5
Chapter 7: I think the 3rd man is Kris and the second man is Tao....
adorable_colours #6
Chapter 6: Your story is just so good it makes me searching for the next buttons and feel like dying when I didn't find one :")) jia you author!!! Amazing story you have here :*
basteng
#7
feeling lucky to encounter with your story. i always adore mulan, but only know the disney version of it, looking forward on how the storyline will go c:
fighting
JDHismine #8
Chapter 3: I adore the plot! But why luhan name is xi luhan? .-. But it's not important anyway.. Keep up the great update! ^^
RaulGull #9
Chapter 2: Pretty good read so far, keep it up!!